princessforlife1

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13th August, 2016

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    princessforlife1 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    CHAPTER 1: cinderella
    uuuggg it is so annoying to have to do all the chores in my house good thing im going to the SGE next month im so happy i totaly got 97% on my test, (and fyi is higher than all of my bffs) and someday i will become a princesses the most famous princess ever. ”CINDERELLA” Thats my sister lulinna but i call her loony :). ”CINDERELLA” I had better go see what she wants. ”What loo-lulinna?”. ”You need to get here faster you are way to slow. Go any slower an-”WHAT LULINNA”.Mom wants you jeez”.”Thanks lullinna”. ”Hello stepmother what do you need”. ”I wanted to discuss the SGE with you, as you know your sisters are going with you but they will be atending my school, the school for evil.” next chapter coming soon

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Cool!

        fairytalegirl123 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Good! But maybe a little longer and please pay attention to grammar so it’s easier to understand

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        I think its amazing. I love your cute little nicknames for “Cinderella’s sister”. And yes please pay just a tiny but more attention to your periods, commas, question marks, and exclamation point. Makes our lives easier and your story more enjoyable. And yes a little longer as well. Other than that awesome job! Keep up the good work. 🙂

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