koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 8 months ago

    Roses Have Thorns
    Chapter 9
    Mari’s P.O.V
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    I had throuble sleeping last night, as my head was filled with thoughts about one person I had met yesterday during Forest Groups who dared talk to an outcasted Never like me. I felt some sort of regret too, I had been so…[Read more]

        hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        I loved it! You portrayed Noir perfectly! I predict Mari will eventually befriend Thalia.

          koolkaylaj replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          That was so quick!!!! Thanks for reading, glad I did your character right, that always scares me. Good prediction, wont tell you if your right or wrong though!!!

        bostonhorsez2 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Ooh boy; a guy just entered the story. I predict large amounts of drama ahead!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Amazing!!

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 11 months ago

    Roses Have Thorns
    Chapter 8
    Thalia’s P.O.V
    ——————————————————-
    I threw a pillow at my blonde roommate across the room, laughing at the joke she just told Parle and I.
    “That was horrible!” I said.
    “No It Wasn’t!” Cali said trying to seem mad, but I knew that she wasn’t.
    “Oh, really?” I asked.
    “Goodnight.” She…[Read more]

        autumnofwoodsbeyond replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Nice!

          koolkaylaj replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Glad you liked it!!!!!

        hannahtheeel replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        This is sweet!

          koolkaylaj replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Thanks.

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Amazing!!

          koolkaylaj replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Thanks for Reading!!!

        celesteofavalontowers replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Good writing!

          koolkaylaj replied 2 years, 11 months ago

          Thanks that means so much!!!

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years ago

    Roses Have Thorns
    Part 7
    ———————————————–
    Mari’s P.O.V

    Here I am sitting off alone in forest groups, good, I like it better that way, but this Ever had to be different. She, came up to me all friendly like, this had to be some cruel joke, they must think it’s funny to pity the poor Never girl who is sitting…[Read more]

        autumnofwoodsbeyond replied 3 years ago

        Nice!

        autumnofwoodsbeyond replied 3 years ago

        @bostonhorsez2
        fixed that for you

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years ago

          Thanks!

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years ago

        Great!

        hannahtheeel replied 3 years ago

        Awesome! I like Thalia.

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years ago

        Amazing!!

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years ago

          Glad you liked it!!!!

        saphire101 replied 3 years ago

        Awesome chapter!

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 2 months ago

    “Roses have Thorns”
    Chapter 6
    —————————————————
    Thalia’s POV
    “Welcome to Good Deeds. I am Professor Dovey, as some of you may already know” The professor shot me a glance than smiled at the rest of the class. “For todays challenge, you will all be tested is situations in which you will have to judge what is the…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome!

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome! I love it. Could you tag me please?

        hannahtheeel replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        The plot thickens! Wow! This is so good. Thanks for using Anethema.

        autumnofwoodsbeyond replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Love it! Tag me, please!

        ariniegold replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        A beautiful Story, I’ve been reading through this now. I do like it very much. you do a create description of character.. just remember to be careful of your POV. I noticed you slipped into second person in an earlier part and third person in this!

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          Yeah, I noticed that after It posted so I just let it go. The reason I do that is because I get distracted very easily and then when I focus again I’m a little lost. Thanks for the comment. Stuff like that always help.
          -Kool πŸ™‚

        ariniegold replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Typo’s and short attention spans are always a killer . πŸ˜›
        XD aha I know the feeling.

        sing-girl-sing replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        OMG Loved it oh and thanks for using indigo!!!

        sing-girl-sing replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Hey just wondering when your going to but up chapter 7?????
        PS I just can’t wait *squeals.

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 2 months ago

    “Roses have Thorns”
    Chapter 5
    ——————————————-
    Mari’s POV.
    Uglification, useless class if I would say so myself. Professor Manley said the only way to truly embrace evil is to not worry about how you look. Ha! Dean Sophie, voided that rule, so why can’t I.
    Then the bell rung, I was dismissed to Henchman Training with…[Read more]

        hannahtheeel replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Nice chapter! I feel so bad for Mari. My favorite class is Surviving Fairytales

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Cool. πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        I love it!
        My favorite class would probably be curses and death traps (at least with Lady Lesso) or history of heroism.

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome! Surviving Fairytales, definitely. Close second would be Henchmen Training. Third is Curses and Death Traps (with Lesso, not Sophie). I’m sensing a pattern here…

        saphire101 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome chapter!
        Mine is Curses and Death Traps, Surviving Fairytales

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 2 months ago

    “Roses have Thorns”
    Chapter 4
    ———————————————–
    Thalia’s POV.
    Parle, Cali, and I, were right outside of Beautification.
    “You girls ready, I heard Professor Anemone, is super nice.” Parle peeped, as she turned the handle and pushed the door open. Inside we were greeted with a number of different faces, some I…[Read more]

        saphire101 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Cool chapter!

        hannahtheeel replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        I like it! And thanks for using my character.

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          No Problem, but that isn’t the last you will see of your character. @hannahtheeel
          -Kool πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        I really like this story!!

