maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 1 month ago

    Hey guys! I’m back from the dead. It’s been such a long time and I’ve missed all of you so much! I mean it. First, I’d like to start off by apologizing to all of you for not posting for so long. As I said before, I had a spelling bee coming up and had to study full time. It’s been two weeks, but I didn’t have any inspiration. Now I’ve returned and…[Read more]

        helicat replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        It’s great! Roses are red, and so are the dead, both are in bed, but not quite as said. I question mine sometimes too. Can I be tagged on the next one? πŸ™‚

        mimiofwoodsbeyond replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        I’m a bit of a newie to your series, but it’s pretty good! (Get it, Good?)

        dot111 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Nice!
        Roses are red, and so are the dead.
        And I think love triangles are a cool idea, I guess.

        itsmejazzy replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Roses are read and so are the dead, Amazing!! I’m glad you’re back, I find love triangles really interesting. They bring a bit of drama into the story line πŸ™‚

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        Roses are red, and so are the dead… Awesome!!!

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 1 month ago

        β€œroses are red, and so are the dead………………………………..

        AMAZING!!!

        I think the love triangle is a great idea and a great plot twist to the story. πŸ™‚

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    Hey guys! I have a spelling bee coming up, so I might not be posting as much in the next two weeks. Please be patient, I promise this story will be continued πŸ˜‰ ! Since its been a while, catch up at @maidengirl.
    Here’s the chapter:
    Part Two: Classes
    Chapter 9:
    [POV:Carmen]
    I let out my breath as I got up from my log, ready to demonstrate…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        I LOVE IT!!!!!

        2. Mito and Xoong. πŸ™‚
        3. YES!

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Great chapter and I can answer number 3 lol. Yes! Also maybe I can give you some of 4… I like how you show us how your characters physically express their emotions but could you go into a little more detail about how they’re feeling on the inside. Mentally, like what are they thinking and how is it affection their actions and what they say.…[Read more]

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        I love it! Awesome job!
        Mito and Xoong

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        1. No idea
        2. Carmen and Rajesh, Mito and Xoong
        3. Yes!
        4. Can’t think of anything

        maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Yes, thank you @caramelprincess and everyone else for reading! I do agree that I need more detail. I was in a hurry with this chapter, so it lacks the detail I would usually put it. Thanks for pointing it out. I will definitely add more thoughts next time πŸ˜‰

        gaby1 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Amazing chapter!!

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        I love this! I’m a big shipper of Mito and Xoong. πŸ™‚

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    So here’s the next chapter (I know, finally πŸ™‚ ) It’s been a while, so catch up @maidengirl.

    Part Two:Classes
    Chapter 8: The Angel Returns
    [POV:Kristine]
    I sat next to Carmen on the bed. Despite my uncertain feelings and old emotions of wanting to help, I managed to keep my distance from the dying girl. I could easily save her, one of my…[Read more]

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Lovely Chapter!
        1. YES!!
        2. Keep me!!

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        1. I didn’t like it… I LOVED IT!!!!
        2. I’m already tagged and I would like to stay tagged thanks!
        That was awesome! I love it! Its so cool how you were able to build up from your last story!

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        ‘Mazing Chapter!
        1. Totally.
        2. Keep me

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        1. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
        2. KEEP ME ON THETAG LIST!!!!!

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!

          1. OF COURSE!
          2. PLEASE. PLEASE. KEEP ME!!!

          (I posted chap 96, you can press my avatar to read it. Also I comment on your chapter an hour ago but it didn’t go through. Oh well.)

        maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Thanks everyone! Really appreciate you reading this! πŸ™‚

        reaperbethehero replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        1. I LOVED IT
        2. Yes plz, plz tag me

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Will you be posting soon?

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          I can’t say when I’ll post, but I shoot for at least very other day. Sometimes I end up posting every day for a week, and then not posting a whole two days after that. I’ll try to get something in for tomorrow. πŸ˜‰ And thanks to everyone who read! πŸ™‚

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        1. Love it!
        2. Keep me on your tag list!

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Ah-mazing!!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ I would never want to be removed from your tag list. Your story is absolutely awesome!

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Fabulous chapter!!!! I absolutely love it, its full of description! Yes, please keep me. Sorry i haven’t really been commenting on this. πŸ˜‰

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    Hey guys! I’m really sorry to say I can’t post tonight and I didn’t post yesterday and the day before yesterday, since I was not feeling well. I hope to get back on tomorrow. Thanks for understanding! πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚
    -maidengirl
    Tags:…[Read more]

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Okay

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Okay! Get better soon πŸ™‚

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        It’s alright, get well soon!

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Its perfectly fine! I hope you get better!

          olympiastarling replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Feel better!

