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@Kayla-t (the cool one)
The world is on fire. I run to see the people I know and love being eaten by flames. I hear a low voice, “You did this on your own, Jade.” I whirl around, and the sky turns an ominous shade of smokey grey. A person with milky skin and raven hair turns; I wake up panting, crisscrossed over and under a dozen sib…[Read more]
Yes, those who are taken to sge are between 12 – 16.
Try not to introduce too many characters in a chapter. If you do, give it some space. Take a paragraph talking about them, get the reader to like/dislike them. It is helpful with the ages, but as soon as you read that much about people in such a short amount of space, you…[Read more]
Sorry is that was too much points at once, I believe that there is always room for improvement.
Sorry. I like to help others achieve good work. I just like to be credited in others work because I know that I can never get good myself. It’s my Slytherin side. Sorry.
🙂 🙂 🙂 Thanks. I usually take things in the worst way possible. One of my many flaws. Don’t worry too much. Sorry. It’s true though. May I ask how old you are?
Wow I was planning to give some pointers then @kayla-t pretty much got most of them lol XD. I’ll just say that I think you should split up your paragraphs just a little bit (not too much) because it makes it easier to see the transitions (and doesn’t scare some people *cough cough me* with a huge block of words.)
I don’t know how I ended up in prison.
The laws of my town have always been in black and white. Do this. Don’t do this.
My eyes feel foggy as I cough heavily. I watch water drip down the corner of the cell and I sag down onto the floor and tentatively touch the scar on my face that goes down my eye to my chin. I hear footsteps come down…[Read more]
I am so sorry, I didn’t mean to write epilogue, I meant to write prologue! This is the first of many mistakes!
Tag me please. Is this a Fan-fic for the SGE or a made up story?
Cool. I just got a bit confused about why it started like this and If you accidentely posted in the wrong chat
Hello Evers and Nevers!
This is Chapter 5 of Hillside Rose.
Please, please, please read this story. C’mon. (Also, please notice I spelled out “please” instead of “plz”.
Anyway, tell me if you want to be tagged, because I am so lonely. So lonely. And quiet. HelloOoOoOo??
The Queen of School
Quinn had hit…[Read more]
Ummm… is this about Sophie, Tedros, and Agatha? Because otherwise it is a RP and belongs in the RP section.
No, it’s not an RP. This will make sense later in the series. >:)
If it’s about Sophie, Tedros and Agatha and it also includes your own characters it’s considered fan fiction, but it doesn’t have to include your own. If it only includes other characters that you’ve created in the SGE universe then I think it’s RPing. I hope this helps! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Finnick had always believed in magic. Always defended little miracles. But this was something else.
Beautiful boys and girls arrived on the same birds. Fairies flew around, herding groups of teenagers towards the castle.
The Castle! It was shiny white, with four blue and pink towers. Finnick followed a group into the castle. Two…[Read more]
Quinn’s throat was raw from screaming.
The black tinted ***** bird held her tightly by its talons. It ripped into her shoulders, and Quinn started to swing and kicked its rib cage.
The stymph squaked in suprise and dropped her.
Quinn fell, down, down, down.
“I’m going to die,” she whispered.
The bony bird was right below her. She expected to be…[Read more]
Quinn awoke with a sudden jolt. She had a nightmare.
A red haired wolf in a golden dress was chasing her… a tree grew mossy vines and caught Quinn in them, the tree’s arms lifted to find Hannah’s sweet blue eyes fearfully staring…
Quinn realized she was panting.
Quinn looked around in the darkness of the house. She saw Hannah, perfect…[Read more]
Ok, I’m gonna pause Anadil’s love story (for now) and write about a character that’s, frankly, been in my head for a long time. Her name is Quinn, and she lives in Hillside Rose. Hillside Rose is a village like Gavaldon, and takes one evil and one good child. The only reason you have not heard to Hillside Rose, is because only a series of Mogrifs…[Read more]
Part 2 or Chapter 2 or Section 2…. Section 2! Yeah.
Anadil threw her arms in front of her face to protect it. Raven must be taunting me, cursing me, OH MY GOD AM I AM TOAD RIGHT NOW??? Anadil looked down at her body. Ok, I’m fine, Anadil soothed herself as she grabbed the ladle from the punch. “Relax,’ Raven snorted, looking down at his clothes.…[Read more]