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This is the beginning of my story :
Madeline was sitting up in bed. This is the night.she thought she was positive she was going to get kidnapped this year. Then,she saw a shadowy figure float away with her.she grabbed her bags and away they went. She was right next to Michael, the mischievous boy.
Oh, I sorta messed up a bit. Here this one makes more sense:
Suddenly, a sound came from outside. Terra turned around, her eyes wide with fear. As she slowly opened the front door the tiniest bit, something behind her snapped. She whipped her head to the back of the room, but there was nothing there. Terra looked back through the door and she screamed as she saw…
Nice! Btw if u need more characters in your story, u can use mineeeee. My bio’s @megannnyap