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Take your time. Feel better soon!

        maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Thanks everyone. I really appreciate it! πŸ™‚

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Okay, it’s all right. Hope you feel better. πŸ™‚

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        I hope you get well soon!

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    Hello to the Ever Never army! Here’s my latest chapter for my story!
    Part two: Classes
    Chapter 7: Schedules and Swords
    [POV:Honoria]
    “Mogrifs are among the world’s best helpers! You all will play an important role in your fairytales, even if you are not the main characters. Now, the way the rankings work goes as so: based on how well you…[Read more]

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        A-MAZING CHAPTER!
        Fi, fie, foe, fum.
        1. Death to the Undead
        2. I did – but as I mentioned before, I do think you could add a little more detail to the surroundings. Also, I wouldn’t describe Lana as pretty, but rather gorgeous or stunning or a beauty. (pet peeve, dont mind me!)
        3. I kind of ship Mito and Kristine for some reason.
        4. Umm… Not…[Read more]

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Thanks! I will add more detail as the story goes on, and I was actually going to ask you myself if I could use Angel again! I’ll definitely use her, as she will be a key character now. I will have to alter her age. She will be 29
          Instead of 18 in this.

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Fi, fie, foe, fum
        1. Death to the Undead
        2. Great chapter! I liked your other chapters better, though.
        3. Carmen and Rajesh
        4. No
        5. They were these characters from your last story in order from when they spoke:
        Alexei
        Lana
        Celeste
        Maverick
        Thanata
        Selene
        And these were the 6 who died at the end and were in the prophecy to save the world.

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Sure! Please note that as she is half-elven, she is immortal (though she, like Lana, can be killed by physical means). If that doesn’t work for you, could you please make her extremely long lived. Either way, could she look twenty-three instead of twenty-nine.
        Thanks!

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Yes, I will do that!

        sophie505 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Wow! U guyz really do things

          fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          I see you’re new here! Hi, @sophie505! My name is @fuzzyjellyjoy, and this is RP level 0.
          Welcome!
          Besides this level, there is also level 1, 2, and 3. Level 1 has more detailed bios and stories, and I think levels 2 and 3 do theirs in groups.
          A bio is a description of your character. Here is a template:
          Name:
          School:
          Gender:
          Fairytale…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Fi, fie, foe, fum

        Exciting Chapter!!!

        1. Death to the Undead
        2. Liked it…No….I LOVED IT!!!!
        3. Rajesh and Carmen. (But I actually want Rajesh and Kristine to be together for some reason)
        4. No questions
        5. I think the 6 phantoms were your main characters from your last story that were killed.

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Yep, you all got the last question right! Thanks for reading guys! I really appreciate it!

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    Hey Evs and Nevs! I posted three times already, but I finished a new chapter. Here it is:
    Part Two:Classes
    Chapter 6: Lunch and Deep Conversations
    [POV:Xoong]
    Strange people. I could tell by their magic’s scent. All of these people were powerful.
    “I’m Honoria of Krigher,” the brown haired, svelte girl answered me. “How did you know I…[Read more]

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Deep convos and nachos
        1. Great chapter!
        2. Still Carmen. It made me happy to read her point of view because I knew I had contributed her to the story.
        3. Carmen as well. I am always happy, and I love having a good friend.

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Yes, I’m really happy to use Carmen and I can’t thank you enough for her! She’s one of my favorite characters. πŸ˜‰

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Deep convos and nachos

          1. Loved the chapter.
          2. Carmen’s
          3. Carmen is like me a little bit.

          Nice fact! And your a eight grader too, so am I.

          fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Your welcome!

          fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Also, I’m in sixth grade now, so a little younger than you guys… but that’s cool! πŸ™‚

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Deep Convos and nachos
        1. Amazing Chapter!!
        2. Probably Mito’s
        3. Mito and Kristine. I’m shy but always happy
        Fun Fact about me- When I was in Year 4(7 or 8) I went to the National Swimming County Gala in my area and went up against girls in year six, that’s about 10 or 11. I came fourth out of eight πŸ™‚

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          That’s awesome! Great job. Also, is your actual name Holly, ’cause that’s how you sign the end of your chapters and I was just wondering…:)

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Thanks! I’m in year 8 now but I still remember it. And yes, my real name is Holly πŸ˜› @maidengirl

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Deep convos and nachos.
        1. Amazing chapter! I kind of ship Xoong and Mito now. πŸ™‚
        2. Mito and Rajesh’s
        3. Half Mito and Rajesh.

