nicole5677 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 5 months ago

    Chapter 1: My nightmares come true
    I fell into crystal blue water. Even thought it was only for a moment I hated it. Lilly pads lifted my up from the water. Some how I wasn’t wet. I was a little happy about that. “Welcome to the school of Good” a girl wearing pink said smiling from ear to ear. It made me sick. “Please follow me this way. You will…[Read more]

        fairytalegirl123 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Just fix some grammar mistakes, otherwise you’re good!

        dot111 replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Great job! It was just a little bit confusing as to who’s speaking, so you might want create a new line for each speaker. Other than that, it was good. πŸ™‚

        caramelprincess replied 4 years, 5 months ago

        Improve grammar wise and then you’ll be good πŸ™‚

    reaperthecat290 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Here is all of Audrey’s story. I put all of it in one post for those of you who want to read all the chapters if you missed one. Enjoy!!!!

    Prologue:
    Upon arriving to Camelot, Agatha began to look around from outside the carriage window. Her bug eyes ballooned in size at the sight of Camelot. Everywhere she looked, she saw men, women, and…[Read more]

        willowofravenswood replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        this is absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should DEFINITELY be a writer!!!!! ;D

          reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          TY

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Love it!

        espilce replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Nice

        sparklestars123 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Amazing! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

        fairytaleendings replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        I love your story and I know you’ve read and commented on a lot of my chapters so THANK YOU and your stories are AMAZING!

        emanresu1234 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Great job! You are a wonderful writer, and I hope to continue reading Audrey’s story. πŸ™‚

        lapislazuli replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Srry I read it late but it’s really good!!

          cuteypie1mint replied 4 years, 6 months ago

          This is great I love it!

        reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 6 months ago

        Thanks guys!

    fairytaleendings posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Hi! Here is chapter eight of my (Pamela’s) story! Earlier chapters @fairytaleendings and enjoy and leave feedback please!
    CHAPTER 8
    Staring at the sign, Pamela twisted her head in several directions before realising the sign obviously wasn’t intended for her. She had never made a mess of anything except a gelato her parents got her when she was s…[Read more]

        reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        I love the story!!! Here, to help you out, I will try and make a bio for Jet
        Name- Jet ???(parentage=help for last name, so I am leaving it up to you, but he doesn’t have to have one)
        Villain Talent- Excellent knife thrower and can put people under a spell temporarily so that they either following his directions, or do not feel/act like themselves…[Read more]

          reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          I hop that helps

        dovelove replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        This is soooo good

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Love the Story!

        emanresu1234 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Once again, great job! I don’t know if you noticed, but I just posted chapter 4 of my story yesterday. I know that you usually read them, and I thought you would like to know. Read it here: @emanresu1234 Keep it up! πŸ™‚

        fairytaleendings replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Thank you all so much! Thanks for the bio as well, I’m going to use it!

    espilce posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    At lunch Chesnut and I walked through the line.
    “If we’re friends to all animals” I began while taking two biscuits and an apple, “then why do we eat meat?” I was referring to the pork chops.
    “Are you a vegetarian,” Chesnut responded while grabbing a pork chop and a pear.
    “No, I couldn’t live without bacon,” I answered as we walked toward a…[Read more]

        reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        love it! can’t wit for more πŸ˜€

        espilce replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Spelling corrections
        Grab to grabbed
        Bit to bite

        willowofravenswood replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        That’s really good! πŸ™‚

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Love it

    lapislazuli posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter Two: The School for Good and Evil
    Riley awoke to a stymph holding her in his bony legs. She saw plenty other students Evers and Nevers. As she peered at the children she saw a boy who she felt like she remembered. She couldn’t get another look though because the stymph let her go into a crystal blue lake. She saw fairies helping students o…[Read more]

        iosaf replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Nice job good work!! πŸ˜‰

          lapislazuli replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          Thx πŸ˜€ @iosaf

        doglover15 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Very nice beginning

          lapislazuli replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          Thank you @doglover15

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Good Job, Love it

        willowofravenswood replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        really good 2nd chapter. riley smirks a lot.

        reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Wonderful!!!!! πŸ™‚

    icey4605 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Alright, guys. Here it is.

    Chapter 1:

    The faeries looked like Tinker Bell. The only difference was that they were rainbow colored, and a lot nicer. Jez watched as they gently pulled students ashore. Jez, however, hauled herself up from the crystal blue water.
    “Welcome to the School for Good,” said an electric blue faerie, flying just…[Read more]

        reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Great job! can’t wait for the next chapter! πŸ™‚

          icey4605 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          Thank you.

        hazelofthewoodsbeyond replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        That was really good!

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Nice, this was good.

    lapislazuli posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Chapter One: A Mysterious Letter
    Riley was out enjoying a walk on her father’s beanstalk. She was enjoying how high it was up and usally spends her time bouncing on the clouds. But today she was just thinking. “Odd,” she said as she was peering over the edge of the beanstalk,”it just felt like yesterday when I was terrified of heights.”She…[Read more]

        reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Love it! keep up the good work πŸ˜‰

          lapislazuli replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          Thx πŸ˜‰

        authorkay replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Good job, keep writing!

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Love it, keep on writing! @fsa161

        willowofravenswood replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        that was really good

    reaperthecat290 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 10 months ago

    Bio for Liana:

    Name- Liana
    Gender- Female
    Mother- Beatrix
    Father- Chaddick
    Home- Jaunt Jolie
    Appearence: Gold blond hair wore loosley thathangs downto her waste. She always wears dresses with somesort of necklace. She prefers high heels and flats in colors that match her dresses. She wears mostly white, pink,yellow,orange, lilac, purple, red,…[Read more]

        katie-rose replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        I like them. The only thing is is that you should put their personalities in there as well. And, no offence, but them seem a bit perfect. Maybe you could add some flaws? Other than that, I can’t wait to read what happens to those characters! πŸ™‚

          reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          okay

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Good job!

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        please read my chapter and bio at @fsa161

    reaperthecat290 posted an update 4 years, 10 months ago

    Hey Ev’s and Nev’s it’s @reaperthecat290 here and I have Chapter three to my story. Coming soon will be the bios for Liana, Ryan, and Chloe. If you guys have any characther bios you want me to use feel free to give them.
    To @Arian2 and @FSA161 , Here is the next chapter
    Credit for the made up character bios go to: @HELLGATE2000 , @ISABELLUCY0531…[Read more]

        fsa161 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        AWESOME! Can’t wait for the next chapter

          reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

          πŸ™‚

        fairytaleendings replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        That’s great! πŸ™‚

    fairytaleendings posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 11 months ago

    Here is chapter 6, sorry about the lenghth. @fairytaleendings if you want to read earlier chapters!
    CHAPTER 6
    There was one single thought going through Pamela’s head and it wasn’t anything like what a princess was supposed to think. Not even close. Petunia had crossed the line. Her clothes were everywhere; her trunk was on a WARDROBE! How did tha…[Read more]

        emanresu1234 replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        I love this one! Can’t wait to see what happens next! πŸ™‚

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 11 months ago

        Nice! πŸ™‚ Petunia isn’t very nice by the look of things…

        reaperthecat290 replied 4 years, 10 months ago

        Awesomeeee!!!!!!

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