This will probably be the last chapter of this story.
This is a rewrite of Chapter 4
POV of Skye
As soon as I saw him walking toward me and Keiko, I turned to head back to my dorm. No way would I talk to a boy. Even if he was insanely cute and…
All boys are boring.
I started to walk away but I accidentally tripped over a log. The boy i…[Read more]
Heya! I know this is a very long chapter, but it is to make up for the fact I have a lot of stuff going on during the half term so won’t write again for about a week.
I know I am not a great writer but I guess you can’t be good at everything.
Anyway, here goes:
Character name: Skye
Personality: Grumpy, keeps to herself but secretly…[Read more]
Whoa!! Nice! I can totally sympathize with Skye at the end and just in general! Also weird random question: Have you read the penderwicks or even the whole penderwicks series? (one of the main characters names is Skye soo… Just wondering.)
That’s really good I’m new at this pls read my story and give me feed back about how I could improve
Character name: Rose
Personality: Hyper, loves gossip, clever,funny
Lineage: Mother was Mulan
Appearance: Cherry red hair as bob,green eyes,long fringe
Flaws: Is very annoying and can be stupidly brave
Preferred weapon: Magic
POV of Rose
Skye sat in a corner and picked at her nails, silver hair hiding her…[Read more]
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Why did Millicent have to die? And the book to end on such a cliffhanger? And who is the Snake? How is Rhian and him connected? HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Millie died and the book ended in a cliffhanger because Soman’s a NEVER. (Seriously, he said he was a Never) I personally believe that the Snake is some sort of spirit attached to Rhian, pretty much like Hester’s demon, but without the tattoo. I think the Snake is some sort of demon or spirit that Rhian is able to conjure – basically, Rhian’s…[Read more]
I didn’t know what to expect when the School Master chose me from my home town. I hadn’t bothered barring my windows or ripping up my dresses because I hadn’t expected to be chosen. Lots of the other girls and boys didn’t either, practically begging to be chosen.I mourned for my warm bed as I got pulled from my home by a long shadow, clutching the…[Read more]
It is from the POV of the Ever ‘Keiko’ and is Chapter 1. And I just kinda had a little look around before writing this
Thanks! I’ll make sure to tag you but can I just ask how tags are used? BTW, a new chapter will be coming out tomorrow (possibly)