CHAPTER 1: cinderella
uuuggg it is so annoying to have to do all the chores in my house good thing im going to the SGE next month im so happy i totaly got 97% on my test, (and fyi is higher than all of my bffs) and someday i will become a princesses the most famous princess ever. ”CINDERELLA” Thats my sister lulinna but i call her loony :).…[Read more]
Good! But maybe a little longer and please pay attention to grammar so it’s easier to understand
I think its amazing. I love your cute little nicknames for “Cinderella’s sister”. And yes please pay just a tiny but more attention to your periods, commas, question marks, and exclamation point. Makes our lives easier and your story more enjoyable. And yes a little longer as well. Other than that awesome job! Keep up the good work. 🙂
prologe: Have you ever wondered about what it was like before ”we” got noticed, well if you have your about to find out.
im writing a book about the princesess before they were noticed