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I have the next chapter! I need two more Neverboys and one Nevergirl please!
We have: @ellaenchanted and @arian2. Hope you enjoy! 🙂
Chapter 12: Princes, Spiteful Brats
Laurence bolted past Hansel’s Haven, and into the majestic Valor stairway. Tumbling and sprawling all the way, like a razing, insane maniac, scrambling frantically, up the…[Read more]
Brilliant! Jake Frost’s secret will be revealed in my story soon too!
I really loved it. Can’t wait for more! 🙂
You can use any of mine but I’m not sure if I have what you want @sephtis25
Chapter 11: If you have Questions. . .
We have: @gracelynnofmadinvail, @lanaalan, @arian2, @leslie191234, @dixie
Laurence grumbled all the way to the Honor Commons for History of Heroism.
“You wait until I’m recovered! Orion will find himself in my hand in a second!” He warned Cheshire, who was absorbed in a exasperated dispute with Orion over…[Read more]
Love it! You’re writing’s brilliant! PLEASE write more very soon!
Next chapter is up! I hope you enjoy 🙂
Presenting: @arian2, @gracelynnofmadinvail, @leslie1912345, @lanaalan 🙂
Chapter 10: A Small Doubt
Everything was hazy and Laurence felt faint. All he could remember was the excruciating pain when his head struck glass, then the world had flickered and he had collapsed, his smarting head numb with the…[Read more]
I loved it 🙂 but are you saying that their swords could speak? Or are you using personification?
Chapter 9: What Some Teachers Do – Hope you like it!
Laurence staggered in a daze to Grooming, taught by a tall, slender man called Professor Lukas Alexander who was elegant to an acute point of awe. His eyes were cloudy and a silvery gray, which were sharp and keen. His head was a long mass of thick chestnut and he had a steely glint in his eye.…[Read more]
Hi peppy! Great chapter! Can I use Laurence in my story? I’ve decided not to use the son of Tedros and Agatha and now that I’m using Chesire I don’t really want people to get confused about roommates.
It’s looking awesome! (I really love how you portray Aali X3)
Chapter 8: The First Lesson – @arian2, @leslie191234 @gracelynnofmadinvail @lanaalan @wolfna23
I hope you enjoy! 🙂
The next day dawned a brilliant, radiant sun. Room 12 were weary and exhausted on their first day, thanks to Laurence. They were not troubled in the least, and that lifted a vast burden of Laurence’s shoulders. Cheshire, Mason and…[Read more]
Amazing! I love the excellent details, especially when you are describing the paintings. I see no need for any criticism, I think it’s flawless and I can’t wait to hear more! 🙂
Great, I love all the detail and I’d love to be in your story! I’m working at getting my two character’s bios. @jlb23 and you don’t have to use them. 😉
You said you would use some of my characters. I was just wondering when?
I have no more space for Ever’s in my story – so sorry.
I will use Jasper in my Surviving Fairy Tales lesson
I hope that’s okay with you 🙂
Chapter 7: Secrets Revealed – I hope you like it! 🙂
Laurence couldn’t have been more enraged as he glared witheringly at the trembling Julie.
“I came out here, because of YOU?!” Laurence could barely restrain from throttling her. Julie whimpered loudly, making Laurence even more disgusted.
In his temper, the faculty had come out, despite his…[Read more]
I just read your other chapters. Incredible! You are one of the people here that I genuinely wait to hear more from. 🙂 🙂 Just as a thought for next time: your writing is brilliant and the vocabulary is amazing, but sometimes you overuse your wide range of words. Overusing may be better than underusing, but it is still essential to vary between…[Read more]
If you need another Ever or a Never you can find 2 bio’s @EllaEnchanted 🙂
@arian2? I will try to ‘rein down’ at little 🙂
Thank you for pointing that out 🙂
I liked it 🙂 peppy if you use complicated words its fine. It will make your readers look at the dictionary and learn more and new words that they can use for other conditions if needed.
Chapter 5: The Discovery
Laurence constantly muttered apologies until Aron calmed down. Fortunately, it didn’t take to long for Aron’s good-natured personality made it a breeze. Laurence delayed until the swift change in Aron’s attitude was evident. In a hushed whisper, Laurence related the highly peculiar scene from the window. At first, Aron…[Read more]
I thought that last chapter was chapter 5. But I still love it. 🙂
Chapter 5: Mysterious Happenings .Hope you like it! 🙂
The girl looked overjoyed and beamed but was speechless! Her admiration embarrassed Laurence, and she blushed a glowing crimson whenever Laurence spoke to her. This made Laurence very uneasy, he couldn’t say he had closed his eyes and thrown the rose blindly, hoping it would go to a decent…[Read more]
I hope you enjoy this part! 🙂
Laurence stood, rooted to the spot as the Everboys marched spiritedly past in intact lines. He felt giddy, and his confidence shredded. Bewilderedly, he strode over to the West Doors, and drew in his breath, and that’s when he realised he was the only one left!
All the Everboys had gone in, and were on the verge of…[Read more]
Incredible! Is this the first chapter? Because I want more! 🙂 🙂
Thanks! This is actually the third part! You can read the other parts at @peppy!
You are in my second chapter 🙂
Amazing! I just keep drinking up your work! Please write more soon!
@arian2 @gracelynnofmadinvail‘s Mason @leslie191234‘s Aron are in this part. I hope you enjoy it! 🙂
Meeting the Boys
After a long, uncomfortable, awkward train ride with Lana, they finally arrived at the School for Good!
Lana was dropped at the rosy pink side, and Laurence at the regal blue side of the school. They muttered goodbyes, then went…[Read more]
I love how you described Aron, and everyone! Keep up the great work, and please don’t make us wait too long until the next chapter 😉
Amazing 🙂 I laughed so hard when Laurence wondered if Agatha had millions of roses