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Anyone who has been reading my stories, sorry, I don’t think I want to continue. I’ll still be in the collab thing, and I might start a new one, but I think Malice and Benevolence has bad writing and Sounds of Happiness has no plot. So……I COULD start a new story, and if you enjoy my writing, be on the lookout. Until then, both of my stories…[Read more]
Its OK! I just recently did that… Still feel bad about it… Could u tag me since I really like ur writing?
I’m going to miss Sounds of Happiness. I loved it so much. Please tag me to your new story. If you ever need bios you can still use Ana.
Aww. I liked your stories a lot. Please tag me in your new story.
I’ll miss the story. Please tag me on the next one! (Since I only check level 1)
Guys, I posted the first chapter already a few days ago. It should be in my activity. I’ll tag you in the comments too. @otaku88.
Malice and Benevolence chapter 4.
While Frederick was separating us into groups, Layla and I got into a huge arguement.
“Cassandra, you need to check your attitude-”
“How many times do I have to tell you! It’s NOT Cassandra! It’s Cassie!”
“I refuse to call you a name that is not written on your birth certificate.”
It’s kind of funny, because I thought of Heidi as a red head and Floyd as a blondie.
long awaited chapter 3 of malice and benevolence, aka truth and lies part 2 i know you guys have been waiting for this, sorry it’s really bad.
Like really bad.
Please give criticism.
I had a bit of writers block. Sorry!
I scrutinized the many children standing in my living room, 10 in all, and took it all in. There w…[Read more]
Great chapter!!! It’s not that bad! Personally, my favorite is still Ulysses. Ulysses x Cassidy
@fsa161 sorry…I’ll make them butlers, I already used up too many spots for the ‘special’ children. And, by favorite chapter do you mean like out of ALL of Truth and Lies, or just this story?
great job! Loved it! Probably this chapter. Don’t have a ship yet…
Awesome!! It wasn’t bad at all.
I like Aaron and Frederick. And I don’t know which ship I like yet.
Oh, sorry. I didn’t realize it was bad. I won’t do it again, I’m really sorry @joann
Alright, I made a chapter 2. It isn’t that good, sorry about that. Next chapter I PROMiSE I’ll do it in third person, unless you like 1st person better. Let me know which one.
“Ulysses, pull up your pants now!” I screamed at Ulysses.
“First, take a picture so your friend knows.”
“Ulysses, I won’t even look at that thing, let alone t…[Read more]
Love the chapter!
1. I like first person better.
2. I don’t have a favorite yet. 🙂
Great job! I honestly didn’t like the beginning of it thou…
1. First person
2. Layla or Cassie
Love the chapter! Plz tag me?
1. First person
2. Layla or Cassie
Here is chapter 1 of Malice and Benevolence. (the truth and lies sequel) If you don’t know what Malice and Benevolence means, it’s basically purposefully antagonizing someone and being kind. Vocab lesson from me! Well, if you are new yo the Truth and Lies story, don’t fret because you can start this one without knowing much about the last one.…[Read more]
I did read to the end of the chapter, but I would prefer to not say the sentence. Other than that, awesome chapter. Here is a male bio. 😉
Name: Ryder Jared Ricks
Name origin: Ryder after his father’s favorite name, Jared after his uncle (paternal)
Nickname: Ryder, he doesn’t have a nickname
Date of Birth: December 4th
School: Good, alt…[Read more]
“He was a very very mature boy”
Awesome chapter! 🙂 I already gave you some bios and I don’t have time to make new bios today. 😉
Sorry @kiko55 I meant CASSIDY not CASSANDRA. I just realized that now. Sorry!
He was a very, VERY mature boy. Sorry I haven’t read this, trust me I regret not doing so till now. I get the joke. Please don’t explain it. *shudders* Awesome story!!! I would give you a bio, but my mind is at a blank. When I post, I’ll add a bio you can use if you want too!
Guys, I know this is a bit fast, but I was anxious. Here is the Epilogue for Truth and Lies. @fsa161 you won the contest, congrats!
Akari woke up in the hospital slowly, confused. Why? Why was she alive? Wasn’t she…wasn’t she dead? Her hands flew to her chest, but there was no blood. No hurt anymore. There was no pain, as there was bef…[Read more]
Amazing!! Please tag me! Here is one of the “lucky” Children for your story. Tell me if you would like me to make another one.
