ladymauve0214 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 2 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter Five
    Delicate as Crystals

    [Astrid]

    I swear, my heart stopped beating for a second when I heard: ‘FIRE FIRE! EVACUATE THE BUILDING!’ (A/N I’m too lazy to look back to check if this is what the lady/intercom actually says, but meh)

    “Astrid! Come on we gotta go!” Aziza snaps her fingers at me and shoves me out the door.

    “Wait,…[Read more]

        ladymauve0214 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Oops.. Accidentally made the whole thing in bold… forget about that. And when Astrid says ‘Walt’, it’s supposed to be ‘wait’.

        nadea replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        My favorite part is the last line 😀

        legendaryevilbandit replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        This is great! I like this story. I agree with @nadea that the last line is one of the best parts of the story! Really good!

        basicallykiko77 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Love the ending XD it’s great!

        basicallykiko77 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Awesome! Loved it, the character voices were really obvious, great job! Loved the line at the end 🙂

        purpledragon replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        It would make a great book

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Great!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Amazing!!

    ladymauve0214 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years ago

    Chapter Four
    Dandelion Fizz

    [Astrid]

    “So, can you tell me again please? I’m sorry, I’m really bad at remembering things…There’s a Trial for Stories, a Circus of Talented Monkeys, a Non-existent Basketball, Sophie’s own Musical, and another Trial for Stories?” Aziza counts off her fingers, probably exaggerating her mistakes.

    I whack her wit…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years ago

        Amazing!!!

    ladymauve0214 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years ago

    It’s a little short, but since I haven’t posted in a while, it had to hurry 😉

    @inlovewithbooks
    @pugsforever
    @electra
    @basicallykiko77
    @em0689

    Chapter Three
    White Rose

    [Sam]

    That girl is already getting on my nerves. And I’ve only known her for half an hour!

    I reach room 15 of Vice Tower, a black door with a gold lined black swan and a gold h…[Read more]

        inlovewithbooks replied 3 years ago

        I really like it!

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years ago

        Nice!!

    ladymauve0214 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 1 month ago

    Chapter Two
    First Friendships

    [Aziza]

    I crack my stiff eyelids open, pain flaring just from the sudden movement. Everything still feels numb. But that doesn’t stop pain from attacking me with every sudden movement. My brain hurts just from thinking. How can a roughly pierced ear make everything hurt so much?

    A sound hits my ear, how I can h…[Read more]

        ladymauve0214 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        The word in asterisks is cccccockkkk like you raise a hip kind of… you know

        em0689 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        This is really good!

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        I’m lovin’ the variety of personalities here!!

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        I love it!!!

        basicallykiko77 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Wow… just wow 😮 that was amazing!! I live how you described the Evil foyer, it was so detailed!

    ladymauve0214 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 1 month ago

    Chapter One
    Second Choice

    [Astrid]

    Run.

    That one word reverberates around my mind, the only thought I have room for, the only thing keeping me going.

    Run.

    The sky had faded from a midnight blue tinged void of darkness, to a serene twilight purple, dissolving into a blue, brightening with every moment. Time blurs, every hour passing in…[Read more]

        ladymauve0214 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        ******

          ladymauve0214 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          huh. it’s the word that means you take away something. ShgyNAbTCH

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        This is amazing!! I already feel like I know your characters!!!

        electra replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        OMG that is soo good. Please tag me.

          ladymauve0214 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Of course! Thanks so much!

        basicallykiko77 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Wow!!! That’s one of the most detailed and engaging stories I’ve ever read on here, please tag me! This is amazing, you’re such a great writer!

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        I love it!!

        em0689 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Can you please tag me.

    ladymauve0214 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 1 month ago

    Here are some more bios for my story, first chapter coming out soon!

    Name: Aziza of Mahadeva
    Nickname/s: Zize
    Age: 13-15
    Birthday: 2nd March
    School: Evil
    Dorm: 49 Mischief Tower
    Home: Darkmair Castle, Mahadeva
    Fingerglow: Magenta
    Family: Lady of the Green Kirtle (mother), unknown deceased father
    Clothes: Dark grey t-shirt, purple leather…[Read more]

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Fantastic!! Just one thing: I’ve noticed that nearly all your characters are excellent at reading people. I’m not quite sure if that is important to the plot of the story, and so you did that intentionally, or not. If that is case, I apologize. Or if they are all some type of inhuman beings who are all really good at reading people. Sorry, once…[Read more]

          ladymauve0214 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Yeah… actually I think I just blanked at what to do for their talents and stuff. Oops. Maybe I’ll just make that some kind of super important thing in the future for this…

        inlovewithbooks replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        This is awesome! Can’t wait 4 chapter 1!

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Amazing! They all seem really well-rounded and actually have realistic flaws!!

    ladymauve0214 posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 1 month ago

    Hey guys! I had a very old profile ages ago, and I lost my password for that, so I had to make a new account. I have this weird thing where I start an RP, then stop after a while if I fall slightly out of interest of it, then make a whole new one again, so this is about my fourth one now. These are the bios and I’ll have more coming out later.…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Amazing!!!

        inlovewithbooks replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        *whistles* wow this is so good can u tag me for ur RP?

          ladymauve0214 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Sure!

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Awesome! Yeah, I know…I do the same exact thing with my stories…

        autumnofwoodsbeyond replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Nice!

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Awesome! What was your old account by the way; there’s a 90% I remember you.

        pugsforever replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Tag me in the future! I love this! ❤️