Delicate as Crystals
I swear, my heart stopped beating for a second when I heard: ‘FIRE FIRE! EVACUATE THE BUILDING!’ (A/N I’m too lazy to look back to check if this is what the lady/intercom actually says, but meh)
“Astrid! Come on we gotta go!” Aziza snaps her fingers at me and shoves me out the door.
Oops.. Accidentally made the whole thing in bold… forget about that. And when Astrid says ‘Walt’, it’s supposed to be ‘wait’.
This is great! I like this story. I agree with @nadea that the last line is one of the best parts of the story! Really good!
Awesome! Loved it, the character voices were really obvious, great job! Loved the line at the end 🙂
“So, can you tell me again please? I’m sorry, I’m really bad at remembering things…There’s a Trial for Stories, a Circus of Talented Monkeys, a Non-existent Basketball, Sophie’s own Musical, and another Trial for Stories?” Aziza counts off her fingers, probably exaggerating her mistakes.
I whack her wit…[Read more]
It’s a little short, but since I haven’t posted in a while, it had to hurry 😉
That girl is already getting on my nerves. And I’ve only known her for half an hour!
I reach room 15 of Vice Tower, a black door with a gold lined black swan and a gold h…[Read more]
I crack my stiff eyelids open, pain flaring just from the sudden movement. Everything still feels numb. But that doesn’t stop pain from attacking me with every sudden movement. My brain hurts just from thinking. How can a roughly pierced ear make everything hurt so much?
A sound hits my ear, how I can h…[Read more]
The word in asterisks is cccccockkkk like you raise a hip kind of… you know
That one word reverberates around my mind, the only thought I have room for, the only thing keeping me going.
The sky had faded from a midnight blue tinged void of darkness, to a serene twilight purple, dissolving into a blue, brightening with every moment. Time blurs, every hour passing in…[Read more]
This is amazing!! I already feel like I know your characters!!!
Wow!!! That’s one of the most detailed and engaging stories I’ve ever read on here, please tag me! This is amazing, you’re such a great writer!
Here are some more bios for my story, first chapter coming out soon!
Name: Aziza of Mahadeva
Birthday: 2nd March
Dorm: 49 Mischief Tower
Home: Darkmair Castle, Mahadeva
Family: Lady of the Green Kirtle (mother), unknown deceased father
Clothes: Dark grey t-shirt, purple leather…[Read more]
Fantastic!! Just one thing: I’ve noticed that nearly all your characters are excellent at reading people. I’m not quite sure if that is important to the plot of the story, and so you did that intentionally, or not. If that is case, I apologize. Or if they are all some type of inhuman beings who are all really good at reading people. Sorry, once…[Read more]
Hey guys! I had a very old profile ages ago, and I lost my password for that, so I had to make a new account. I have this weird thing where I start an RP, then stop after a while if I fall slightly out of interest of it, then make a whole new one again, so this is about my fourth one now. These are the bios and I’ll have more coming out later.…[Read more]
*whistles* wow this is so good can u tag me for ur RP?
Awesome! Yeah, I know…I do the same exact thing with my stories…
Awesome! What was your old account by the way; there’s a 90% I remember you.