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Hello, here’s another update! If you haven’t read the previous chapter, READ IT FIRST, otherwise none of this will make sense (all previous chapters @mistytales) Once again, sorry this isn’t my best work
Chapter 15 – Aqila’s POV
Aqila’s heart pounded as she watched the scene in front of her. She was scared for many different reasons: scared for…[Read more]
Top-notch job. It was absolutely amazing. All I can say. I salute you. 😛
AMAZING!
Wow! Great job 😉
So, I’ve decided to continue my story, seeing as I was near the end anyway, and I feel you all deserve to know what happens. This is the big dramatic chapter where lots of interesting stuff happens. I can’t really say more without spoiling it *evil laugh* So, without further ado…
Chapter 14 – Corrine’s POV (previous chapters @mistytales)
“Are…[Read more]
Awesome
Hello everyone. I apologise for not updating recently – I’ve been very busy with school starting and all that jazz, I’m sure a lot of you understand. Now, I’m facing a dilemma. I’ve kind of lost inspiration for my story, and I just want to start a new one, but at the same time I feel bad for not giving a proper end to my current story, and you…[Read more]
You should finish the story and then make a sequel make a big twist like one character turning on the other
I think if you want to, make the ending for the story where it’s at if you lost your inspiration for it and start working on your new one. I understand the business as well. I haven’t updated in forever. I was going to post a bio today but the file got lost so I had to start over. And this new one isn’t as good as the original lol. Take your time…[Read more]
Hello! Here’s another chapter, I’m thinking there’s going to be about 5 more chapters to this story, before I start my next one (I’ve had some ideas for it and I’m very excited to begin with it once this is finished!) Once again, any feedback or constructive criticism would be appreciated!
Chapter 13 – Corrine’s POV
Corrine sat inside one of the…[Read more]
Previous chapters -> @mistytales
Wow!
Wow, that was awesome! 🙂
This is really good!
Hello! I’ve got another chapter, thank you to everyone who submitted names and characters I could use. Also, a quick note, this story will be finishing soon, as I’m not all that happy with the way it’s turned out, and my writing hasn’t been the best in it either. But, without further ado, here’s the next chapter.
Chapter 12 – Corrine’s POV
When…[Read more]
Lovely chapter! Very good job. I love the quote you put at the end because it’s very true. Can’t wait for the next one. Bravo!! 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
Cool
Thanks!
Awesome!
Thank you!
Hello! Here’s the next chapter! Any constructive criticism/feedback would be appreciated, I’d like to know how I can improve!
Chapter 10 – Corrine’s POV (previous chapters @mistytales)
“Axel. Axel! Are you even listening to what I’m saying?” Corrine asked, after she read him the letter she had received. Axel had a distant, detached look on his…[Read more]
Oops, it turns out this is actually Chapter 11, ah well!
Nice chapter
Thank you!
Cool, I like it!
Thanks!
Will this bio do?
Name: Ashley
Age: 14
Gender: female
School: Good
Fairytale parents: Ariel and Eric (from the little mermaid)( Actually apoted, her real parents are Ursula)
Powers: water, thunder, and teleport (main power: water)
Weapon: Arrows made out of water
Crush: Don’t know yet
Fingerglow: Blue (glows when she’s scared)
Commonly Wea…[Read more]
You can use these too.
Name: Jack
Age: 14
Gender: Male
School: Good
Fairytale parents: Queen Elsa
Powers: Anything involving water and ice.
Weapon: Sword made out of soild ice
Crush: Doesn’t know yet
Fingerglow: Light Blue (glows when he’s going to do something bad(like what a Never bad)
Commonly Wears: Has a dark white blue hair, wears the eve…[Read more]
Yep, those are great thanks!
Here is one
Name – Herold Red
Age – 13
Gender – male
School – good
Talent – telepathy (but he has a hard time using it cause he can’t concentrate well).
Finger glowed – red
Fairy tale lineage – mom is rosy red, dad Is an small unknown prince
Personality – outgoing and likes to talk to people, but has a hard time with school work. He rather be out…[Read more]
I’d love to use him, but his parentage doesn’t work with one of my characters. I could use his name though? Thank you anyway!
Yeah you can use his name
Hello! Here’s another chapter, hope you enjoy! Previous chapters are here @mistytales and please leave any feedback/constructive criticism below!
Chapter 9 – Corrine’s POV
It took a few days before Corrine was finally able to work up the courage to read the letter. She returned to lessons the next day, but was oddly subdued, to the surprise of…[Read more]
Great chapter
Hola!
Here’s another chapter (Sorry for the wait!). I decided to give you a chapter from Axel’s POV, although this isn’t my best writing. Hope you enjoy anyway!
Chapter 9 – Axel’s POV
It was a surprise when Corrine did not return during the lesson, or the next. It worried Axel too, for it wasn’t like her to just disappear off, especially with a…[Read more]
Are you an ever or A NEVER?
Corrine – Never
Axel – Never
Aqila – Ever
Oh, I forgot to put before the chapter, previous chapters can be found here @mistytales
Love it!
Here it is – a turning point in the story! Please comment feedback on my writing, I’ve tried something a little different in this chapter and some constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated! For those of you who offered characters, they’ll be introduced in the next few chapters!
Enjoy! (previous chapters – @mistytales)
Chapter 8 -…[Read more]
*Jaw drops*
Thank you! (I’m assuming that’s meant in a good way 😉 )
amzaing.
Thank you!
Hello! Sorry for the wait since my last chapter! This is an important chapter here (we’re very close to the end, I’m afraid) and if you haven’t read my previous two chapters, I would recommend doing so, so this will actually make sense (all previous chapters @mistytales) Enjoy!
Chapter 16 -??? POV
Where am I?
They looked around the area…[Read more]
AMAZING, OMG..I’M SO SPEECHLESS! 5 STARS! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Lovely.
Awesome
SO so good!!!
AMAZING!!!!! 🙂