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Hi! This is my story.
Owen stared out the window of the castle. He wished he could be out there, and not stuck in his father’s old castle. A sudden loneliness swept through him. Reminding him that he was all alone in this world. His parents had died when he was born. He lived alone. The only person to talk to were the stewards and they didn’t talk much. A soft breeze blew through the hallway. Owen felt a chill rattle him. How could there be a breeze when there was no windows in the castle? He took one look behind him and jumped gasped. A shadow was coming down the hallway. He turned to run, but then remembered that it was probably just a steward. He went back to looking out the window, remembering his loneliness. But the breeze still rattled him. He turned back to see that the shadow had not moved. He went pale. “L-Lady Marian, is that you?” He stammered, nervous. The shadow did not budge. Now Owen ran. Faster than he had ever ran before. Panting and sweating, he reached his own bedroom, where he locked himself inside. With his back against the door, he sighed in relief. After all, it was probably just a steward that didn’t hear him. That’s when he felt the breeze again.