The Story of 2 young boys continued!
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Basil was, needless to say, curious. As he walked away from Mitch he felt like he could still see those brilliant hazel eyes gazing imploringly into his. Basil felt the heat rise to his face.
“Gah!” He said, rubbing his cheeks. How embarrassing. Basil had always been an introvert, and spent…[Read more]
Here it is guys, Chapter 3 Part 1! It’s super long because for the first time I have two character’s POVs π Exciting stuff.
This was all very, very messed up. That’s what Basil knew. As he stood looking at the beautiful person in the mirror that was supposed to be him, he felt as though he had just been punched in the gut. Everything he knew had…[Read more]
Hi guys, I’m almost finished with Chapter 3 Part 1 but until then I made a bio for Adam (if you don’t know who that is you can catch up at @karasutheotaku π
Name: Adam
Gender: Male
Parents: Mother: Rhea (Greek titan who mothered the Greek gods) and Father: Kronos (Greek titan of time)
School: Evil-Never
Age: 16
Appearance: Dark brown wavy hair,…[Read more]
Oh and I recently posted a picture I drew of Basil which can be found in the reader gallery π I hope you take a look!
Great bio for Adam! I’ll definitely go check it out right away π
Here it is guys, Chapter 2 Part 3 (the final part for chapter 2!) π
As the line slowly shuffled forward, Basil looked around for Eir. She might not be a friend yet but at least she seemed kind. He spotted her a line over chatting excitedly with a girl in a baby blue nightgown. Someone else obviously didn’t expect to be kidnapped tonight. Eir…[Read more]
Oops I called the nymph a fairy somewhere in there, but I’m sure you knew what I meant π
this is really good! I’m looking forward to seeing the story’s future!
I finished Chapter 2 Part 2 π If you need to catch up, click here > @karasutheotaku
“Darn crazy magic nonsense.” Basil seethed, catching his breath.
“Oh, who are you?” A voice said. Basil turned to see a human girl a couple of feet away from him. He must have sped right past her. She looked to be about his age, although she was slightly taller…[Read more]
They still havent realized hes a boy??? Please update soon, i cant wait to read more! π
Ouran Host Club is my favorite too! I also love SAO and Maid-Sama. I’m glad I’m not the only otaku! :] Did you know that Karasu means crow in Japanese?
Err. . . Otaku? I’m lost already.
Anyway, the chapter was really, really great! π
@peppy, otaku is the Japanese word for for people with obsessive interests, commonly the anime and manga fandom. We’re pretty antisocial and spend a lot of time reading manga and drawing and stuff π
Woohoo, here’s Chapter 2 Part 1 π
The shadow came to a stop over the sparkling castle and Basil looked down, grateful for his lack of fear in heights. Basil turned to the shadow, “Look, I think you’ve got the wrong person.” he said. The shadow responded by dropping Basil into the open air. The rushing wind tore the scream out of his lungs as he…[Read more]
Woah, im on the verge of falling off my chair (awesome!!) i hope you write more soon π
No problem!
Your writing is really fantastic, and was simply HOOKED!
Please write more!! π π π π
Hi guys, I know I left you with a cliff hanger last time, so here’s Chapter 1 Part 2! π
The shadow crept closer to his bed, fingers of darkness probing out the light. “I’m not going to give up that easily.” Basil thought. He launched himself off the bed, landing just beyond the shadow, and sprinted for the kitchen. A tight grip around his ankles…[Read more]
It is so good I bet our two characters would get along together π @karasutheotaku
Here’s Chapter 1 Part 1 of Basil’s story, hope you like it π
Night was finally here. Basil watched through a crack in the boards covering his window as the last drops of sunlight drained away. Darkness had fallen; it wouldn’t be long now. He sighed and laid down on his bed. Basil’s room was dark; he didn’t dare turn on a light. It was almost…[Read more]
Noooooooooooo Cliff hanger qο½₯οΎοΎο½₯(>Π΄<)ο½₯οΎοΎο½₯q
Great start to your story! I look forwards to reading the next part π
Thanks! π I wrote a exposition that kind of introduces Basil and some of the other characters, so if you want to know a bit more, I welcome you to read it π It’s somewhere in the recent posts.
Great writing!
Just remember: new speaker, new line, and you’ll be on the road to writing!
Apart from that, I love it and can’t wait to read more. π
Thanks for the advice @peppy π I’ve never been very good at formatting but I’ll try giving it a go in Chapter 2 part 1 π
Exposition for Chapter 1 of my character’s story. This is my first RP, so I hope you guys feel free to give honest feedback π
Basil was anxious. He paced the length of his room, which as his worn and creaking floorboards showed, was an activity he resorted to often. Tonight was the big night; it was the night the mysterious shadow swept away two…[Read more]
Sorry this is so long by the way, I got carried away π
Ooh I like it π it’s not way too long, it’s the perfect length π
Hi guys, I know I haven’t posted any further in Basil’s story lately (I’m moving out of my house so I’ve been very busy), so here’s a bio for another one of my characters π
Name: Gabriel
Gender: Male
Parents: Osiris (the Egyptian god of the underworld) and Isis (Egyptian goddess of life and healing)
School: Good-Ever
Age: 17
Appearance: Slightly…[Read more]
Great bio. Very excited for the next part of Basil’s Story.
I’m loving the Egyptian gods and godesses!
Gabriel sounds like a really interesting person to write about! π
Wow what a cool bio!!!