My Ranking Points
So this is my first character if you have any feedback plaese share!
Name: Hirni of Shazabah
Age: around 13
Lineage/family: Her mom, dad, and sister Ada. Her parents were part of the fairy tale “The Magic Dice.”(more about this later)
Personality: She is kind, and will never leave someone behind. She is determined and honest. Hirni may appear shy, but really she doesn’t like to socialize.She can be harsh, but around friends shes becomes joyful and humorous. Hirni takes her grades and future seriously, and if someone bothers her she might ignore them, or scream at them by accident(if she is in ‘the zone’). She uses sarcasm alot around Evers, since most of them aren’t as focused or serious as she is. Also she is very stubborn about certain things, and may see things as rude, even if they aren’t. She is also hardworking and very intelligent.
Appearance: Olive skin, Dark brownish black hair that is midway down her back, she is a regular height, her eyes are almond shaped and she usually wears her hair in three braids or in a bun. as for clothes, Hirni wears the school uniform, but wears a sweater over it and shorts under it(The new uniform is way to revealing)
Crush: None, Hirni won’t even consider it until it is part of her grades(occasionally she does worry though.)
Part of backstory: In “The Magic Dice” there are three main characters: Ten(villan), Aridra(Hirni’s Mother), and Carter(Hirni’s dad). [I can’t say anymore since it might spoil part of my story]
Wow, i am blown away. Hirni sounds like a really cool character. I am also really intrigued by her backstory… write more!