princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 1 month ago

    Name: Hyacinths Vainor (She refuses to use her original last name, which was Ryder)
    Age: 12
    School: Evil
    Region: Onyx
    Fairytale relative:
    Plague (yes or no): No
    Summary of relative’s fairytale:
    Appearance: alongRaggy blood red hair hangs loosely against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never was exposed to daylight, eerie g…[Read more]

        kiko55 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Awesome bios! But did you mean to post this on RP level 2? We don’t use those regions, I believe. You can if you want to though. Anyhow those where great bios! 🙂

          fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Um yeah. But it needed editing and stuff.

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Oh , I think i will move it to level 2. Thx for the advice

        caramelprincess replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        These are cool bios but it does need a few grammar checks. I liked them even though they’re meant for level 2. 😉

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Yup I know I probably have a lot of grammar mistakes and stuff, but I am happy that you like them, I would be moving them to Level 2 with some new bios that I just came up with.

        dot111 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Great bios!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Thanks!

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 1 month ago

    My Bio:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    School: Good & Evil

    Gender: Female (Of course)

    Age: 13

    Talent: Born as a seer, is able to see the future and past of people and predict the big events that could once again shift the balance of good and evil, boys and girls.

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Yay! This is better! Cool bio!! Maybe a bit more detail into her personality, I suggest, but everything is good.

          gardeviorgirl replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Wow, SUPER long backstory… but I love every last bit of it! I can’t wait to read your story!
          Though @evilerruler845 is right… needs more personality

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Thanks for the suggestions! I could always use an extra pair of eyes. I would improve on the personality part, please point it out if I have more errors like grammar mistakes or story events

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 1 month ago

    I keep remembering the part in the first book where the Ever girls and the Ever boys were chanting ” Evers Rule Evers Rule” And than Caster got annoyed and roared ” EVERS RULE, EVERS RULE, EVERS ARE DUMB ARROGANT FOOLS!” i figured that it sort of rhymed. lol

        readertayre replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        oh yea. good point. i think it went something like this: Good: EVERS RULE! EVERS RULE! EVERS (Castor buts in here) ARE DUMB, ARROGANT FOOLS!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          yup, that was so funny I am still laughing about it with my friends

        evilerruler845 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Lol, that part was really funny! But you should be posting this in Open Chat, since this chat is where we post our bios and RP stories. This is a one-liner, and it clogs up the forum. Just remember this. But it actually went like this:
        Evers chanting: “EVERS RULE, EVERS RULE! EVERS—-
        Castor butts in: “ARE DUMB, ARROGANT FOOLS!”

          evilerruler845 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Like @readertayre said.

          fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          I’m pretty sure it was “STUPID ARROGANT FOOLS!”

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Yeah good point, I’ll be moving to the open chat area

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group Website Central 3 years, 1 month ago

    how do you tag people….

        kittywolf424 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        To tag someone, you press @ followed by the username of whomever you want to tag. For example @princesshyacinth .

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Oh thanks! I just couldn’t figure it out

        scubatuba replied 3 years ago

        hyacinths are one of my favorite flowers.

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 1 month ago

    Intro:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    School: Good & Evil

    Gender: Female (Of course)

    Age: 13

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

    Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

    Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never…[Read more]

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Hi! There are a few switches in tense here and there, but it seems like a cool bio. However, we happen to RP in a large group. Someone else has the link to the summary, but within our RP, there’s a deadly plague and the Endless Woods are split into 4 regions. So, you’re missing a few things that are listed with the summary in the rules section.…[Read more]

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Thanks for that, I didn’t really know the rules, I will consider changing the backstory, better off pure evil.

        em94 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Hello, this is a good start, but you might want to check out our rules and summary first http://tinyurl.com/RPLevel2PlagueDoc In addition to this, we have rules against neutral characters, or characters attending both schools, sorry! I’m sure you can continue this story on Level 0 or 1 if you wanted to use that idea

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Thank you for the link! I will be sure to read it carefully

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 1 month ago

    Intro:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    School: Good & Evil

    Gender: Female (Of course)

    Age: 13

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

    Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

    Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        I love it!!!!!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Thank you! I still got a lot to work on

    princesshyacinth posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 3 years, 1 month ago

    Intro:
    Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

    Age: 13

    Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

    Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

    Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never was exposed to daylight, eerie green eyes cold…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Nice bio!! But, you should really add her personality and talent. Otherwise, we really don’t know much about her, just what’s on her outside and a little bit from her past.

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          oh thankyou! Good suggestions!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          Intro:
          Name: Hyacinths of Camelot (or Rainbow Bridge, considering after adoption)

          School: Good & Evil

          Gender: Female (Of course)

          Age: 13

          Status: Witch of Camelot, Princess of Rainbow Bridge

          Soul purity: 50% Pure evil. 50% Pure good.

          Face Identity: Raggy blood red hair hangs loose against her face, covering most of her pale skin that never…[Read more]

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          There you get your personalities! I added some more details

        toffee replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        I really like it can you tag me

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          of course! I am happy that you like my work

        evilerruler845 replied 3 years, 1 month ago

        Thanks!! Much better!!

          princesshyacinth replied 3 years, 1 month ago

          lol, should really be me saying thanks. I love advice from people because I know I tend to forget everything…… And I always have flaws everywhere. there is always something to improve, no one’s work could be exactly perfect.