Hi Soman, the ‘Crystal of Time’ book was super. Loved the plot twists. Can’t wait to read the next one. I wish Rhian didn’t die, because Japeth is scary. But for the sake of the story the scarier one is the best…
Any idea’s for my second chapter. I may not use all of it but still I would like some ideas…
Besides her going to the school for good of course. I want something of sub-plots. If you have any ideas for my story as a whole. It’d be welcome.
This is my first role play ever so don’t judge if I mess up somewhere.
Chapter 1: The Choice
An argument broke over lunch again. Lily Starling hated proving her point to her family again. The feeling of sorrow became so deep that tears started leaking out of her eyes. No one in her family especially Lauren, her sister, wanted her to go to the…[Read more]
Thanks a lot. To be honest I was extremely surprised how this turned out. Usually for me, I can’t ever write a good story because the dialogues are a bit spaced out, if you know what I mean.
Ps. Do you know how to tag people in chats. I’ve joined recently and I don’t know how.
Name: Lily Starling
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Brown
Hails From: Rapunzel story
Finger glow: violet
Favorite colors: violet and orange
doing what she doesn’t want to do
Qualities: king, open-minded, loyal, trustworthy, honest
Flaws: sometimes she trusts the wrong…[Read more]
I’ve yet to think of a backstory. It’ll reveal itself through the story itself. I don’t know how it’ll go so far.