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Ello cupcakes! I am not going to be on all day, either on a rode trip to visit my grandparents or roller skating, I am not sure 😛 Anyway, I have my next chap for ya. If you are new to my story, click on @Ravenqueen123 and scroll to a prolugue
Ever Never Spirit (tag your name in the comments if you want to help bring RPers back to SGE)
Beneath the Soul Raven’s POV
Chapter 11 ~ Mysteries
Raven (@Ravenqueen123) woke up sweating. The dream she had the night before was way more intense now and she didn’t like any of the visions she saw, especially the one where she was floating over a battle, talking to another girl, and the School Master’s face appeared.
Raven sat up in her bed and expected to see her roommates but then she remembered that they were still in the Doom Room for what Raven had told them to do. After using here talent like that, Raven wanted to run away. So far that the Endless Woods would end, if that was even possible.
Raven was about go back to sleep but in the hallway outside her door, there was a very bright light. Raven got up and walked to the door and opened it. The light was coming from a floating orb. Raven was entranced by the orb’s beauty. When it started to move, Raven was right behind it try this figure out what it was and how it was moving.
Raven walked for what seemed like forever. Finally, the orb stopped moving in front of a wall. After a moment’s pause, the orb floated through the wall. Raven balked at this. Raven felt all around the wall but couldn’t find any secret latch to go through. When she gave up, Raven turned around to find six snarling wolves. Raven tried to run but there was no where to go. As the wolves closed in, a voice called out.
“Stop! Let me take care of her. After all, I am the Death Traps and Curses teacher.”
The wolves parted to reveal a stunning Sophie in a lush red bathrobe. Even after waking on th middle of the night, Sophie was still sickening beautiful.
“Go on now,” Sophie said, waving th wolves away. “She will get what she deserves.”
Raven gulped, realizing she was already on thin ice with Sophie before, now she was in danger.
“Com now, darling,” Sophie called over shoulder as she walked back in the direction she came in.
Raven took one last look at the wall where the orb went through and followed Sophie like a scolded puppy. Raven took these last moments of freedom before giving into the crushing fact that she was already dead.
*If you did not like or think this was a Good chapter, please list your ideas on how to make it better in the comments. Thanks for reading 🙂 😉 😀 😆 😎 *
Wow @rAvenquEeN123! That was fantastic writing! Keep up the great work. 🙂 😉
Could I give you Laurence and Julie’s bios to use, I would love them to be in your story.
Name: Laurence Pendragon of Camelot
Fairytale Relatives: Son of Tedros and Agatha
Finger Glow: Rich celestial blue
Talent: Controls the weather with emotions
Weapon: 3 metres of glistening steel that radiates magical glory, Excalibur
Personality: Emotional, dramatic, determined, brave – can be rash and do foolish things, kind, sensitive, relentlessly loyal, optimistic, never-ending energy, fair, always has a bounce in his step, bluntly honest, persistent, naive – can easily be made to trust the wrong people, launches headlong into things, sweet, scatter-brained – can never remember where he keeps his things, curious, keen, reliable, confident
Appearance: Lean, muscular, agile, nimble, bronzed-golden skin, silky hazelnut hair, wide crystal blue eyes, long eyelashes, tall, penetrating stare, rosy-cheeked, broad-shouldered, slim, slender waist, high cheekbones, upright figure
Typical Clothing: Royal blue sweater, navy breeches, polished black boots
Hobbies: Sword-fighting, eating, exercising, archery
Pet: Reaper the cat
Crush: Juliet/Julie Riverty of Avalon
Backstory: Grew up in Camelot, with Tedros, Agatha, Guinevere and Lancelot, taught by Merlin
Name: Juliet/Julie Riverty of Avalon
Fairytale Relatives: Daughter of Jack and Briar Rose (Sleeping Beauty)
Finger Glow: Electric blue
Talent: Has a clear laughing voice which can halt the senses when spoken in soft, gentle tones, or get information when persuasive or intimidating
Weapon: A flute with notes so enticing, it makes the word blur around a person, and the only thing that can be seen is Julie and her flute. However, it can only be used on 1 person at a time
Personality: Intense, earnest, independent, sensitive – cries very easily, creative, passionate, scatter-brained, generous, messy, cheerful, hearty, never thinks before speaking, talkative, impatient, easily distracted, a very infectious laugh, captivating
Appearance: Peach skin, oval face, tender rose red lips, slim, slender, glossy strawberry blonde tresses, brilliant deep blue-violet eyes with a vivacious twinkle, slight shoulders, dimpled smile
Typical Clothing: Violet ribbon in hair, blouse and skirt in soft colours like pale blue or fern green
Hobbies: Chatting, mimicking, singing – has a pure, sweet voice – laughing, flying her unicorn
Pet: Snowy white, winged unicorn called Faye
Crush: Laurence Pendragon of Camelot
Backstory: Grew up in the peaceful atmosphere of Avalon with Briar Rose and Jack, always hoping for a Flowerground Pass.
Other: Julie hates needlework and gardening, as they both require patience, and Julie is not a patient person. Needlework and gardening were also the flaws in her parent’s fairytales. She is also an early-bird, she wakes up at sunrise.
Hope Laurence and Julie are in!
*Throws cookies everywhere*
Good chapter, but there was a few typos is all! You forgot me in the EverNever Spirit: @Jlb23
Sorry @Jlb23! I promise that this won’t ever happen again 😉
YES! Finally, the war is over *a crowd cheers in background as cookies and bacon unite in peace* this chapter was really good, it kept me on the edge of my seat. Write more soon–or now! Now would be awesome 😉