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Chapter two! Please let me know if you wanna be tagged, or un-tagged. Last chapter almost no one said anything about it…..oh, also, I am switching to first person!
“Oh Nari, what do I do?” I whispered. Suddenly, someone screamed. I jumped. nari looked at me, her beady little eyes curious. “Hang on Nari!” I said, already running out the door. Thats when the crying, no sobbing, started up. Weird, screaming sobs, coming from. ….where?! My foot hit something hard and I tripped. “Oww.” I groaned. What was happening? ! I sa t up, rubbing my foot. Beatrix called, “What JUST HAPPENED?!” ” MUM?! ARE YOU OK?! ” my mother didn’t answer. That worried me. Heart pounding, I sprinted to the garden, where the sobs were coming from. “MOM! ANSWE R ME! ” I got to the garden, and almost fainted. My mother, lying down in a pool of blood. I screamed. Now, I heard beatrixs footsteps. “BEA! GET HELP! NOW!” I yelled. I heard her frantic footsteps heading towards the kitchen, witch was the nearest exit. I ran towards mom. That’s when I saw the thing. A bird made out of bones. Wait. Bones? Whatever. I didn’t have time for questions . “Mum?” I said, in a quiet voice. She moaned. The bird cawed. I heard siren. And that’s when the bird lunged.
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