maurice posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Tear
    Tags:@HORSEYGAL38
    @GALVADON
    @PRINCESSRACHEL
    @COOLSCHOOL
    Chapter 3: Her

    After a few minutes of hearing the dog talk, the doors bust open revealing boys playfully clashing swords, suddenly they got to the front and threw roses at girls, one landed on Violets lap, Enunah and Emma noticed, they both looked so happy…[Read more]

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Ooh nice!

    maurice posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Hi guys it’s me again doing yet another bio, because it’s me. Hope you enjoy reading it
    and thanks for helping me choose a tittle for my story, now it’s called “Tear”

    Name: Albert of RavenBow
    Age: 12
    Gender: Male
    Likes: Killing evers, girls with black hair, poisoning people
    Dislikes: evers, cute things,
    Flaw: He really isn’t a never, but…[Read more]

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Good job!

    maurice posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Tags:@HORSEYGAL38
    @GALVADON
    @PRINCESSRACHEL
    @COOLSCHOOL
    Chapter 2: Who knew

    Violet hit the ground hard again, but at the same time Julia hit the ground and started to fake crying, every girl ran to Julia.
    “SHE PUSHED ME!!” Julia cried, though it was clearly fake to Violet, but others seem to believe the cry for att…[Read more]

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Oh my goodness I love your interpretation of the school uniform! It’s so cute! Also amazing chapter 😉

          maurice replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Thank you

    maurice posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Hi guys doing a profile for more Characters in the story! Hope you enjoy reading it

    Name: Julia of NeverLand
    Age: 12
    Gender: female
    Likes: Dresses, boys, friends, makeup, pink, fashion, and her crown
    Dislikes: black, chores, sports, cleaning, losing her makeup kit
    Flaw: is an Ever, but acts like a never to people she doesn’t like, and cares to m…[Read more]

        windmryl replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        I love the bio!!!!! Also, idk what you can do for your title so maybe you could find something symbolic in you story maybe. So if a horse is an important thing in your story you can title it something to do with a horse. It just makes the book even more special.

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Love it!!! Pls tag me. Maybe you could call it something to do with what happens later on in the story, but your readers don’t know about it yet, so they’d be like ‘what does that mean?’ I guess it could add some intrigue to the story. Let me know if you need any extra characters, I have plenty of bios if u want them 😉 🙂

        princessrachael replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        tag me as well

        maurice replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Thanks for the ideas guys

    maurice posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Chapter 1, And you are

    As Violet lifted her head, she felt pain on her knees, Violet sat up and checked, it was just one her bruises hitting the ground to hard, Violet to a glance around the field and all she saw were beautiful girls, with luscious hair, heart shaped lips, and beautiful tanned skin come out of the ground, in nothing but their…[Read more]

        horseygal38 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Love it — her dress is amazing!

          galvaldon replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Wow! Julia’s dress is so pretty! Tag me please! Your story is great.

        maurice replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Ok thanks for the tip

        coolschool replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        I love your story.Tag me please.

    maurice posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    How does this character for my story sound

    Name: Violet of BloodBrook
    Age: 12
    Gender: female
    Likes: being alone, eating, and sleeping (basically me every Saturday)
    Dislikes: boys, friends, girls, and her parents
    Flaw: when something is going wrong in her life she will push everyone away from her
    Best Attributes: loyal, shy, sweet ( once you get…[Read more]