My Ranking Points
Hi Soman I was just wondering how come you decided to change from third person point of view to first person for Clarissa Dovey’s chapter? It’s just something I noticed and I am curious to know why you chose to do so.
Maybe its so that we can come closer to the character before….
I thought it was so there would be a clear difference between Clarissas chapter and the others
I love that chapter.
I think it’s so you don’t get confused as third person Agatha, eg:
Tedros ran towards her and pushed her out of the battlefield.
“I’ll find you!” He said. “Now go! Find Dovey, she’s over there, and take her too!”
Agatha hauled up Dovey and ran as they started to change back to their forms.
Soon Agatha was just Agatha and Dovey was… Tedros.
They looked back and saw Dovey about to be killed.