pita2006

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    pita2006 posted an update in the group Fan Fiction 3 years, 9 months ago

    Hey guys I’m new, so I am going to post my first fan fiction. Could someone please explain what it means for people to tag others? I’m open to criticism,sorry if it’s short. I have the worst headache, and I figured I’d write fan fiction, so here we go!
    Preface
    Queen Agatha of Camelot cluched a squirming bundle in her arms. She had just given birth to a beautiful girl. She had Tedros’s eyes, Agatha’s hair, and a combination of Tedros’sand Agatha’s skin color. She was beautiful anyway. Agatha was looking at her child deciding what she should name her. Then she her thumping down the hall. She winced.
    “That has to be Tedros,” she whispered. Tedros opened the door with a ****.
    “Tedros, you stupid idiot. You’ll scare her.” Agatha said in an angry whisper
    “Sorry” Tedros replied. He tried to look as sorry as possible. He hated his wife giving him ‘the look’. Agatha didn’t fall for it, and she gave him ‘the look’. Tedros looked at the bundle Agatha was holding.
    “Can I hold her?”Tedros asked
    “Sure” Agatha replied. She gently shifted the bundle into Tedros arms. Tedros held her and tried his hardest not to drop her. He was never good at holding babies anyway.
    “What’s her name?” Tedros asked.
    ” Lilac” Agatha said
    “Welcome to the world, Lilac.” Tedros said. Lilac started to cry. Tedros looked at Agatha, Agatha looked at Tedros. This was going to be fun.

        kittybp2 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        To tag someone is to put an @ symbol in front of a username and then they get notified of a post you do for example @pita2006 and then it will turn pink then you will know they got it if it’s still white you did something wrong 🙂 hope this helped. Your story is really good. Please tag me for your next one. 😉

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Nice!

        sakurahana123 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Awesome! Can you tag me?

        donutqueen11 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        I love this! 🙂 🙂 🙂

        foreverevil replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        When you tag somebody, it basically means that the person likes your story. I really enjoyed your story, so please tag me when you post the next chapter! Example of tagging: @foreverevil

        dot111 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Nice!! May you please tag me, too?

        pita2006 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Thanks guys,I’ll try to post when I havetime

        kitkat446 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Cool!

        fooinator replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Please tag me

        mimipop replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Pleeeeeaaaaassssseeeee tag me? I love this. It’s really good 🙂

        emma16 replied 3 years, 9 months ago

        Cool! Also, I a missing something. When did Tedros and Agatha not like each other.

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