mousehawk2 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years ago

    Chapter One
    (Fara and Thea’s POV)
    Fara was thinking. She was applying to the School for Good and Evil, and she was filling out the questions.
    “Who or what would I save when my house was burning down?”, she mused, “My mother? Pluft? My stuffed animals? I wouldn’t want to leave any of them behind. Well, Pluft would definitely be able to save hers…[Read more]

        emmal replied 3 years ago

        Hey, great job! I never thought of you having to take a personality quiz in order to get into the school, but it makes since (also, we do it on this site)!
        The list of supplies cracked me up 😛
        If you want some constructive criticism, I would recommend adding more detail on subjects such as the setting.
        But otherwise this was a great first…[Read more]

        emmal replied 3 years ago

        *sense not since 🙂

        shrad replied 3 years ago

        That was great!! However, I would love to know more about and the setting and even her feelings as said above. It was a great chapter. Please tag me as you continue to post more and keep up the good work. 🙂

        moonchild9 replied 3 years ago

        Wow, this is good

    mousehawk2 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years ago

    This is my first time RPing, so tell me if I’m doing it wrong. There are four main characters, and here are their bios.
    Good
    Name: Fara of Pasha Dunes
    Gender: Girl
    Age: 14
    School: Good
    Appearance/Clothes: Bronze skin, jet black waist length hair, navy blue eyes Personality: Shy, very smart, independent, and loyal
    Fingerglow: A goldish-yellow…[Read more]

        mousehawk2 replied 3 years ago

        Also, their uniforms are the Sophie style new ones.

        emmal replied 3 years ago

        Hey, you’re definitely on the right track! I believe you have all of the categories correct 🙂 I would recommend a little more detail instead of just stating things in categories such as the backstory, personality and clothes/appearance.
        Otherwise, good job! Please tag me when you start your story. I would love to read it! 🙂 If you want to learn…[Read more]