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chapter 1 part 6 (last part in chapter 1)
“So, not a lot of people here, we got some time before Pollux comes, and there is nobody looking over here.” He said, looking around. I laughed and, by accident, snorted. Then we both started chuckling, after a while we stopped. As I grabbed my…[Read more]
Nice job! You did the division of speaking right! I loved it!
I give credit to @cringeykid for proofreading (She and I go to the same school)
(I’m really glad to say my tag list is growing, slowly, but still growing) Tag list: @readerfan1, @errinclawhunter, and @smartcleverbunny560
Chapter 1 part 5
“I’ve been meaning to ask you, do you like me? But it’s too late because-” Zac started, “Because you threw your rose to me, so now I know how you feel.” I finish. He smiles at me. “What makes…[Read more]
Great job! I really liked it! Do you mind if I give you a few tips? So, when a character speaks, they get their own line. For example- (I’m just going to make something up)
Sally twirled with e rest of her class when her dance teacher walked in. (Then you go to the next line when she speaks)
“Good morning Miss Samantha! ” she said with the rest of…[Read more]
Sorry, there were a couple of spelling errors in my previous comment.
Thank you for the tips, I really appreciate it. Also, do you want me to tag you for my story?
You already are! Your welcome. Just just thought it could help!
Cool! May I give a few tips?
One, just be sure to keep your tenses in check. Otherwise it gets jumbled up, for instance: (I’m making this up)
Terence jumped across the street. He looks back and smiles.
‘Jumped’ and ‘looks’ are in different tenses.
You can’t change tenses; you have to keep them the same.
And two, when you make a character speak,…[Read more]
What are the Ages for Sophie, Agatha, and Tedros throughout the trilogy?
Tedros is sixteen in the last book, so I’m assuming that Agatha and Sophie are about fifteen or sixteen.
Yeah, they aren’t married by then end of book three, and we don’t know if the will get married at the end of book four because The Camelot Years is a trilogy.
In the deleted scene from book one it says Sophie is 15 but in book 3 Sophie thinks “he looked not a day over 16 no older than her” so somewhere around there 🙂
I’m pretty sure in book3 it says Tedros and Sophie are both 16, Tedros because of his cornation, Sophie because of the line at the beginning of book 3 “he looked no older than 16, no older than her.” or something. I don’t think it says Agatha’s though. So I WOULD ASSUME that in book 1 they were 14, book 2 15, book 3 16. but then again, idrk
@otaku88 thats what I thought too
I’m not sure if you continue to have the tagged people on your tag list, if so, Tag list: @readerfan1
Chapter 1 part 4
He looked through the crowd and smiled. He threw his rose into the crowd. I closed my eyes and was disappointed. I didn’t open my eyes, because I was sure I wasn’t the one who got the rose. I sighed and opened my eyes. Only to see…[Read more]
I love it! I really like the story even though I have only read chapter 1 part 4. Can I be on your tag list so I can read every new part of your story comes out?
ok @errinclawhunter, I’ll make sure to put you on my tag list! I’m glad to See people are actually interested!
Cool! I’m going to read the rest of the chapters later, but can you tag me for your story?
I know you may have already answered this question, but will the Movie be all 3 book in one, or the first book only?
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Chapter 1 part 3
Pollux walks up attached to another head, angrier and foaming at the mouth. The cute friendly looking Pollux clears his throat. “Welcome Evers and Nevers-” Pollux starts. “YOU BUTTS BETTER BEHAVE AND ACT PURELY ACCORDING TO YOUR ASSIGNED SCHOOL!!!” The foaming head cut through. “Castor. Please let me finish…[Read more]
Okay, ummm…… I’m new here and… Um, can someone PLEASE keep me up-to-date with this story? Just tag me and I’ll find out [BTW what does Tag mean? I mean, I get the gist of it and all, but can someone explain that to me with more details?
Thanks, Isla of NorthWoods Beyond
ok so I don’t know about tagging or anything, I joined a couple days ago and I’m still figuring everything out. And to catch you up, click my name and click Activity, then scroll till you find one labeled chapter 1
Then you scroll up to chapter 1 part 2, then you can re-read chapter 1 part 3 if you want to
Chapter 1 part 2
I get to my first class: Beautification and Grooming with Professor Anemone and sit at my desk. As the Ever girls flood into the room, I look through the creams, and brushes and whatnot. I look to see if anyone was looking at me, and just as I go to grab the bottle, Wolves howl loudly. It was the third day of School, and we…[Read more]
You tag like this
@ annabell104
but close together.
@annabell104
Mr. Chainani,
I know you’ve already been there, but can you visit Minnesota again for a School talk? (Preferably Valley View Middle school) in Edina. I was at Creek Valleyl when you went to Visit (Which was AMAZING by the way) I’m SUPER into the school for good and evil books. Some of my friends read it (it being some of the first book), but…[Read more]
Hello Soman!
I’ve recently been considering which University or Collage to go to, and I was wondering if you had a suggestion as to which? I am looking to be an Author and I would love to go to the one that would be best for that. Thanks!
I’m not Soman (sadly), but I can tell you that there are many good schools for you if you want to focus on writing. Soman went to Harvard, so that is an option. Or you can go to Yale or Oxford. All of them are prestigious schools. But they are really hard to get into, so maybe you would want to consult your parents and do a Google search for good…[Read more]
And btw, is your Luna username Luna Lovegood from Harry Potter?
omg do you guys like harry potter it is one of my fav thing s at the momment
I live in Minnesota and I’m trying to get to a cheap(ish) but good university or collage, I’m thinking of maybe the U of M but I’m also considering the University of Iowa. I might do the U of M but I would like the recommendation before a final decision.
Yup, I’m a BIG fan of Harry Potter. But now I’m a BIG fan of SGE. 😉