Agatha was a nervous breakdown…Was he ok? What happened?
Would she ever see him again? That one question…would she ever see him again?
She fought the urge to cry. Lancelot, Merlin and Sophie told her to sleep. But how could she?
Her mind was clouded with thoughts. However she was determined to stay up…but she couldn’t. Again, her…[Read more]
I’m gonna continue my mini fan fiction. Hope you like it 🙂 🙂 🙂
Chapter 7 (I’m not sure if I should continue but here’s chapter 7)
Agatha was locked up in a cell. Binded to the walls. Tedros in the room next to her. A man and his black mask, with broad shoulders. She was held hostage. Agatha, for the millionth time, woke up sweating. She checked if Tedros was next to her. He wasn’t there. She swallowed a…[Read more]
Please write more! This chapter was amazing!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 But please don’t kill Tedros
Please don’t stop! This is really good! I like it a lot!
Wow, poor Agatha! What’s going to happen to Tedros? I love it! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Chapter 6: ( I posted a sneak peak)
Agatha , Tedros, Lancelot, Merlin and Sophie were buckled up and saddled on their horses.
“Sophie I’m sorry we had to delay you from work for this.” Said Agatha
“Oh it’s fine. Anything for my two best friends.” Sophie replied.
Agatha and Tedros smiled at her.
“Tedros, my love, I’m feeling scared…” Agatha…[Read more]
Chapter 5 ( I LOVE FAN FIC)
It’s only been three weeks and running a whole kingdom seems impossible. Recently, I’ve been having dreams, very bad ones. Tedros and I were held hostage. I was binded on a wall and Tedros as well. He broke out using exilabur and ran to me. Then I woke up. This continuous dream has been occurring on and…[Read more]
Chapter 4 (i got carried away…)
Agatha dragged tedros into the common room.
“What do we need to talk about?” Said Tedros
“This is very important…it might be scarce to our future” Agatha replied
Suddenly, Tedros looked at her. He went pale. They walked into the common room. Tedros gripped her hand tighter and Agatha leaned into him. Like…[Read more]
Chapter 3 (I couldn’t wait… so here I am, writing fan fiction)
“Agatha! Agatha! AGATHA!” Tedros screamed
Agatha was locked up and kidnapped, but saw a man’s broad shoulders, he wore a black mask. She was bound to a wall, struggling to be freed.
“Tedros! Tedros! TEDROS! I need you…please.” She screamed
Tedros heard her cries. He launched out…[Read more]
I read chapter 1 and 2. They were amazing too! 🙂
Ooh, not to sound self obsorbed or anything, but that chapter reminds me of chapter two of my fan fiction where first Tedros has bad dreams about Agatha dying, the dream ending with Sophie’s face. Then, Agatha has a dream about Tedros being whipped by Sophie until he bled the night Sophie kidnapped him. *sigh, the good times. The scenes in movies…[Read more]
Chapter 2 ( I decided to do something more.)
Agatha couldn’t of felt happier. In Tedros’s strong arms, she felt safe and loved.
” I love you” she breathed
” I love you too…” he replied.
They separated and agatha smiled, eyeing the ring on her finger. He ran his fingers through her washed and smooth hair. Neither Agatha or Tedros wanted to let…[Read more]
I like chapter two also.
P.S. I am going to read and comment on every chapter you wrote. I AM NOT STALKING YOU!
Agatha looked out the window,
She felt nervous… How would Camelot be like? Would the townsfolk like her? Would she make a good leader? All the thoughts gathered up in her head.
“Sophie?” She turned to see Sophie preparing a white dress. It was lined with lace and there was a beautiful gold lining. Tedros came into the room. Agatha…[Read more]