Hi! Guys, sorry I haven’t been posting in like a month! I have decided to start a group story if anyone wants to join! Also, I am starting a new story by myself! please comment if anyone wants to do a story with me!!
Hey it’s @pizzababy again here’s chapter 4 of my RP! Enjoy 🙂 😛 Sorry it took so long
If I am being perfectly honest, and I am, I am kind of mad at Bella for the way she treated Olivia. Anyway, when me and Olivia goot to…[Read more]
Hi 😛 it is time for chapter 3 of my story hope you guys like it 🙂
As soon as I got in the the wonderful castle. I knew i was going to like it here. Olivia almost fainted just knowing she was in a castle. During the orientation I caught Jacobs eye and he smiled at me once more. I felt like I was forgetting someone … Bella she…[Read more]
Hi it’s @pizzababy again. 🙂 This is chapter 2 of my RP
I am in my room, it’s decorated with blue and pink. It’s bigger than other bedrooms, my giant bed in the middle of it all. I have never appreciated how I am so lucky. I look in my walk in closet. At first I don’t notice a crown on the floor, but then I do. It is sparkly and purple and shimm…[Read more]
Hi this is the newest Character in my RP. Be warred there will be more. 🙂
Age: 13 ½
Family: adopted by the Evil Queen aka EQ, so she doesn’t have a dad.
Looks: Bright red hair with streaks of purple, Giant green eyes with specks of gold. Basically if you see her walking down the street you would never think she…[Read more]
Hi its @pizzababy again. This is my first chapter and I am looking for some constructed criticism
Chapter 1, Decisions and choices and choices and decisions:
I woke up to the sound of birds at 4 in the morning! I couldn’t go back to sleep, so I take out my favorite book on my shelf and something falls to the ground. It’s my acceptance let…[Read more]
Hi it’s @pizzababy! This is my one other bio for the second main character out of three
Name: Bella Beauty
Parents: Sleeping Beauty, her dad left when she was 5 and she doesn’t remember much
Personality: She is bubbly and nice, she can be kind of shy when meeting new people. She is really smart, but she…[Read more]
First off, this bio is really good! One thing is you might want to make the flaws a bit more original… But it’s fantastic everywhere else!
A girl was sitting at her desk wondering what to wear to the ball that night, when she heard a knock. She whipped her head around fast.
“ Sorry if I had startled you Princess Aria. But I have important mail.”
“ Oh it’s ok Barnleybe. But I never get important mail!”
Barnleybe hands the girl the mail.
“ Must get going a lot to do for t…[Read more]
Hi I am new to this and hope this is good!
Name: Aria (Ari) Charming
Age: 12 3/4
Parents: Cinderella and Prince Charming
Personality: Aria is kind and smart. She love reading and is never mean to peoples’ faces. She has lots of friends and is kind to all of them. Bubbly and nice.
Flaws: She has a weakness, for r…[Read more]
Cool start! It’s fine for you to use the template. You’re just missing backstory, and try expanding more detail into some areas of the bio like flaws and talent. But nice job!!
Aria was born in the kingdom of Camelot when her parents were visiting. She loves to daydream much like her mother. She has 2 siblings named Cindy and Ellie. When she was young all she wanted was a best friend, now she has 2, Bella Beauty daughter of Sleeping Beauty, and Icy White daughter of Snow White. She was raised in a castle, and…[Read more]