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Deep convos and nachos.
        Amazing chapter @maidengirl!
        2. Mito’s
        3. Mito
        The only criticism I have is that you could describe the world around your characters more.
        Also, could you use Angel in your story, and can she have a bigger part than in your last story?
        Here’s her bio:
        Name: Princess Angel Arunfuil of Jaunt Jolie
        Age: 16 at the beginning,…[Read more]

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    And here is the chapter five! Sorry it took so long and I’m posting a lot today since I might not post again the end of the week again. πŸ™ Warning: it’s quite long to make up for not posting yesterday!
    Part Two: Classes
    Chapter 5: Dorm Rooms and Disasters
    [POV:Kristine]
    Ugh. I had to sit next to Mito, again. I didn’t like it, not one bit. I…[Read more]

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Loved it!!
        1. ?
        2. All of them
        3. Do not know πŸ™‚
        4. Hmmm… I’m not to sure πŸ˜›

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Love the chapter!

          1. ?
          2. I liked Kristine POV the best.
          3. I really don’t know. :p
          4. I think your probably like Carmen

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        1. Great chapter! πŸ™‚
        2. Carmen, if I do say so myself. πŸ˜€
        3. Sorry, I don’t know much about Harry Potter. πŸ™
        4. I think you are like Venn. πŸ˜‰

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Cool chapter!
        1. I love it!
        2. I think Venn’s POV.
        3. I don’t know.
        4. I don’t know either… πŸ™‚

        luna101 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome!

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome chapter!
        2. I liked Venn’s and Mito’s.
        3. Kristine: Gryffindor, Carmen: Hufflepuff, Venn: Hufflepuff, Mito: Ravenclaw, Xoong: Slytherin?
        4. Mito
        I don’t really have any critique for this chapter

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    Okay, this is the last character from my story that will have a POV. Enjoy!
    Bio
    Name: Xoong of Litvia (formerly known as Ooty)
    Age: 16
    Heritage: He is very mysterious, and reveals nothing about his heritage. The only thing he allows people to know, is that his mother and father were very powerful sorcerers. There has been speculation that he may…[Read more]

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Five freed floes for farthingale
        Cool bio! Xoong seems really cool! I like him πŸ™‚

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        β€œfive freed floes for farthingale

        Amazing bio! I liked Xoong, he seems cool.

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        five freed floes for farthingale
        Great character! One question: how do you pronounce Xoong?

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Zo-ahng. Thanks for reading everyone!

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Five freed floes for farthingale, cool bio! Xoong is just great! I like him.

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Five freed floes for farthingale.
        I really liked this bio, and it’s cool how different all of your characters are.

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    Hey guys! Sorry I didn’t post yesterday, as I was not feeling well. I still don’t feel too well, but I feel good enough to write! πŸ™‚ Here is the bio for Venn. I’m almost finished with the fifth chapter, so I might post today again.
    Bio:
    Name: Venn of Rasenvale (formerly known as Maidenvale)
    Age: 17
    Heritage: His mother is Millicent of Maidenvale,…[Read more]

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Cool bio, and yes Venn is pretty cool. πŸ˜‰

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Awesome bio and Venn is really cool. πŸ™‚

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        This seemed like a pretty good bio. Nice job. πŸ˜‰

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Nice bio! And Venn is pretty cool πŸ™‚

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Nice bio; and I like Venn.

        gaby1 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Great bio! Bennett seems cool.

    maidengirl posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    Hey guys! Here is the prologue for part two. I’m adding in the character bios I was given by some of you!
    Prologue to Part Two:
    Mito, Kristine and Rajesh weren’t the only ones who made wishes. Or had hard lives. Three others also had equally testing experiences through the course of time. Venn had never liked being trapped in Rasenvale, the…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        This is great.
        1. No questions
        2. Sure. It’s okay. πŸ™‚

        I posted a chapter, you can read it at @fsa161

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          And β€œroses are red”, sorry I forgot.

        fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Wonderful! Thanks for using my character!
        1. I just want to make sure readers know that Carmen shooed away her servants with great regret. Also, what do you mean by “apron chess rated”?
        2. Sure, but I also have a picture of Carmen being added to the Reader Gallery because she is a character in my story too as you know. Just so you know. You…[Read more]

          fuzzyjellyjoy replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Oh, and roses are red. Sorry!

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Yes, I will make Carmen’s intentions clearer in the story. And I don’t know what you mean by the other apron chess rated. Thanks for allowing me to post the pics as well. You’ll see them soon! πŸ™‚

        dodokitty replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        roses are red

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Roses are red
        And violets are blue.
        No there’s no questions,
        I miss your old characters too!

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          That was a terrible poem…

          maidengirl replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Aw! That was cute! It was not terrible at all! πŸ™‚

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

          Thx! And I really do! Its sad that they all died!

        emberscarlet replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Roses are red! Cool prologue!

        neverafter12 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Roses are red!
        Amazing prologue
        1. No Questions:)

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Roses are red. Please check out Angel’s bio, it would be super cool if you gave her a larger part in this story.

        gaby1 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Roses are red. Amazing prologue!

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