otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 3 months ago

    Anyone who has been reading my stories, sorry, I don’t think I want to continue. I’ll still be in the collab thing, and I might start a new one, but I think Malice and Benevolence has bad writing and Sounds of Happiness has no plot. So……I COULD start a new story, and if you enjoy my writing, be on the lookout. Until then, both of my stories…[Read more]

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Its OK! I just recently did that… Still feel bad about it… Could u tag me since I really like ur writing?

        annabell104 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        tag me please

        hannahtheeel replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        I’m going to miss Sounds of Happiness. I loved it so much. Please tag me to your new story. If you ever need bios you can still use Ana.

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Aww. I liked your stories a lot. Please tag me in your new story.

          kiko55 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Aww, I really liked them, but it’s okay. 😉

        impossiblegirl replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        I’ll miss the story. Please tag me on the next one! (Since I only check level 1)

        cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Okay

        sugarplumprincess replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Tag me too

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Alright. Plz tag me too. 🙂

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Guys, I posted the first chapter already a few days ago. It should be in my activity. I’ll tag you in the comments too. @otaku88.

        wenteo replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Plz tag me too! I loved your stories!!!

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Okay, it’s in my activity, because I already posted it. I’ll tag you in the comments, though.

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        @wenteo
        @fsa161
        @sugarplumprincess
        @impossiblegirl
        Check your mentions, and my activity. The first chapter should be in my activity.

          wenteo replied 4 years, 3 months ago

          Ok thanks

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 4 months ago

    Malice and Benevolence chapter 4.
    Chapter 4
    Cassidy’s POV
    While Frederick was separating us into groups, Layla and I got into a huge arguement.
    “Cassandra, you need to check your attitude-”
    “How many times do I have to tell you! It’s NOT Cassandra! It’s Cassie!”
    “I refuse to call you a name that is not written on your birth certificate.”
    “…[Read more]

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Awesome chapter!

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          Amazing chapter! 🙂

          Heidi: Yellow
          Richard: Blue
          Floyd: Scarlet red
          Eda: White
          Jakob: Brown/Orange/***** Blonde. -I really couldn’t choose from these three.

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        It’s kind of funny, because I thought of Heidi as a red head and Floyd as a blondie.

        wenteo replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Amazing chapter!!!

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Great job! No clue

        dragonpanther replied 4 years, 3 months ago

        Cool

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 4 months ago

    long awaited chapter 3 of malice and benevolence, aka truth and lies part 2 i know you guys have been waiting for this, sorry it’s really bad.
    Like really bad.
    Please give criticism.
    I had a bit of writers block. Sorry!
    Chapter 3
    Frederick’s POV
    I scrutinized the many children standing in my living room, 10 in all, and took it all in. There w…[Read more]

        glitterbookworm05 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Great chapter!!! It’s not that bad! Personally, my favorite is still Ulysses. Ulysses x Cassidy

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          This is a great chapter! And it wasn’t bad.

          My favorite character is Wendy & Ulysses. I don’t have a ship yet and my favorite chapter so far is this one. 🙂 (Also I don’t want to be annoying, but are you going to use my characters in your story?)

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        @fsa161 sorry…I’ll make them butlers, I already used up too many spots for the ‘special’ children. And, by favorite chapter do you mean like out of ALL of Truth and Lies, or just this story?

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          Okay thanks. And just this story. 🙂

        wenteo replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Awesome chapter!!! My favourite character is Ulysses and Wendy

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        great job! Loved it! Probably this chapter. Don’t have a ship yet…

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          What do you mean probably this chapter?

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          As my favorite one

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          Oh. I thought it was favorite chapter, not character… Probably Cassidy

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        That’s not what I asked, but okay.

        dot111 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Awesome!! It wasn’t bad at all.
        I like Aaron and Frederick. And I don’t know which ship I like yet.

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Oh, sorry. I didn’t realize it was bad. I won’t do it again, I’m really sorry @joann

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Great chapter!

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 4 months ago

    Alright, I made a chapter 2. It isn’t that good, sorry about that. Next chapter I PROMiSE I’ll do it in third person, unless you like 1st person better. Let me know which one.
    Chapter 2
    “Ulysses, pull up your pants now!” I screamed at Ulysses.
    “First, take a picture so your friend knows.”
    “Ulysses, I won’t even look at that thing, let alone t…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Love the chapter!

