princessforlife1 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 2 months ago

    CHAPTER 1: cinderella
    uuuggg it is so annoying to have to do all the chores in my house good thing im going to the SGE next month im so happy i totaly got 97% on my test, (and fyi is higher than all of my bffs) and someday i will become a princesses the most famous princess ever. ”CINDERELLA” Thats my sister lulinna but i call her loony :).…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Cool!

        fairytalegirl123 replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        Good! But maybe a little longer and please pay attention to grammar so it’s easier to understand

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 2 months ago

        I think its amazing. I love your cute little nicknames for “Cinderella’s sister”. And yes please pay just a tiny but more attention to your periods, commas, question marks, and exclamation point. Makes our lives easier and your story more enjoyable. And yes a little longer as well. Other than that awesome job! Keep up the good work. 🙂