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my first chapter deleted its self >:( 🙁
so I was reading a story by clarad575 am now motivated to write a story about the hunger games! but I will keep writing the story only two, but will be writing this one also!
TAG ME (but now I want to make a Hunger games thing XD) You know what I now want to try that
Tag me make it about Katniss and Peeta’s daughter! I read the series in fourth grade XD
sorry I was at my moms house AND had a sleepover at my friends
xD we stayed up all night
sorry for not posting..but there’s just been one thought on my mind: should I quit my story?
thank you for reading.
tell me if you think I should quit.
also I’ve just been under a lot of tress lately.
thank you so much!!!!!
its good to know that there’s someone to talk to. <3
hello readers! today is chapter nine of Only Two! So I’m lazy so I not doin tags U-U. fine I would do them for you guys! @rwbywingskeeper @tinaj @princessofthecoven @foxwoodeagle @florence123 okay! let’s begin.
the wolves pulled luna by a tight rusted chain connected to a steel collar around Lunas…[Read more]
Hey! Just some constructive criticism here. One if you could use proper grammar and punctuation that would be great, it helps with the flow of the story making it easier to read. And two try formatting your writing in proper paragraphs, again it helps with the flow. Overall the story has potential!
I absolutely love this story! I always find myself on the edge of my seat, waiting to find out what happens next. However, I do agree with @writingworlds. But overall great job!
Amazing!! Yes, I agree, commas and grammer would make this story more awesome than it already is!! Great job, Keko!
Luna didn’t get any sleep.
half of it was probably she was scared for her first day of classes.
but, most of it was premcent and whiss.
they were arguing all night…[Read more]
Luna walked back to the evil benches and wiped her last tear.
the welcoming was…different.
castor seemed to not like the evil students.
then without warning about sixty good boys…[Read more]
sorry I have not been posting, my parents are divorced (as you know) so I was just spending the weekend at my moms house! okay here’s chapter six! oh, here’s the tags: @rwbywingskeeper @tinaj @princessofthecoven @foxwoodeagle @florence123 enjoy!
Luna wasn’t sure how long she was in bed for.
but she could feel they’re eyes burning into…[Read more]
oh and when I said grinned her teeth, it just means she did kinda a smile the went into an angry frown
Luna looked at the three witches, too shocked to say anything.
“we SAID you’re a reader” premcent huffed.
“well what IS a reader” Luna said, trying really hard…[Read more]
❤️🧡💛💚💙💙💜🤎🖤🤍 Love it!! Dont worry, we all have writers block sometimes!! I personally am also expeirencing it, so don’t worry if it is posted late!!