agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 9 months ago

    Hey guys! Today I just gathered all of the chapters written so far into one post, and added a bit more.

    Taggies:

    @Dream-Faerie
    @Effie
    @Pearly-Waddles
    @Maddy101
    @Ever1Never8
    @everimagine
    @merqueen23
    @hester112
    @lilbugs

    Neveah blinked, her eyes fuzzy and her head pounding. Where was she? She was an enormous bed, pink sheets and pink covers on…[Read more]

        princezzdot replied 9 months ago

        This is really good! However, there is a lot of plot holes, why is she suddenly in beautification after sitting on a pink bed moments before? Tag me though, this is interesting!

          agatha79 replied 9 months ago

          Thanks for the tips! I’ll tag you. I was kinda in a hurry, so I didn’t get to space it well, but there’s actually three and a half chapters in here. Each of the *** is separating the chapters. Sorry if it was a bit confusing, I’ll try to make it better! Overall, thanks a lot for the criticism, it helps me become a better writer!

        princezzdot replied 9 months ago

        Your welcome!

        effie replied 5 months ago

        Sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I haven’t been on here in a while. But I really like it!

          princezzdot replied 5 months ago

          I remember you from, like, when I very first joined!

    agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 9 months, 1 week ago

    Lol sorry this is really short. I didn’t have a lot of free time today

    Taggies:

    @Dream-Faerie

    @Effie

    @Pearly-Waddles

    @Maddy101

    @Ever1Never8

    @everimagine

    @merqueen23

    Chapter 3

    Neveah was already awake when Rosilla and her other roommates woke up. She couldn’t go back to sleep after her dream last night. A dark figure had come to her and…[Read more]

        merqueen23 replied 9 months, 1 week ago

        That.Was.AWESOME!!!

        ssssssssssssssssssssssssssss replied 9 months, 1 week ago

        yeah, that was super good!

        hetherthenever replied 9 months, 1 week ago

        how is that short????!!!!!!

        hester112 replied 9 months, 1 week ago

        Please tag me!!!!

        lilbugs replied 9 months, 1 week ago

        Pls tagg meeeeehhhhhhhh

    agatha79 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 1 week ago

    @DREAM-FAERIE
    @EFFIE
    @PEARLY-WADDLES
    @MADDY101
    @NEVER11EVER8

    Chapter 2:
    Neveah sat open mouthed in her first class at the School for Good. Beautification. Her teacher, Professor Emma Anemone had wild neon yellow hair, a blindingly pink dress, and from what Neveah has gathered from the lecture she had given, was obsessed with being the prettiest.…[Read more]

        everimagine replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        This is so good! Taggles please!

          sohamw replied 10 months, 1 week ago

          this is amazing

        merqueen23 replied 10 months ago

        Plz tag me, that was amazing!!

    pearly-waddles posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months, 2 weeks ago

    @princessrachael
    @maddy101
    @dream-faerie
    @skylerjackson

    Name: Dawn of Nettle Forest
    Gender: Girl
    Age: 12
    School: Good
    Legacy Relatives: Granddaughter of Rita of Nettle Forest (aka Red Riding Hood)
    Appearance: wavy chocolate brown hair with auburn streaks that just reaches her chin, a mischievous smile, pale skin, eyes the colour of tree bark,…[Read more]

    pearly-waddles posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 11 months, 2 weeks ago

    Tags:
    @princessrachael
    @dream-faerie
    @maddy101
    Shimmering Crystals: Chapter 4 “Why Beauty Matters”
    Acantha’s POV
    When I woke up on the morning of my first day of classes, I found the perfect shade of red nail polish and freshened up my perfect nails.
    “Ready for first day of classes, Acantha?,” Hailey said, “According to our schedules, our first c…[Read more]

        skylerjackson replied 11 months, 2 weeks ago

        Please tag me! It’s really good. 😀

          pearly-waddles replied 11 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks! I will be sure to tag you!