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 2 months ago

    “Roses have Thorns”
    Chapter 3
    —————————–
    Mari’s POV.
    I stood in my group waiting for something to happen or for some reason to leave, but it never came. Instead I found myself following the group up a tall staircase and into a long dark hallway. ‘These are our rooms’ I thought petrified. As I walked down the hall I noticed…[Read more]

        hannahtheeel replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Nice chapter!
        Here’s a male you can use:
        Name: Noir Sanderson
        Parents: Winnie Sanderson and Billy Butcherson (from hocus pocus)
        Age: 17
        Kingdom: Salem Hills
        School: Evil
        Appearence: tall, muscled, green eyes, black hair, pale
        Powers: He’s a warlock.
        Personality: Though evil, he has a quirky and fun side

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          thanks so much, @hannahtheeel you have been a great help. πŸ™‚

        hannahtheeel replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        My favorite character is Thalia.

        saphire101 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Cool chapter! Thanks for the tag!

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Nice. Uh, I guess you can have him:

        Name: Bluemoon Twilight of the Enchanted Isles
        Age: (in first year) 14 (second year) 16
        Gender: Male
        School: depends (in his first year he was a Ever in second year Never. You could identify him as neutral I guess)
        Fairytale parents/Reader: he used to think he was a Reader, but (thanks to his sisters, Moonshine…[Read more]

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          Thanks, love this character @fairytalegirl123 I will be using him as a close friend to a main ever boy you will hopefully meet by chapter 4.
          -Kool πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome!!
        So far, my favorite is Thalia.

        celesteofavalontowers replied 2 years, 11 months ago

        Wow! Thanks for using Valerie! Means a lot. Sorry if this comment is late

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 2 months ago

    “Roses have Thorns”
    Chapter 2
    ———————————–
    Thalia’s POV.
    I sat in Professor Dovey’s office, anxiously twirling my short brown hair. Professor Dovey sat across from me reading from a folder.
    “Thalia of Woods Beyond, first year. Room 309” She looked up at me “is this correct”
    “yes” I said, sitting up straighter, anxious to…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        I love it!!

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          Thanks, your character was so fun to work with. Its going to be fun writing about her the rest of the story.

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 2 months ago

    Ok, I need an idea for a Ever character for my story, they will be the roommate of one of my main characters. If you respond with a name, personality, and description, you will get a tag in the chapter in which they are mentioned. If I get multiple good characters I may use them both.

        sing-girl-sing replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Hey @KOOLKAYLAJ I’d love to help you but I wondered if the roommate would be girl or boy??

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          The roommate has to be a girl because it’s in the girls tower.

        ariniegold replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Been ages since I’ve been online but I have one you could potentially use since I dropped by.
        Name: Parle Pettison (Often nicknamed Par Or Pipi.)
        Age: 13
        gender: female
        Appearance: Bright reddish brown hair, that’s really curly, freckles on the right side of her face in a deformed s shape. olive skin. Really small tightly pouted lips that often…[Read more]

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          Thanks, @ariniegold, I will use Parle. And you will get a tag in chapter two of my story.

        sing-girl-sing replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        OK here’s a small bio on the person.
        Name: Indigo ( Indi )
        Age: 15 24
        School: good
        Fingerglow: purple with white streaks
        Appearance: Thick dark brown silky hair that falls to her waist, blue and green glowing eyes, a ridged posture, shiny small lips with a pink colour, and a cream like tan.
        Clothing: (Not in school) Blue and white crop tops and…[Read more]

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          Thank you so much, @sing-girl-sing but sadly I have already put out chapter 2, but I will use her as a side character or in Thalia’s forest group. You will also get a tag. Again, thanks for the character πŸ™‚

        sing-girl-sing replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Hey @KOOLKAYLAJ with the 25 next to 15 on age 25 was a mistake!!!

    koolkaylaj posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 2 months ago

    “Roses have Thorns”
    Chapter 1
    ———————————-
    Thalia, only daughter of a cobbler. She never expected much of herself, she was only a simple girl. Short brown hair that barely reached her eye, dark brown eyes hidden behind black rimed glasses. She never wore expecive clothing, made most of it by herself. She never found…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Awesome descriptions!
        You can use my character Cali, if you want! I’ll leave the full bio, but you can take whatever parts you what, if you’re only looking for name and personality.
        Note: to all the Land of Story fans here, this character has some of Chris Colfer’s ideas, I know. I’m not trying to claim them as my own.)
        Bio: Cali
        Name: Cali Mar…[Read more]

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          Thanks for the character @impossiblegirl, I will definitely use Cali as one of Thalia’s roommates. You have earned yourself a tag in chapter two…
          p.s. I read the Land of Storys too!!
          (and for everyone else, hopefully chapter 2 will be up tomorrow.)

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Great! Love the contrast between the two characters!

        kittykitty336 replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        WHOA
        THIS IS GREAT
        Can’t wait for the next part! πŸ˜€

        hannahtheeel replied 3 years, 2 months ago

        Wow! Nice chapter. I have a character you can use:
        Name: Anethema Caruso Andrew
        Nickname: Ana
        Age: 16
        Parent: Mrs. Andrew (the evil nanny from Mary Poppins the musical)
        School: Good
        Appearence: Pale skin, blue eyes, long dark hair in a tight bun, thin
        Personality: jumpy, quiet, servile
        Fun fact: She likes to go by Ana, because Anethema means…[Read more]

          koolkaylaj replied 3 years, 2 months ago

          Thanks @hannahtheeel but I already put out chapter 2, I can use Anethema as a side character, or maybe in her forest group, I will definitely give you a tag though. Two thumbs up for the character.

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