        1. I like first person better.
        2. I don’t have a favorite yet. 🙂

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Great job! I honestly didn’t like the beginning of it thou…
        1. First person
        2. Layla or Cassie

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        LOVE IT!!
        1; first person
        2; Hmm Layla 😉 I like Cassie too

        saphire101 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Love the chapter! Plz tag me?
        1. First person
        2. Layla or Cassie

        skforsophie replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Amazing chapter!
        1. First person
        2. Layla

        dot111 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Love it!
        1. I like both.
        2. I’m not sure, but maybe Ulysses.

        wenteo replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        Awesome chapter!
        1 First person
        2. IDK

        glitterbookworm05 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        1. First person.
        2. Ulysses. All the way Ulysses.

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Here is chapter 1 of Malice and Benevolence. (the truth and lies sequel) If you don’t know what Malice and Benevolence means, it’s basically purposefully antagonizing someone and being kind. Vocab lesson from me! Well, if you are new yo the Truth and Lies story, don’t fret because you can start this one without knowing much about the last one.…[Read more]

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I did read to the end of the chapter, but I would prefer to not say the sentence. Other than that, awesome chapter. Here is a male bio. 😉

        Name: Ryder Jared Ricks
        Name origin: Ryder after his father’s favorite name, Jared after his uncle (paternal)
        Nickname: Ryder, he doesn’t have a nickname
        Date of Birth: December 4th
        School: Good, alt…[Read more]

        smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Can u tag me?

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          “He was a very very mature boy”

          Awesome chapter! 🙂 I already gave you some bios and I don’t have time to make new bios today. 😉

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          And yes I read the end of the chapter, but I don’t feel like saying it… It was great though! Sorry I didn’t say this earlier, I was in school… 😉

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Thank you @elysianne @kiko55 and @fsa161! I couldn’t resist that joke, hehehehe. And @fsa161 that is okay, I’m content with the ones you gave me. I’ll tag you @smartcleverbunny560 and @elysianne

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Sorry @kiko55 I meant CASSIDY not CASSANDRA. I just realized that now. Sorry!

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          Wait, Cassandras name is Cassidy?

        glitterbookworm05 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        He was a very, VERY mature boy. Sorry I haven’t read this, trust me I regret not doing so till now. I get the joke. Please don’t explain it. *shudders* Awesome story!!! I would give you a bio, but my mind is at a blank. When I post, I’ll add a bio you can use if you want too!

          glitterbookworm05 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          *to

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

        @otaku88, it’s fine, I didn’t mind. 😉
        Yes, @smartcleverbunny560 Cassandras name is Cassidy, but she prefers Cassie (Layla and her are characters I have created 😛 )

          smartcleverbunny560 replied 4 years, 4 months ago

          OK! Thanks for telling me!

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Guys, I know this is a bit fast, but I was anxious. Here is the Epilogue for Truth and Lies. @fsa161 you won the contest, congrats!
    Epilogue
    Akari woke up in the hospital slowly, confused. Why? Why was she alive? Wasn’t she…wasn’t she dead? Her hands flew to her chest, but there was no blood. No hurt anymore. There was no pain, as there was bef…[Read more]

        foreverevil replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Loved it!

        sugarplumprincess replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        love it

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing! I love it!

        kiko55 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing!! Please tag me! Here is one of the “lucky” Children for your story. Tell me if you would like me to make another one.
        —–
        Name: Cassidy Marian Ravert
        Name origin: Cassidy after her mother’s friend, Marian after her father’s favorite name.
        Nickname: Cass and Cassie
        Gender: Female
        Date of Birth: January 5th
        School: I don’t think this…[Read more]

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Thank you, @kiko55! Please give me Layla’s bio.

          nayade replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Great chapter

        oreliaotter replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        don’t know if this is too young of a character…
        Name: Emma Rose
        Nicknames: Emmy
        Age: baby or toddler, about 1-3 yrs old
        School: too young for SGE, but is generally good, except her occasional naughty little-kid things like eating a cookie secretly when her mum says no.
        Fingerglow: bright spring green
        Appearance: Emma has red hair that is…[Read more]

          oreliaotter replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Oh, and great chapter!

        polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Amazing! Can I post a bio later for you?

          otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Sure @polabear11! You can post more than one.

