princessmckenna19 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 2 weeks ago

    The twins of good and evil
    Chapter 2: Just like me
    Piper’s Pov
    I’m lost. Definitely lost. I’m in a candy cloud wonderland surrounded by models. This is definitely not right. That stupid stymph! It must have switched me and Zoey. Zoey! Oh no! If I’m here, then Zoey must be in…..
    Zoey’s Pov
    Evil, I’m in evil.The sludgy moat water is getting all o…[Read more]

        pearly-waddles replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        This is great writing. Tag me!

          princessmckenna19 replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks so much! I will definitely tag you! Are you writing an Rp? If so I would love to read it!

        ruby0fwoodsbeyond replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        some advice:
        don’t switch the pov so quickly; write a few paragraphs for each character first

          grannylou replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Totes. 🤣 Sorry, I don’t say that often.

          princessmckenna19 replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks for the suggestion! I don’t like to make Zoey and Piper’s Povs too long because I didn’t want anything to sound too repetitive. (Especially since Piper and Maybelle and Zoey and Aria are so alike). Next time I’ll try to make their Povs a bit longer.

        lilystarling replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        Cool

        effie replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        Keep tagging me! I like stories with multiple POV’s. It’s fun to see what’s happening in multiple people’s heads.

    greenplum-1504 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 2 weeks ago

    Chapter 23:
    Transparent:
    Audrey’s P.O.V:
    I walk out of Dean Dovey’s office in a huff. Why? We don’t need a new roommate, may as well bring back Amber. I pick up a mahogany trunk that’s sitting next to the door, it’s surprisingly lighter than it looks. What does this May have in it anyways? Dewdrop-embroidered pillowcases? That’s probably…[Read more]

        pearly-waddles replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        Wow! That was amazing!

          greenplum-1504 replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

          Thanks!

        faunnightngale replied 10 months, 1 week ago

        Whooh!

          greenplum-1504 replied 10 months, 1 week ago

          🙂

    princessmckenna19 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 10 months, 3 weeks ago

    Here’s chapter 1 of my new Rp, hope you enjoy!
    The twins of good and evil
    Chapter 1: The grave mistake
    Maybelle’s Pov
    The house was well, the house was a mess. Mom was panicking, dad was panicking, and Aria decided to take a page out of my book and hole up in her room. I wish I could have done the same. There were however some vegetables to be c…[Read more]

        lilystarling replied 10 months, 3 weeks ago

        Tag me, Love it

        effie replied 10 months, 2 weeks ago

        Tag me please!