Hey guys! Today I just gathered all of the chapters written so far into one post, and added a bit more.
Neveah blinked, her eyes fuzzy and her head pounding. Where was she? She was an enormous bed, pink sheets and pink covers on…[Read more]
This is really good! However, there is a lot of plot holes, why is she suddenly in beautification after sitting on a pink bed moments before? Tag me though, this is interesting!
Thanks for the tips! I’ll tag you. I was kinda in a hurry, so I didn’t get to space it well, but there’s actually three and a half chapters in here. Each of the *** is separating the chapters. Sorry if it was a bit confusing, I’ll try to make it better! Overall, thanks a lot for the criticism, it helps me become a better writer!
Sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I haven’t been on here in a while. But I really like it!
Lol sorry this is really short. I didn’t have a lot of free time today
Neveah was already awake when Rosilla and her other roommates woke up. She couldn’t go back to sleep after her dream last night. A dark figure had come to her and…[Read more]
Neveah sat open mouthed in her first class at the School for Good. Beautification. Her teacher, Professor Emma Anemone had wild neon yellow hair, a blindingly pink dress, and from what Neveah has gathered from the lecture she had given, was obsessed with being the prettiest.…[Read more]
Name: Dawn of Nettle Forest
Legacy Relatives: Granddaughter of Rita of Nettle Forest (aka Red Riding Hood)
Appearance: wavy chocolate brown hair with auburn streaks that just reaches her chin, a mischievous smile, pale skin, eyes the colour of tree bark,…[Read more]
Shimmering Crystals: Chapter 4 “Why Beauty Matters”
When I woke up on the morning of my first day of classes, I found the perfect shade of red nail polish and freshened up my perfect nails.
“Ready for first day of classes, Acantha?,” Hailey said, “According to our schedules, our first c…[Read more]