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Hey everyone long time no see. Anywho … here’s something new
The character is still in development so…. it’s a girl, that’s all
Plz asked if y’all want to be tagged. And I’m open for criticism and hate comments, cause I’m chill like that.
I run faster and faster, never failing to stumble, I reach the cliff and don’t look back. I…[Read more]
Again hope y’all like it. It’s been a while since I’ve been gone for a while. Hope y’all can forgive my absence… although y’all probably didn’t even no I was gone XD. Glad to be back
Long time no see! 🙂 It’s a very interesting start… It could do with a little proofreading, but that’s it.
This is a special chapter from ”Remingtons” POV, hope Y’all like it. Now another epic chapter:
She had ran out of the ballroom in tears, it was my fault. I took it to far, I had to get…[Read more]
I wanted to post this: Knights & Knaves
Ivypool2005 – Creator
Chapter 3: Aella Tupper (Mystical Teen)
I bite out of an old piece of bread, it was hard and chewy. But I smile, my sister was safe in SoCS, and I was here in this damp, dark alleyway with my best friend, Isabella. He was mostly, and the only reason me and my sister were alive today.…[Read more]
Izi is a knave and Aella is a knight, right? So…
1) “See you on the other side and do (I assume you meant scr*w) this up.” Your grammar is a little messy. That’s totally fine, but it just makes it a little harder with the truth/lies thing. The second part is a command, so it’s exempt from the rules. The first part implies “I will see you on the…[Read more]
And if you have any questions about logic stuff, you can ask. I promise nobody, especially not me, is judging you!
Creator’s Username: Mystical Teen
Full Given Name: Aella Tupper
Preferred Name/Nickname: Ella
Class/Status of Secrecy (are they a knight, knave or irregular and who knows?): Knight
Family and F…[Read more]
”Okay, let’s do this,” I breathe intensely as I enter the ballroom, decorated with dazzling, well decorations. I walk in full makeup with a red flowing dress. People stare at me, I think in… Awe. People hav…[Read more]
Wow you are amazing at writing! Can you tag me in the next chapter
thanks your story I literally my inspiration for my book, well mostly with the sword fighting XD
No problem glad I was an inspiration. It’s so weird. And the sword fighting part was one of my favorite parts so good choice @amysticalreader5382
Right before the Snowball
Hey everyone a quick message before I continue. I totally forgot about the Trials, but let’s just say she didn’t die. Or is that after the Snowball, somehow I forgot? Tell me in the comments below. No…[Read more]
Interesting part dragon. I wonder if this is how she came up with the story about the dragons.
Very nice! I love that plot twist XD
I’m having trouble coming up with a title for my own RP, can you help? (You had told another person a good title, so was wondering if you could do the same for me 🙂 )
I would greatly appreciate your feedback!!
A Week before Snowball
I have been practicing hard and was ace all my classes getting 1’s and 2’s in everyone. It was after ”Princess Etiquette” when ”Swordplay and Weapons Training taught by Professor Rumi Espada” started. We had been warming up…[Read more]
Please read. And I only have two questions,
Did you like it? and Was it clear?
XD or just Thanks for reading it
I know right, glad you loved it! But your right, even I didn’t see that coming.
I look around Princess Etiquette with a new hope. ”Aella, I hope you’re not going to stare at us all day, take a seat,” Pollux said with a growl. I run to the back of the room to the only seat left open, right next to a girl I had never met. She wasn’t the bes…[Read more]
Wow you blew my mind again, you keep me wanting to learn more about Aella’s story
Very nice, tag me in the next chapters. also can you give me some feedback for my RP Chapter 5? Thanks 😉
I sat in Hort’s class, trying to not fall asleep as he attempted to teach us.I always got an 1 rating in this class anyways, and everyone else hated that. I started to see Izi less and less throughout the day. I saw how happy she was at her school and how miserable I…[Read more]
Please comment. I love feedback and thanks for reading it. XD
Breathing fire? Cool! I love how quick you put these out, I don’t have to wait very long. It’s fun to read.
Great job! I got on here recently so could someone give me a summary of what happened so far? also please tag!
Aella, the main character. Is taken to the School for Good, while her BFF (Isabella/Izi) is taken to the School of Evil. They remain good friends but school drags them apart for a bit, and they get back together. Aella hates this boy named, Remington son of Aurora and King Philip, but they have to go to the Snowball together. Aella also…[Read more]
Sooooooo, what was it about? asked Izna for the one hundred and eighty-fifth time this week.
“It was nothing, now please stop asking” I say with clear annoyance. Even a week later people had been talking about “it”, it’s like they don’t have lives of their own. Remington and I had disagreed t…[Read more]
Please comment I really like peoples feedback it helps me write better things.
So excited for the Snow Ball! I’m hoping for a good plot twist soon. . .
And I have to thank you, because I’m using your story as inspiration for mine, since I’m a bit new. It is fabulous so far!
Wow your so good, can tag me in the next one
Your doing great and can’t wait for the next chapter