My Ranking Points
Talent .make things fly
Aperince.long black hair,gray eyes ,long nose and pointy,long thin body.
Personaled.smart aditodive and snappy
Chapter 2 new freinds not so much
I see there faces and I think not friends but then we get together and talk friendly.then they try to hex me and I try not to get hex.
They fun and friendly except katlynn she is mean. She pulled out some of my hair and ripped my Blake dress.she is bad news.
Of, nice start. It could use more detail though. And are you new? If so, here is my official welcome:
Welcome to RP level 0! Here on level 0 everyone writes their own stories, usually about SGE, (school for good and evil) but you can write about whatever you want if you don’t want to write about SGE.
Even though I’m not an elder, I’m always happy to help along with pretty much everybody else on level 0. Our elder is @caramelprincess, and she’s really nice. I’m @Dot111 🙂
There is also one rule you might want to follow:
No one-liners, they push everybody else’s stories to the bottom and prevents us from seeing their amazing writing.
If you’re going to write a story I recommend you to post your story in chapters so it’s easier to read, it’s not too long and it’s easier for you to write.
If you’re going to write a biography or as we call it for short, a bio, you might want to include these elements to help you get started-
If this is a bit too much information to have to write, I know I didn’t have this much content when I started, you don’t have to include all of if it, just the main points, which have an asterisk (the little star symbol) beside it.
Here’s an Ever’s bio and a Never’s bio I made up that you could use to help you-
Family: Ophelia’s mother is Rapunzel and her father is the king of Maidenvale.
Pets: Ophelia has a white unicorn called Lilli.
Finger glow: Soft pink
Flaw(s): Ophelia is quite soft and girly at times, and she doesn’t knows how to fend for herself without the help of others.
Talents: Ophelia can speak to animals and she has a beautiful, harmonic voice.
Appearance: Ophelia has luscious, knee-length golden hair, large brown eyes which always sparkle, delicate, pink lips and soft, fair skin.
Clothes: Ophelia loves to wear white or pink frilly dresses, packed with lace, beads and ribbons. She likes to match her dresses with white wedges or heels topped with flowers. Ophelia also likes to add flowers in her hair, along with bracelets, earrings and necklaces to her bright, sparkly outfit.
Personality: Ophelia is sweet and caring. She loves to care for animals and her appearance. Over obsessed, Ophelia cares about her appearance far to much than reality around her. She can’t do anything herself without help from maids or pretty much any person within a close distance to her.
Backstory: Ophelia lived a life of royalty; she had people helping her every second she needed it. She had people make her bed, choose her dress, brush her hair, even take care of her pets. Let’s just say that Ophelia lived a life not knowing how to do much at all. When Ophelia received her Flowerground ticket, she was overjoyed. But when she arrived everything changed; everyone had their own friends, their own things to do and their own life to live. After seeing all of this Ophelia suddenly felt useless and scared. She tried to make friends and join their future plans, but she didn’t really fit in, until the day she met Goldilocks’ daughter, April.
Family: Ace has a twin sister called Diamond and his mother is the Red Queen. Ace doesn’t know his father.
Pets: Ace has a scarlet red dragon called Hunter.
Finger glow: Blood red
Flaw(s): When Ace cheats in card games, sometimes he gets caught and is heavily punished.
Talents: Ace has a real specialty when it comes to using spears, pickpocketing and cheating in card games, which wins lots of money and jewels.
Appearance: Ace has sharp, scarlet red hair, piercing, ebony, black eyes, paper-white skin, a cold grin and pointed ears. Ace is also quite tall and slender.
Clothes: Ace likes to wear black shirts, ripped black jeans, red and black plaid hoodies, black boots and black, leather, fingerless gloves.
Personality: Ace is dark, bossy and manipulative. Ace feels he needs to be in control for everything he does or is a part of. At times Ace tries to act as powerful and as mean as his mother was, he yells at people doing the wrong thing when he orders them to do something else and he attempts to punish people and threatens them with beheadings or torture. Ace also loves to trick people into doing his ***** work. He uses his treasured talent to manipulate them and instructs them to do his unwanted work.
Backstory: Ace lived in the Red Heart castle in Wonderland with his mother, the Red Queen and twin sister, Diamond. The Red Queen was always so busy with ruling over the land, she forgot about her two kids. She never did anything with them, so Ace and Diamond taught themselves a few tricks. Ace taught Diamond how to manipulate and pickpocket, and Diamond taught Ace how to cheat. Together they worked as an unstoppable team, until Ace was taken to the school for Evil, without Diamond.
Friends: Ace is friends with a few Nevers called Quinn, Terrence and Crow.
I know, this may seem like a lot of information now bubbling around in your head, but it’ll all become clear very soon. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask, you’ll always receive a response. 😉
When you start writing, don’t worry about if others might judge you, or if the reader might not like it, we’ll always help and give you guiding tips if you need it.
I do hope this helps you get started, and I wish you luck when writing your story.
Also, when you see other people’s stories, they might have people’s names tagged. If you want to tag people you type the @ symbol then the person’s username, you might want to ask to tag people before you do so. When you tag people all it does is create a link to the person’s profile, where you can read their stories, see their groups, when they started and how many points they’ve got.
To see you’re stories, name, points, groups and start date you press the ‘my report card’ button, where it’ll take you to your stories and other info.
I also want to give you a really important tip, do not type your story straight into the ‘what’s new?’ box. The reason why is because if you turn off your device, close down the page or refresh the page all your writing disappears. (Let’s just say, I had to learn it the hard way.) I highly recommend writing your story in an external document such as word, pages, google docs or any other application you have your hands on.
Yes, even more information, but this will help you write a fabulous story!
If you want to check out my story and my bios go here @Dot111, then go to favourites.
Again, I wish you good luck, and I hope this helped you. 🙂
Thank you um what Ka the difference between level 1 and level 0?
There kinda isn’t really a difference between level 0 and level 1. But level 2 and 3 are different to level 0 and 1. In levels 1 and 0 you write a story by yourself, and in levels 2 and 3, you write a story together, you have to be more experienced and I think that the groups are more strict on mistakes. If I’m wrong, please correct me, but this is all I really know. 🙂