kaylynn1 posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hi I’m new here!
    I’m liking it already.

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Hi! We RP here in a group, and write in paragraphs. Someone else has the link to the rules.

    kaylynn1 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 11 months ago

    Chapter 1 falling I fell in to th clear blue water I was pulled out by fairs fastly and dryer and sent to classes.When classes where over i whent to my new room I saw a few pertty girls we did dress up the boy and sleepy Time then eat Tim ethen rest time then sleep time.

        reaperthecat290 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Um….Well, you did a good job other than a few grammar mistakes, but maybe you should try making your chapters longer and more detailed. If you need help you can go and read my story @reaperthecat290 , or you can check out other people’s stories on this level and level 0. Also, more people tend to be on level one, so your story might get read more.

        fantasygirl12 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        cool!

    kaylynn1 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Chapter 3 sweet dreams
    Zzzzzzzzzzz.On my first night I had a dream about a bury whit face the shape looked like Jake Will I killed it and that day that is what I wanted to do.

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Cool, good job. Like @evilerruler845 said, it just needs to be longer and have a bit more detail. 🙂

        fantasygirl12 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        great job!

    kaylynn1 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    What does POV mean?

        luna101 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        POV means point of view, as in like you write your chapters like your character is speaking.

          kaylynn1 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Thank you.

    kaylynn1 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hi am new here.

    Name.will voice

    Age.11

    Gender.male

    School.good

    Finger glow,golden yellow

    Aperence.drown hair.green eyes.small nose.larg mouth.

    Personallied.easlyed angered ,nice

    Fairytale connection.dad is jack and his mom the golden harp.

        fantasygirl12 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        awesome can’t wait to read your stories! 🙂

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Nice!
        I would add more detail to appearance and personality, but besides that it looks good.

    kaylynn1 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Finger glow.yellow

    Talent .make things fly

    Aperince.long black hair,gray eyes ,long nose and pointy,long thin body.

    Personaled.smart aditodive and snappy

    Chapter 2 new freinds not so much
    I see there faces and I think not friends but then we get together and talk friendly.then they try to hex me and I try not to get hex.
    They fun and…[Read more]

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Of, nice start. It could use more detail though. And are you new? If so, here is my official welcome:
        Welcome to RP level 0! Here on level 0 everyone writes their own stories, usually about SGE, (school for good and evil) but you can write about whatever you want if you don’t want to write about SGE.
        Even though I’m not an elder, I’m always happy…[Read more]

          kaylynn1 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Thank you um what Ka the difference between level 1 and level 0?

          dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          *ok.
          There kinda isn’t really a difference between level 0 and level 1. But level 2 and 3 are different to level 0 and 1. In levels 1 and 0 you write a story by yourself, and in levels 2 and 3, you write a story together, you have to be more experienced and I think that the groups are more strict on mistakes. If I’m wrong, please correct me, but…[Read more]

    kaylynn1 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 11 months ago

    Name.Sara

    Age 13

    Gender.female

    School.evil

    Chapter 1 new groves.
    Ahhhhhhh. As I fell in to the swamp I thought eww.
    I wanted to leave and go home soon wolfs picked me up and put me in the school of evil. Soon after all the classes ended and I was in my room with 3 people that were my roommates.

        kaylynn1 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Thank you @evilerruler845!

        dot111 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Nice start. This just needs more detail, but good job. Are you new? If so, here is my official welcome:
        Welcome to RP level 0! Here on level 0 everyone writes their own stories, usually about SGE, (school for good and evil) but you can write about whatever you want if you don’t want to write about SGE.
        Even though I’m not an elder, I’m always…[Read more]