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New chap. Enjoy 😆
Chapter 7: Good or Not?
Jacob’s POV
Hello. It’s dusk, and everyone is waiting. For me to wake tomorrow morn, and announce to the world: Prince Jacob is going to the School for Good.
It’s not going to happen. I’m a ordinary boy! I don’t want ‘true love’ or even a ‘fairy tale’. I can be a Good King without a fairy t…[Read more]
😛 Whazz up? Nice chap. Quite dramatic. Also… 😈
Very Nice!!! 🙂
😈 😈
I know. . .
Great writing! 😉
Nice chapter! 🙂
Hey. This chap is very small, I just wanted to keep things moving!
Chapter 6: Prince of Vegetables- Jacob’s POV
I’m Jacob Beanstalk. Yes. You heard me. Beanstalk. I’m the eldest son of Jack Beanstalk. Well, yeah, he only has two sons. Anyway…
Wait a moment… I’m a Prince. I should act a bit more dignified.
*Ahem*
I am Prince Jaco…[Read more]
Even though it was shorter, that was still really good!!!
Exciting, I can’t wait to read more! 😉
Hey. Sorry I didn’t update sooner. I had a boatload of homework.
Chapter 5: Leaving- Sienna’s POV
Going tomorrow, I tell Hanna, the cobbler’s daughter and my friend.
Oh, she says. Well, my Papa said your parents are goblins in disguise, anyway.
What! I yelp. That’s not true, I protest. Hanna sighs.
You don’t have to be so defensi…[Read more]
*gobbles cookies*
Great work!
Keep it up. 😉
Wow I just want more more more! Loved it 🙂
‘Sup. I have THREE chapters to deliver one is a repeat from yesterday, and yeah! Hope you like them 🙂
Chapter 2: Glida- Dessa’s POV
It’s the next morning, and the sun is shining. I have to do needlepoint. Which sort of stinks. It’s one of those days where all you want to do is play outside and laugh and eat fresh bread and drink lemon…[Read more]
NIce.
Love the story so far! Keep up the great work 😉
Love it. That was GREAT. 😀
Hi guys. I have another one. 😀 I’m also gonna post this tomorrow with Chapter 3 (hopefully).
Chapter 2: Glida- Dessa’s POV
It’s the next morning, and the sun is shining. I have to do needlepoint. Which sort of stinks. It’s one of those days where all you want to do is play outside and laugh and eat fresh bread and drink lemonade. But I’m s…[Read more]
Ooh really good! Would Gilda give her away?! I can’t wait to find out!! 😉
Great, great, great, great. . .
I am on the edge of my seat!! 😀
K, I finished the Everboy. @Jlb23, when you get on, it’s done. I hope you like it.
Name: Jacob Beanstalk
Nickname: Jack or Jr. (by his father)
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Parents: Jack of the Beanstalk and The Princess of the Pea.
Appearance: Tall, shaggy ***** blond hair and green eyes. Fair skin and is unusually ***** for a prince.
Personality: Fun,…[Read more]
Cool bio! 😉
Love the bio!
Hi. I wrote chapter 1 of my story so I hope you like it. 😀
Chapter 1: Forever- Dessa’s POV
Hi. My name is Destiny Eternity Ema Thorn Brook. I’ve lived with Lord and Lady for my whole life, but they aren’t my real parents. My mother left me on the Lord and Lady’s steps because she couldn’t keep me safe enough. So here I am.
Life here isn’…[Read more]
I’d also like to reveal that me and @Jlb23 are working together closely ’cause we know each other so we will be using each others bios plenty. So yeah if your wondering we’re writing our stories together, so her chapter in her story will be a while.
Wait… @jlb23 is a girl?
Okay I need to stop expecting different genders like I thought ***** was a girl…… Dam it.
Yup, we’re both girls. I really don’t mind. Nice chapter.
Also, I would have long hair, but that is way too commen on this website(no offense) so I did short hair. But I have girl eyelashes XD. Whatever.
Wait…WHAT? I’m NOT A GIRL!!! @***** had that weird hair…but I just wanted to be a bit different. Plus, I’ve known JLB23 is a girl for a while now: I always zoom in on the eyelashes to check. Used to think Louis was a girl though! 😉
Great chapter. I love your writing!
I NEVER EVER EVEN DREAMED OF THINKING ***** AS A GIRL OF JLB23 AS A GIRL! How can you guys think of that??
And yeah, Leo used to think I was a girl! 😉
Oh well, anyways great story! 🙂
LOL! I always thought she was a girl. It is pretty common for girls to have long hair (take me , for example) so it makes sense why you’d want to be different. Cool writing 😉
Thanks everyone!
Hi, here’s the prologue, tell me what you think.
Prologue: Eternity
The woman cried silent tears. Saying goodbye is always hard. Shadows danced across her back as she whispered to the tiny baby on the marble step of the Lord’s castle.
“Faith.” The woman crooned to the small child longingly, her voice full of sorrow and hope, her frail body…[Read more]
Okay the beginning Faith\Eternity name thing, she CHANGED her name from Faith to Eternity. That was poorly explained.
Wow that was a fantastic start! I really want to read more, so please write the next part soon!!! 😉
Ooooh! I love it.
Please write more! 😉
So I’ve tried to make some bios for my characters, and so I made two. I’m going to make one more though. Tell me if this is detailed enough! I’m going to also make a Everboy later.
Sienna’s Bio
Name: Sienna Oakley Fir
Nickname: Ena
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Parents: A pair of lesser Wood Elves named Douglas Fir and Maple Fir
EverNever:…[Read more]
Cool! Can I use them in my story?
Wow! Those bios are great!
Can’t wait to see the story! 😉
cool
Nice Bio
@heart Nothing weird. I do this everywhere.
Hey guys, I’m back finally! What’s happened?
Anyways, here’s my story, in case you forgot (which you probably did)
Prologue: Eternity
The woman cried silent tears. Saying goodbye is always hard. Shadows danced across her back as she whispered to the tiny baby on the marble step of the Lord’s castle.
“Faith.” The woman crooned to the small…[Read more]
Great job!!