Okay thanks to all the thought and suggestions I’m currently writing chapter 4. So before I begin a little recap seems in order Honey was taken to the school for made one friend Glacial and meet a prince.
The morning was really wet Drew hated really wet. Honey somehow that name was always on his mind. He got dressed and went down for…[Read more]
I posted a prologue yesterday but I finished writing a chapter so I’m gonna post it
Chapter 1 Hive
Honey was not happy. Her sisters were stuck up and full of it! For goodness sakes it wasn’t her fault she was going to the school for good and and they were going to evil. She had never said a word in her life and wouldn’t start now. Her mother…[Read more]
Cool! There were a few run-ones though! It’s a great start! Could you tag me?
Okay before I do my RP I’m gonna do a Bio on my character
Last Name: bee
Appearance: Honey hair pale skin and blue eyes
Pet: Wasp the brown bear
Talents: Can control bees
Personality: extremely kind but antisocial yet loveable attracts most princes
Friends: one glacial a frosty…[Read more]
I like it, except the bio could use more detail and maybe check your spelling and grammar but besides that great job!
Cool! Although the bio could have a bit more detail, and just watch for spelling mistakes. Good job though! 🙂