marmalitelover posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 2 years, 10 months ago

    Name: Cyr 
    Age: 19 
    Affiliation: Neutral 
    Region: The Outskirts 
    Fairytale Relative: Various  
    Plague (yes or no): Cyr has the plague, but it takes longer to manifest, due to his metaphysical lineage. 
    Appearance: He has skin of a deathlike pallor, smooth with no blemishes, which contrasts his inky, jet-black hair. Said hair is medium length…[Read more]

        sherlock replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Nice bio! It’s very detailed, which is good, but there’s a few things you need to fix before joining the RP:
        1. your character has to align with one of the schools. They can see themselves as neutral, but they still have to choose one or the other for RP purposes.
        2. Cyr seems a bit OP in terms of past and personality/Talent. This isn’t huge, and…[Read more]

          marmalitelover replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          No, I am not, I had never heard of them before this comment, what an unfortunate coincidence. Ma boi @arian2 is ok with it, in fact, he helped me plan out my character, and integrate it with Ace’s and Esme’s story lines. As to aligning with one of the schools, i’m unclear as to what you mean. Would you recommend I repost an edited version of my…[Read more]

          marmalitelover replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          *band

          sherlock replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          If you could repost a new version of your bio, that would be great and really helpful for the future 🙂
          As for the school, your character has to be under the label of “Good” or “Evil” within the RP. We don’t do explicitly neutral characters, as that goes against the original books. Your character could still act neutral, or not be too extreme when…[Read more]

          marmalitelover replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          Will do in in the morning, its past midnight here in Britain, where we spell colour as ‘colour’ an grey as ‘grey’. Lovin’ life.

        nightshade11 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        *are
        What Sherlock said, definitely. I like the details about the scruffy clothes 🙂

          marmalitelover replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          Thanks.

        arian2 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        Sherlock, for reference, we are both fans of Jacksfilms, and I have watched Vincent Cyr in the past, which is why I suggested the name “Cyr” after we pulled up “Vincent” on a baby name site. Also, this guy is the co-creator of:

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          sherlock replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          (btw I showed that video to my friend and she said it was her savior)
          (so now a random American teenager wants you to do a second one)

          nightshade11 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          Also a random American ************* (aka me) feels the same as Sherlock’s friend

          nightshade11 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

          Correction: “not-so-teenager,” which is not inappropriate whatsoever

          fluffypenguins replied 2 years, 9 months ago

          that video was so powerful it nearly drove me to tears
          perfection

          fluffypenguins replied 2 years, 9 months ago

          Sent this to the group chat with no context, this should be fun

        arian2 replied 2 years, 10 months ago

        We’re on it.

          nightshade11 replied 2 years, 9 months ago

          Bless

          nightshade11 replied 2 years, 9 months ago

          Or, given the contents of this extraordinary but also godforsaken video, h*ll yeah