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The August/September Monthly Meeting is going on right now. Just in case you didn’t know. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1F7nbrnFB0pCtv686pb_aCptBpy3EEAX022ooTdJn3X0/edit
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A/N: Liam gets eliminated in the *second* right before the TbT ends. Very very very very very short and quickly written chapter.
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As the darkness began to clear away, I smiled. I had lasted through the night. I had won the Trial by Tale.
Suddenly, a prickling sensation…[Read more]
The RP with No Name
Sorry it’s short, but I just HAD to write something. It’s been way too long, and my last post was just a lot of fluff about before-trial preparations. Not anymore. *wicked grin*. After the Trial, which I’m hoping should end soon (maybe after 3-5 more POVs), we…[Read more]
Wow, I thought this RP was way dead.
Nice chapter. I’m kind of confused about the scarecrow thing… can someone explain that? My original idea was for the scarecrows to represent a fear or a bad memory, and the student can only get past it when they face it.
Oh my god I’m SO glad this is still going on. I’ll post my POV later today (we are going to the country club for dinner now and I’m on my phone) or tomorrow.
Ack! I have no idea why, but I don’t get notifications when people comment on my posts! I’m so glad y’all saw this!
For the scarecrow thing, I sort of did it how it was in the books. Basically, you were taken into a horrible, scary scenario in which you are shown things that were real (like Sienna’s castle) but are twisted to scare you. Does that…[Read more]
I kind of did that in my POV, except Lola was still in the Trial, just the scarecrows turned into things that scared her A LOT.
Your POV is great, mine is sooo bad because I just HAD to write and it’s like 12 am practically and I didn’t edit or use Grammarly. I’m on my phone too sooo there’s a lot of typos. lol
Wait, awesome chapter, but I’m a bit confused about the part were the person is talking about the wheel that cursed her mother. I thought Sienna was the daughter of Belle, but I don’t know.
Correct me if I’m wrong.
Just realized I put mother instead of grandmother. Yeah, I decided to incorporate more fairytale aspects and decided that Sleeping Beauty, who slept for a 100 years or so, would be old enough to be Sienna’s grandma. Sorry for my mistake. Oops.
Nadea, I’d like to join. I’ve got one bio so far, but the story is pretty good.
Name: Astrid of Woods Beyond
Finger Glow: Electric blue
Personality: Serious, determined, short-tempered, easily distracted
Zodiac Sign: Saggitarius
Likes: Gardening, writing, singing, reading
Dislikes: People who would…[Read more]
Hey everyone! I am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry that I haven’t been on the site for so long! I got this new animation app and… Well… Idk what happened! Otherwise I don’t have any new POV’s or anything to talk about so I might need some catching up on some things. And…[Read more]
I haven’t written in a long time, but I hope you enjoy this. Please don’t skip parts, even though this POV is long. It’s very interesting! I had TONS of fun writing this!
StarsShineBright- Please don’t include the scene where Peony helps/saves Sienna in your next POV. I was thinkin…[Read more]
@nadea, PLEASE finish the Trial. Same goes for everyone else. I can’t write until you do, and I’m sorry but I think I speak for everyone when I say that before-trial preparations that don’t have to do with the main plot aren’t very interesting. You’re an amazing writer, but one thing you could improve is staying on track with the most important points.
Okay. Thank you so much. I didn’t want to just randomly cut to the Trial, and I wasn’t sure whether to finish or not, seeing as everyone who POVd didn’t really end with getting eliminated, or winning, etc. Okay, I will. I’ll go the point where only Lola, Skylar, Sienna, Peony, and Liam are left, as well as a few Nevers (so there is still a chance…[Read more]
I am so nervous. I am somehow in rank number nine and I do not feel ready. And worse, I will be facing Peter and James and all those other girls I sort of knew. I am laying in bed and breathing hard. But today was the day. My secret…[Read more]
Also, @nadea, could Peony save Sienna from something? I already have it planned out but I wanted to make sure you are okay with it.
Oh, and VERY good job!! I really like it because Sienna also plays piano. (And because I play piano & love it so much!)
Just saying… it’s the TRIAL by Tale, not the TRAIL by Tale. Just saying. Also, tense changes again, and you had a couple of dangling participles, and remember that “he said” is usually not capitalized. I think that’s all.
Good job on the story and heightening the Peter-Peony romance!
@nadea, this is what I was thinking: Someone (probably a boy) would sneak up on Sienna with sword(maybe) or about to do a spell and Peony stops him. Or something like that
Um… I’m not sure about the “Saving Sienna” plot point. Why would an Everboy want to kill Sienna? (Neverboys don’t have swords). It could be James, I guess.
Oh, if this is trying to prove to Sienna that Peony wasn’t trying to hurt Lol with the pirates, I get that. But better mae it neverboy with Wish Fish or spells or something.
And you can let…[Read more]
Yeah, I guess that is probable. It’s not me to decide, really it is @nadea but I think that maybe it shouldn’t be a sword? Or maybe like make up some guy that really hates him, like ooh! Gaston’s son?
@nadea, that does work. 🙂 ya. I guess it could happen like that
Salvete, omnes! Hic est capitulum meum novum. Si placet legitis. Delectate!
Following the trend of foreign languages, that was in Latin, the only other language I know.
A/N: Yay! Trial by Tale! This is a long one, but I think the TbT (that’s what I’m calling this now) deserves a lon…[Read more]
Okay, I guess this will work. It’s just characters I made or were there in the story already.
1.) Monica Sholz. (Remember her, @pandagirl31 XD)
2.) Marazene Leecook
3.) Phar Kirt
5.) Leert Serx
6.) Mahagy Jurt
7.) Irta Berry
8.) Riter Moss
10.) Liraryz Belzasd
Okay, that works. xd, yes i remember monika scholz.. Lol, she was originally a character I was using for a world war II story about a ***** daughter. LOL. 😉
So would that be fascist?
(I realize this isn’t helping, but if this doesn’t censor then I know it’s not that. Also, if this does censor, I need to have a little chat with Soman about freedom of speech.)
Hmm… **** doesn’t fit though…
(Again, trying things. Again, I’m sorry.)
On Parent Visit Day, I woke up later than usual. It took me a moment to remember that there were no classes. Lola had already left to get ready, but Skylar was still in her bed. I quickly hopped out of my bed and entered my walk-in closet.
I took a wicker basket down from my top shelf and…[Read more]
Cool! I like what you’re doing with your character, but the beauty routines are getting a little over-the-top. This one took more than half of the chapter. I find myself scrolling through because honestly, I’m not very interested. These routines are fun as long as you keep them short. I’m excited to see what happens next!
Okay. Yeah… I kinda realized that like 5 minutes after I posted it, but I kind of wanted to do one to show exactly how special this occasion was. I mean, it’s the first time in 2 or 3 months in which Sienna sees her parents again.
But I get it, and I totally understand. Thank you!! (I’m not gonna elaborate on the routines anymore)
Wait, green eyes? Oh, this is gonna get really interesting
Also, does anyone want to come up with the school for evil’s top 10? I know Peony and James are in it, but who else?
Here’s the new POV! Enjoy!
The school for good has really changed me. Suddenly I do this every morning:
1. Get up and wash hair (I stole shampoo from the groom room)
2. Dry hair
3. Go to mirror in my room and put on a little foundation to make me pale
4. Get black eye shadow and only put a little on…[Read more]
I really, really like this!! I’m going to work on a POV again!! For the Trial by Tale, I kind of think that everyone should write a POV for their own character and decided whether or not to eliminate their own character. I think that would work the best, because people may have other plans. I don’t really want others to POV for my character,…[Read more]