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        I loved it!!! Here’s a bio you can use:

        NAME: Demetra
        AGE: 14, you can change this if you want to
        Gender: Female
        SCHOOL: Never went to school
        PARENTS: Left her and her brother in the streets.
        CRUSH: Doesn’t have one.
        Talent: Half werewolf (Night-slash or Roar)
        Fingerglow: green
        APPEARANCE: Red hair and red eyes. Pale skin and very s…[Read more]

          kiko55 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Hey @otaku88! Here is Layla’s bio. I have a little request though. Please do not kill them off, unless it is absolutely necessary. I would like them to live tell the end, but i’m not attached to them. Also, please don’t change them drastically, the little things can be tempered with. 😉
          —–
          Name: Layla Mariah Ray (in Cassie’s bio it says L…[Read more]

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Guys, this is the re-done version of Truth and Lies chapter 16. It’s short.
    Chapter 16: Finale! (sorry guys!)
    Panic surged through out the restaurant. People were screaming, people were crying. Some people weren’t even making any noise at all. Akari wasn’t reacting the way Taylor had thought she would. She had the same attitude of the select few…[Read more]

        maidengirl replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        That was absolutely clever and insanely awesome! I killed all my main characters in my last story too 🙂 !
        Okay, so here’s what Akari could have possibly done. Paris was shot in the head, and the blood dripped out of his head and landed on Akari’s chest, making her believe that she was dead, when it was really Paris. I would like her and…[Read more]

          polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Yay @maidengirl you agree with me!
          Amazing chapter @otaku88! So Akari could have ducked to the ground before I was shot, and it went to Taylor’s arm instead. Blood dripped from the arm on to her head and everyone thought she was dead.
          #TAKARI4LIFE!

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          [Jaw droppes to the ground]

          This is a fantastic chapter!

          Here’s what I think, Akari could of been already hit from the gun before Paris even showed up, since she couldn’t hear anything. The man could of shot Akair through her ears and when Paris showed up and thought he saved Akari, the man could of wanted to hit Akari again to kill her. But…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Paris and Akari for life!!!!!!!

        As you can see, i want Paris and Akari to be together! 🙂

        sugarplumprincess replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Paris and Akari forever.I want them to be together

          nayade replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Amazing, amazing the best chapter of ever…(Well all the time, the chapters are amazing) @otaku88

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Before anything, I was rushing when I wrote this. I’ll probably rewrite the chapter, because even I can tell it is bad. So, instead of saying it was good. please give me ideas for rewriting the chapter because I know I will.
    Chapter 16: Louis is back!
    Taylor didn’t waste anytime screaming. He rocketed out of his chair, grabbed Akari’s hand, and…[Read more]

        polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Woah…awesome chapter!

        sugarplumprincess replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        awesome

          nayade replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Awesome , really awesome amzing chapter @otaku88

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Chapter 15 of Truth and Lies. Also, before I begin, let me ask you guys two question. I am thinking of killing off Collin. Should I? Or should I not? And I think that this story should end around chapter 20, 25. What do you guys think?
    Chapter 15 A cruel prince, a lying princess, and a confused teenager
    (kind of a refresher to remind you of what…[Read more]

        oreliaotter replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        to your questions: no and yes
        Also, great chapter!

          fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          NO! Not a cliffhanger! 🙂 Amazing chapter!!!!!!!!!!

          Also Please don’t end this story just yet. I like it very much. Also for Collin, I really don’t know. 😛 🙂

          nayade replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          AMAZING CHAPTER!!!
          LOVE IT

        polabear11 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        1. Yes
        2. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
        Spectacular chapter!

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Oh, you are an amazing writer, @otaku88 !!! No…. a cliffhanger, you are making me feeling anxious about what is going on next

        dot111 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Awesome!!!

        sugarplumprincess replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        spectacular

    otaku88 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    I’m just going to say, this was a little depressing. So, I’m warning you now. If YOU AREN’T OKAY WITH SAD STUFF, DO NOT READ THIS AT ALL COSTS!!!!! Seriously, it is depressing. But, you can still read it.
    Chapter 14: The Melancholy of Marian Sherwin (It’s like an autobiography she wrote as sort of some kind of suicide note)
    Most people would t…[Read more]

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Oh yeah, this is truth and liies

          nayade replied 4 years, 5 months ago

          Really congratulated@otaku88 you did a very good job in Marian’s suicide note, I loved how you described the suicide way but not a very nice subject to mention.
          Great chapter!(That is why I post the suicide letter of Zander Nicholas Mahaffey, but I deleted it because of user problems: scubatuba) Suicide is a tough but interesting subject

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Dang!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing job!!!! That was very…whoa! Great job!

        -Starts clapping

        wenteo replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        You did an awesome job!! I love it!!!

        sugarplumprincess replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        you did an awesome job

        otaku88 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Thanks @nayade. I don’t know if you remember, but I was one of the people saying to keep it up. I kept on thinking about the one you posted while writing this. This was really hard, because she was a little kid.

        dot111 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Wow, great job!!

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