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    mimipop posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 3 years, 8 months ago

    Chapter 11 (if you haven’t read the first few chapters, click here @mimipop :)) )

    Agatha would find Tedros. Merlin and Sophie would find the killer’s evidence. And Lancelot (who pouted over and over) would keep guard for Sophie and Merlin.
    “Agatha you’re in charge of finding Tedros.”
    “Sophie, you and me will look for clues”
    “And Lance, you keep guard.”
    “But I shan’t keep guard. I can do more, I objec-”
    But Merlin cut him off. He gathered their belongings, including the towel. Now it was all slimy and wet. Merlin told his hat to give it a real good clean. The hat agreed and it started to shake, cleaning the slimy towel. Agatha went out of the cave early for she looked in to the sunset. This was how she imagined Nevermore, the sun was red, the black towers were sharp as swords, and people were held hostage…by an evil lord. The three others came out fighting for who should be on guard.
    “I will NOT stand guard for you two.” Lancelot said, angrily
    “Well you aren’t qualified, I mean look at you…you hair is all ***** you have rings under your eyes, and you’re POUTING” Sophie replied, on the same tone
    “STOP. You’re fighting like cats and dogs. Sophie and I will be inspecting. GOT IT?” Merlin screamed, taking charge.
    Instantly, the two stopped, and looked at him, agape. The quartet made the long walk to the castle in silence, the moss under their feet, their legs aching, the branches scraping their knees, but they shill walked on and on, feeling a slight tension between them. When they finally reached the castle none dared to look at each other, all very conscious of the great danger that was ahead of them. Agatha saw four guard on the front gates, armor glistening in the sun. Agatha crept towards one of them, unaware if it was a girl or boy and knocked the guard out. She dragged him to the bushes and took off the armor. It was clean, unexpectedly. She put it on, feeling slightly uncomfortable. She glanced at herself in the pond and she looked like one of the guards. Merlin, Sophie and Lancelot knocked out the other three and headed towards Agatha.
    “Perfect. You look perfect” said Merlin, almost fooled by her getup. The trio put on the armor and headed for the front gates. Agatha, again Tedros clouded her mind. The first time she and Tedros fell in love, When she climbed a tower to seal their happily ever after, and the most important moment of all, when they ran for each other to their heart’s content, and kissed long and hard. She felt a tear roll down her cheek. This was a suicide mission, and she knew it. They got to the gates and she let out a long sigh. She feared this was her last time with her true love.

    Thanks for reading! Sorry if i made this shorter, but I want to save best for last. 😉



    if i forgot any tags please comment down bellow and stay tuned for more stories! 🙂

        dot111 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Very nice!

        gaby1 replied 3 years, 8 months ago


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        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        I love it!

        sakurahana123 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Awesome! Thanks for tagging me 😀

        donutqueen11 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Aww, poor Agatha, you’ll live to find him! Amazing! 🙂 🙂 🙂

        emma16 replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Now time to go into the castle and rescue him!

          mimipop replied 3 years, 7 months ago

          i posted chapter 12.

        laura-of-woods-beyond replied 3 years, 8 months ago

        Wow, that is so intriguing. I am loving it! 🙂

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