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Ernestina, Rekela, and I swam through schools of fish, over beds of coral, and under hanging seaweed. Finally, we got to an area that had a beaded curtain in front of it. “Welcome… to Paradise,” Ernestina said, holding open the curtain. Inside was a small beach house, surrounded by palm trees and beds of coral. “This is amazing!” I said, my jaw dropping. “But how is this all underwater?”
What else? Magic!” Rekela said, grinning at the look on my face. “Wow,” was all I could say. Just then, a person came out of the house that I would NEVER have expected.
I know it’s short, but I wanted to leave it on a cliffhanger
To be honest I don’t really like cliffhangers but I still love this one it’s great and I didn’t mind the cliffhanger.