(Fara and Thea’s POV)
Fara was thinking. She was applying to the School for Good and Evil, and she was filling out the questions.
“Who or what would I save when my house was burning down?”, she mused, “My mother? Pluft? My stuffed animals? I wouldn’t want to leave any of them behind. Well, Pluft would definitely be able to save hers…[Read more]
Hey, great job! I never thought of you having to take a personality quiz in order to get into the school, but it makes since (also, we do it on this site)!
The list of supplies cracked me up 😛
If you want some constructive criticism, I would recommend adding more detail on subjects such as the setting.
But otherwise this was a great first…[Read more]
That was great!! However, I would love to know more about and the setting and even her feelings as said above. It was a great chapter. Please tag me as you continue to post more and keep up the good work. 🙂
This is my first time RPing, so tell me if I’m doing it wrong. There are four main characters, and here are their bios.
Name: Fara of Pasha Dunes
Appearance/Clothes: Bronze skin, jet black waist length hair, navy blue eyes Personality: Shy, very smart, independent, and loyal
Fingerglow: A goldish-yellow…[Read more]
Hey, you’re definitely on the right track! I believe you have all of the categories correct 🙂 I would recommend a little more detail instead of just stating things in categories such as the backstory, personality and clothes/appearance.
Otherwise, good job! Please tag me when you start your story. I would love to read it! 🙂 If you want to learn…[Read more]