princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 6 months ago

    Name: Hyacinths Vainor (She refuses to use her original last name, which was Ryder)
    Age: 12
    School: Evil
    Region: Onyx
    Fairytale relative:
    Plague (yes or no): No
    Summary of relative’s fairytale:
    Appearance: alongRaggy blood red hair hangs loosely against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never was exposed to daylight, eerie g…[Read more]

        kiko55 replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Awesome bios! But did you mean to post this on RP level 2? We don’t use those regions, I believe. You can if you want to though. Anyhow those where great bios! 🙂

          fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Um yeah. But it needed editing and stuff.

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Oh , I think i will move it to level 2. Thx for the advice

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        These are cool bios but it does need a few grammar checks. I liked them even though they’re meant for level 2. 😉

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Yup I know I probably have a lot of grammar mistakes and stuff, but I am happy that you like them, I would be moving them to Level 2 with some new bios that I just came up with.

        dot111 replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Great bios!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Thanks!

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 6 months ago

    My Bio:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    School: Good & Evil

    Gender: Female (Of course)

    Age: 13

    Talent: Born as a seer, is able to see the future and past of people and predict the big events that could once again shift the balance of good and evil, boys and girls.

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess…[Read more]

        gardeviorgirl replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Wow, SUPER long backstory… but I love every last bit of it! I can’t wait to read your story!
        Though @evilerruler845 is right… needs more personality

        princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Thanks for the suggestions! I could always use an extra pair of eyes. I would improve on the personality part, please point it out if I have more errors like grammar mistakes or story events

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 6 months ago

    I keep remembering the part in the first book where the Ever girls and the Ever boys were chanting ” Evers Rule Evers Rule” And than Caster got annoyed and roared ” EVERS RULE, EVERS RULE, EVERS ARE DUMB ARROGANT FOOLS!” i figured that it sort of rhymed. lol

        readertayre replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        oh yea. good point. i think it went something like this: Good: EVERS RULE! EVERS RULE! EVERS (Castor buts in here) ARE DUMB, ARROGANT FOOLS!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          yup, that was so funny I am still laughing about it with my friends

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        I’m pretty sure it was “STUPID ARROGANT FOOLS!”

        princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Yeah good point, I’ll be moving to the open chat area

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group Website Central 3 years, 6 months ago

    how do you tag people….

        kittywolf424 replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        To tag someone, you press @ followed by the username of whomever you want to tag. For example @princesshyacinth .

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Oh thanks! I just couldn’t figure it out

        scubatuba replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        hyacinths are one of my favorite flowers.

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 6 months ago

    Intro:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    School: Good & Evil

    Gender: Female (Of course)

    Age: 13

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

    Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

    Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never…[Read more]

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Hi! There are a few switches in tense here and there, but it seems like a cool bio. However, we happen to RP in a large group. Someone else has the link to the summary, but within our RP, there’s a deadly plague and the Endless Woods are split into 4 regions. So, you’re missing a few things that are listed with the summary in the rules section.…[Read more]

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Thanks for that, I didn’t really know the rules, I will consider changing the backstory, better off pure evil.

        em94 replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Hello, this is a good start, but you might want to check out our rules and summary first http://tinyurl.com/RPLevel2PlagueDoc In addition to this, we have rules against neutral characters, or characters attending both schools, sorry! I’m sure you can continue this story on Level 0 or 1 if you wanted to use that idea

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Thank you for the link! I will be sure to read it carefully

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 6 months ago

    Intro:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    School: Good & Evil

    Gender: Female (Of course)

    Age: 13

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

    Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

    Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        I love it!!!!!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          Thank you! I still got a lot to work on

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 6 months ago

    Intro:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    Age: 13

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

    Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

    Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never was exposed to daylight, eerie green eyes cold…[Read more]

        toffee replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        I really like it can you tag me

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

          of course! I am happy that you like my work

        princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        oh thankyou! Good suggestions!

        princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        Intro:
        Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

        School: Good & Evil

        Gender: Female (Of course)

        Age: 13

        Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

        Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

        Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never…[Read more]

        princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        There you get your personalities! I added some more details

        princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 6 months ago

        lol, should really be me saying thanks. I love advice from people because I know I tend to forget everything…… And I always have flaws everywhere. there is always something to improve, no one’s work could be exactly perfect.