Name: Cassidy Marian Ravert
Name origin: Cassidy after her mother’s friend, Marian after her father’s favorite name.
Nickname: Cass and Cassie
Date of Birth: January 5th
School: I don’t think this…[Read more]
don’t know if this is too young of a character…
Name: Emma Rose
Age: baby or toddler, about 1-3 yrs old
School: too young for SGE, but is generally good, except her occasional naughty little-kid things like eating a cookie secretly when her mum says no.
Fingerglow: bright spring green
Appearance: Emma has red hair that is…[Read more]
I loved it!!! Here’s a bio you can use:
AGE: 14, you can change this if you want to
SCHOOL: Never went to school
PARENTS: Left her and her brother in the streets.
CRUSH: Doesn’t have one.
Talent: Half werewolf (Night-slash or Roar)
APPEARANCE: Red hair and red eyes. Pale skin and very s…[Read more]
Hey @otaku88! Here is Layla’s bio. I have a little request though. Please do not kill them off, unless it is absolutely necessary. I would like them to live tell the end, but i’m not attached to them. Also, please don’t change them drastically, the little things can be tempered with. 😉
Name: Layla Mariah Ray (in Cassie’s bio it says L…[Read more]
Guys, this is the re-done version of Truth and Lies chapter 16. It’s short.
Chapter 16: Finale! (sorry guys!)
Panic surged through out the restaurant. People were screaming, people were crying. Some people weren’t even making any noise at all. Akari wasn’t reacting the way Taylor had thought she would. She had the same attitude of the select few…[Read more]
That was absolutely clever and insanely awesome! I killed all my main characters in my last story too 🙂 !
Okay, so here’s what Akari could have possibly done. Paris was shot in the head, and the blood dripped out of his head and landed on Akari’s chest, making her believe that she was dead, when it was really Paris. I would like her and…[Read more]
[Jaw droppes to the ground]
This is a fantastic chapter!
Here’s what I think, Akari could of been already hit from the gun before Paris even showed up, since she couldn’t hear anything. The man could of shot Akair through her ears and when Paris showed up and thought he saved Akari, the man could of wanted to hit Akari again to kill her. But…[Read more]
Paris and Akari for life!!!!!!!
As you can see, i want Paris and Akari to be together! 🙂
Before anything, I was rushing when I wrote this. I’ll probably rewrite the chapter, because even I can tell it is bad. So, instead of saying it was good. please give me ideas for rewriting the chapter because I know I will.
Chapter 16: Louis is back!
Taylor didn’t waste anytime screaming. He rocketed out of his chair, grabbed Akari’s hand, and…[Read more]
Chapter 15 of Truth and Lies. Also, before I begin, let me ask you guys two question. I am thinking of killing off Collin. Should I? Or should I not? And I think that this story should end around chapter 20, 25. What do you guys think?
Chapter 15 A cruel prince, a lying princess, and a confused teenager
(kind of a refresher to remind you of what…[Read more]
NO! Not a cliffhanger! 🙂 Amazing chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Also Please don’t end this story just yet. I like it very much. Also for Collin, I really don’t know. 😛 🙂
Oh, you are an amazing writer, @otaku88 !!! No…. a cliffhanger, you are making me feeling anxious about what is going on next
I’m just going to say, this was a little depressing. So, I’m warning you now. If YOU AREN’T OKAY WITH SAD STUFF, DO NOT READ THIS AT ALL COSTS!!!!! Seriously, it is depressing. But, you can still read it.
Chapter 14: The Melancholy of Marian Sherwin (It’s like an autobiography she wrote as sort of some kind of suicide note)
Most people would t…[Read more]
Really congratulated@otaku88 you did a very good job in Marian’s suicide note, I loved how you described the suicide way but not a very nice subject to mention.
Great chapter!(That is why I post the suicide letter of Zander Nicholas Mahaffey, but I deleted it because of user problems: scubatuba) Suicide is a tough but interesting subject
Dang!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing job!!!! That was very…whoa! Great job!
Thanks @nayade. I don’t know if you remember, but I was one of the people saying to keep it up. I kept on thinking about the one you posted while writing this. This was really hard, because she was a little kid.