majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago

    @Kayla-t (the cool one)

    Chapter 1

    The world is on fire. I run to see the people I know and love being eaten by flames. I hear a low voice, β€œYou did this on your own, Jade.” I whirl around, and the sky turns an ominous shade of smokey grey. A person with milky skin and raven hair turns; I wake up panting, crisscrossed over and under a dozen sib…[Read more]

        kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Yes, those who are taken to sge are between 12 – 16.
        Improvement points:
        Try not to introduce too many characters in a chapter. If you do, give it some space. Take a paragraph talking about them, get the reader to like/dislike them. It is helpful with the ages, but as soon as you read that much about people in such a short amount of space, you…[Read more]

          kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Sorry is that was too much points at once, I believe that there is always room for improvement.

          kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          What is the title of this story called?

          majik26 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Woah, are you my editor now? πŸ˜›

        kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Sorry. I like to help others achieve good work. I just like to be credited in others work because I know that I can never get good myself. It’s my Slytherin side. Sorry.

          majik26 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Awww, I didn’t mean that in a bad way. You are a real sweetheart.

        kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ Thanks. I usually take things in the worst way possible. One of my many flaws. Don’t worry too much. Sorry. It’s true though. May I ask how old you are?

          majik26 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          I’m sorry, but no.

        kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        That’s okay. I was just curious.

        angelectra replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Wow I was planning to give some pointers then @kayla-t pretty much got most of them lol XD. I’ll just say that I think you should split up your paragraphs just a little bit (not too much) because it makes it easier to see the transitions (and doesn’t scare some people *cough cough me* with a huge block of words.)

    majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 1 year, 10 months ago

    Epilogue
    I don’t know how I ended up in prison.
    The laws of my town have always been in black and white. Do this. Don’t do this.
    My eyes feel foggy as I cough heavily. I watch water drip down the corner of the cell and I sag down onto the floor and tentatively touch the scar on my face that goes down my eye to my chin. I hear footsteps come down…[Read more]

        majik26 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        I am so sorry, I didn’t mean to write epilogue, I meant to write prologue! This is the first of many mistakes!

        kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Tag me please. Is this a Fan-fic for the SGE or a made up story?

          majik26 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

          Yes, it’s SGE.

        kayla-t replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Cool. I just got a bit confused about why it started like this and If you accidentely posted in the wrong chat

        theraven18 replied 1 year, 10 months ago

        Just a bit of advice, even though you’re really good at describing action and stuff, you might want to add a little bit in the way of description rather than people fighting all the time. Like this it feels a bit rushed. But it’s good, keep it up!

    majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 5 months ago

    Hello Evers and Nevers!
    This is Chapter 5 of Hillside Rose.
    Please, please, please read this story. C’mon. (Also, please notice I spelled out “please” instead of “plz”.
    Your Welcome.
    Anyway, tell me if you want to be tagged, because I am so lonely. So lonely. And quiet. HelloOoOoOo??
    Hillside Rose
    Chapter 5
    The Queen of School
    Quinn had hit…[Read more]

        srose2 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Ummm… is this about Sophie, Tedros, and Agatha? Because otherwise it is a RP and belongs in the RP section.

          majik26 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          No, it’s not an RP. This will make sense later in the series. >:)

          donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          If it’s about Sophie, Tedros and Agatha and it also includes your own characters it’s considered fan fiction, but it doesn’t have to include your own. If it only includes other characters that you’ve created in the SGE universe then I think it’s RPing. I hope this helps! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I love your story! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Amazing!!

    majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 5 months ago

    Chapter 4
    –X–X–
    Finnick had always believed in magic. Always defended little miracles. But this was something else.
    Beautiful boys and girls arrived on the same birds. Fairies flew around, herding groups of teenagers towards the castle.
    The Castle! It was shiny white, with four blue and pink towers. Finnick followed a group into the castle. Two…[Read more]

        majik26 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Sorry made a mistake, Finnick was on the 1st floor. πŸ˜›

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I love this! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing!!!

    majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 5 months ago

    Quinn’s throat was raw from screaming.
    The black tinted ***** bird held her tightly by its talons. It ripped into her shoulders, and Quinn started to swing and kicked its rib cage.
    The stymph squaked in suprise and dropped her.
    Quinn fell, down, down, down.
    “I’m going to die,” she whispered.
    The bony bird was right below her. She expected to be…[Read more]

        vampireprincess replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Nice one!
        xxxxxxx

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I love it!!!

    majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 5 months ago

    Quinn awoke with a sudden jolt. She had a nightmare.
    A red haired wolf in a golden dress was chasing her… a tree grew mossy vines and caught Quinn in them, the tree’s arms lifted to find Hannah’s sweet blue eyes fearfully staring…
    Quinn realized she was panting.
    Quinn looked around in the darkness of the house. She saw Hannah, perfect…[Read more]

        majik26 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        This is Chapter 2 by the way!

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Cool! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Awesome!

    majik26 posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 2 years, 5 months ago

    When you feel so awesome that Soman answered your question πŸ˜€

        suyinbouchot replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        You sure do! I’m a huge fan of Soman!

          jessofwoodsbeyond replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          same he is an amazing auther

    majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 5 months ago

    Ok, I’m gonna pause Anadil’s love story (for now) and write about a character that’s, frankly, been in my head for a long time. Her name is Quinn, and she lives in Hillside Rose. Hillside Rose is a village like Gavaldon, and takes one evil and one good child. The only reason you have not heard to Hillside Rose, is because only a series of Mogrifs…[Read more]

        majik26 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Should I do another? Post a comment below!

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        I love it!!

    majik26 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 2 years, 5 months ago

    Part 2 or Chapter 2 or Section 2…. Section 2! Yeah.
    Anadil threw her arms in front of her face to protect it. Raven must be taunting me, cursing me, OH MY GOD AM I AM TOAD RIGHT NOW??? Anadil looked down at her body. Ok, I’m fine, Anadil soothed herself as she grabbed the ladle from the punch. “Relax,’ Raven snorted, looking down at his clothes.…[Read more]

        donutqueen11 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        kitkat446 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Wow! I love the idea!

        impossiblegirl replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        This is great!

    majik26 posted an update in the group QUESTIONS FOR SOMAN 2 years, 5 months ago

    Has anyone’s questions EVER been answered here??

        fairytalegirl123 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Yes

        Soman Chainani replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        mmhm

          jamieparker replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          Soman sass.

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