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Chapter 1: On her birthday
Rosette woke up at 3 AM. She was so tired she could barely walk, but she just couldn’t sleep.
Today was her 15th Birthday, the first Birthday without her parents talking about parties. Ever since her parents left, she felt so comfortable…like the fact that she won’t be yelled at even if she wore shorts, and T-shirts. According to the laws of this forest she would be crowned Queen today, for she had turned 15 now. ( The law of Forest Rasmp is to be crowned Queen/King after turning 15. )
To her, it felt more like a torture than a celebration. Having to be styled is more than enough for her, and she couldn’t bear the thought of having to walk clumsily in a dress that looks over too fancy. Worst of all, every single living soul in the forest are invited to this coronation. That means more eyes that will see the new Queen, the queen that everyone calls beautiful. Indeed, she was beautiful. With gorgeous brown hair, and curled eyelashes, she was admired by everyone in the forest. Even the animals thought she was beautiful. But no, even if she liked being clean, Rosette never valued her beauty first. She thought that the inner beauty should be much more valued than the outer one. “It’s what’s inside you that counts.” Her friend had said, her friend she loved so much…before she went to the School for Good and Evil and into her story. I hope she survived, she thought as she went to get ready for her coronation.
Nice job! Maybe skip lines when she thinks, but other than that, this is pretty good
Tagging is when you put @ before someone’s name in a post. Then your post goes into their mentions on their activities page. Tagging someone in a comment doesn’t do anything lol. They’re not going to see your comment if you tag them, or your post. So if you want someone to see your post tag them in it like this, @marigold Even though tagging you in a comment has done nothing I was just demonstrating how to tag. Hope I helped! 🙂