lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 day, 16 hours ago

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    Chapter 4: Dare Me!!
    The morning classes passed without much going on though Amara tried to top Kayla in lessons and was frustrated that she couldn’t quite match it. Amara hatched a plan to get what she wanted…and she knew how to succeed because she had an advantage that Kayla didn’t have. “Oh yes, Eve…[Read more]

        lunalyra22 replied 1 day, 10 hours ago

        Love it! I can’t wait to read the next chapter

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 days, 14 hours ago

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    Chapter 6: A Fight to Remember
    Lea’s POV
    Orchid and Flame barely spoke the next day, if they did they would respond with a frosty glare. Lea was out of ideas to bring them together, and would frequently be asked to pick a side. She was extremely confused since she liked both o…[Read more]

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 5 days, 16 hours ago

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    Chapter 3: Enter Prince Charming

    The three girls entered the Theatre of Tales. Kayla marvels at the crystal pews, and the tapestries at the side showcasing what it meant to be Ever After. She noticed that the marble walkway separated the two Schools and that the respective guardians made sure no one crossed over.…[Read more]

        bree132 replied 5 days, 13 hours ago

        Tag me! THIS IS AMAZING!

          lilystarling replied 5 days, 13 hours ago

          @bree132, check my activity to read previous chapters, just be warned that I’m doing this and another story simultaneously so you might have to scroll back.

        lunalyra22 replied 5 days, 11 hours ago

        That was so long but so good! 😁

          lilystarling replied 5 days, 11 hours ago

          I know it was, Ideas kept coming…

        lunalyra22 replied 5 days, 11 hours ago

        I love that, ‘ideas kept coming’. Pretty much describes my life so far, all of my 11 years

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 6 days, 9 hours ago

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    Chapter 5: Secrets
    ‘Lea have you seen Flame anywhere?’ said Orchid, shaking her friend awake. ‘Why? Isn’t she here?’ yawned Lea. ‘No! That’s what I’m trying to tell you. Her bed is still empty…and it’s midnight.’ said Orchid. ‘Oh dear, I thought she’d come in by now.’ said Lea, throwing on her…[Read more]

        lifeasabookworm replied 5 days, 13 hours ago

        I absolutely love your narrative skills! For improvement…Add more imagery and depth into the writing. But, I think in this case you just wanted to focus on their speech and how they communicate with each other. Id love to have a description added in somewhere 🙂 You seem like you are a good writer tho!

        lilystarling replied 5 days, 13 hours ago

        I’m more good with Dialog than adding Description though but I’ll try…
        Do you want to be tagged? @lifeasabookworm

          lifeasabookworm replied 5 days, 12 hours ago

          Sure. Id Love to be! Your dialogue is AMAZING tho! Id love you trying description as well

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 week, 2 days ago

    @LUNALYRA22, This is my entry for the Short Story Contest.

    Prompt: That’s odd, I thought to myself as I reached the next landing and glanced up at the next set of stairs. I don’t remember there being another set of stairs here before. Is this what the old man was talking about when he said…

    Continued:when he said…
    ‘Be careful Jackie, there’s t…[Read more]

        princezzdot replied 1 week, 2 days ago

        Didn’t you already post this?

        lilystarling replied 1 week, 2 days ago

        I did but I’m not sure if LUNALYRA22 saw that post.

          princezzdot replied 1 week, 2 days ago

          She could’ve read it but not responded.

        lunalyra22 replied 1 week, 2 days ago

        @princezzdot, I didn’t read it already! 👍

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 week, 3 days ago

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    Chapter 2: A Rude Awakening
    ‘Kayla, wake up sleeping beauty, Do you even know where you are? I’m surprised really, you’re nothing but a fool to be taken to Good.’ said a familiar mean voice. ‘Ginger, is that you. What are you doing at my house?’ mumbled Kayla. ‘I’m not, you’re on a bony bird taken to the le…[Read more]

        lunalyra22 replied 1 week, 3 days ago

        I wonder who Kayla’s prince will be…

        princezzdot replied 1 week, 2 days ago

        Great chapter! My only advice is that when people speak, their words are put in “s (quotation marks), not s’ (apostrophes)

          lilystarling replied 1 week, 2 days ago

          @princezzdot do you want to be tagged?

          BTW I thought using ‘ would make for better reading and because when I’m typing fast it’s easier to use. But thanks anyway for the constructive criticism.

        princezzdot replied 1 week, 2 days ago

        I’ll try to see this story when I can, but no tag please. Anyways, it makes it easier for typing not reading. Your welcome!

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 1 week, 3 days ago

    @LUNALYRA22
    This is my entry for the short story contest…hope you enjoy it.

    Prompt: That’s odd, I thought to myself as I reached the next landing and glanced up at the next set of stairs. I don’t remember there being another set of stairs here before. Is this what the old man was talking about when he said…

    Continued:when he said……[Read more]

        lilystarling replied 1 week, 3 days ago

        One thing I forgot…was that it was Jackie who released the Nine who blasted the rings allowing them to escape. I forgot to include that…

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 weeks, 2 days ago

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    Chapter 1: A New Life
    ‘Hi Kayl. You realize that pretending doesn’t help you. I know you spread that rumor about me.’ said Ginger angrily.
    ‘Would I ever do that to you Ginge. I don’t hate you just why are you so mean.’ whimpered Kayla
    ‘I know you did do it because of spite.’ snapped Ginger.
    ‘Haven’…[Read more]

        lunalyra22 replied 2 weeks, 2 days ago

        Thanks for tagging me!
        Love your story!
        I will tag you for chapter three for my story go on favorites to see it 😉

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 weeks, 3 days ago

    I’ve come up with another idea for a story. If you like it, I’ll write the simultaneously with Flame’s story.
    Name: Kayla Throne
    Nicknames: Kay, Ayla, Kayl,
    School: Good
    From: Wood Beyond
    Personality: Weak, timid, hard time standing up for herself, loyal, generous, nervous,
    Flaws: Weak, timid, afraid of spiders and reptiles, often jumps to…[Read more]

        never11ever8 replied 2 weeks, 3 days ago

        Can you tag me? This is so good!

          lilystarling replied 2 weeks, 3 days ago

          I will…

        lunalyra22 replied 2 weeks, 3 days ago

        TAG ME please this is great

    lilystarling posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 weeks, 3 days ago

    Sorry for the delay…but it took some time before I could come up with the plot.
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    Chapter 4: Classes and A Little bit of Trouble
    ‘Girls pay attention, today’s lesson is to make smiles kinder then maybe you’ll be good enough to attract someone. You better try your hardest than the usual batch I’ve…[Read more]

        sallysallysally replied 2 weeks, 3 days ago

        Awesome chapter!

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