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Chapter 1: My nightmares come true
I fell into crystal blue water. Even thought it was only for a moment I hated it. Lilly pads lifted my up from the water. Some how I wasn’t wet. I was a little happy about that. “Welcome to the school of Good” a girl wearing pink said smiling from ear to ear. It made me sick. “Please follow me this way. You will…[Read more]
Just fix some grammar mistakes, otherwise you’re good!
Great job! It was just a little bit confusing as to who’s speaking, so you might want create a new line for each speaker. Other than that, it was good. 🙂
Here is all of Audrey’s story. I put all of it in one post for those of you who want to read all the chapters if you missed one. Enjoy!!!!
Upon arriving to Camelot, Agatha began to look around from outside the carriage window. Her bug eyes ballooned in size at the sight of Camelot. Everywhere she looked, she saw men, women, and…[Read more]
this is absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should DEFINITELY be a writer!!!!! ;D
I love your story and I know you’ve read and commented on a lot of my chapters so THANK YOU and your stories are AMAZING!
Great job! You are a wonderful writer, and I hope to continue reading Audrey’s story. 🙂
Hi! Here is chapter eight of my (Pamela’s) story! Earlier chapters @fairytaleendings and enjoy and leave feedback please!
Staring at the sign, Pamela twisted her head in several directions before realising the sign obviously wasn’t intended for her. She had never made a mess of anything except a gelato her parents got her when she was s…[Read more]
I love the story!!! Here, to help you out, I will try and make a bio for Jet
Name- Jet ???(parentage=help for last name, so I am leaving it up to you, but he doesn’t have to have one)
Villain Talent- Excellent knife thrower and can put people under a spell temporarily so that they either following his directions, or do not feel/act like themselves…[Read more]
Once again, great job! I don’t know if you noticed, but I just posted chapter 4 of my story yesterday. I know that you usually read them, and I thought you would like to know. Read it here: @emanresu1234 Keep it up! 🙂
At lunch Chesnut and I walked through the line.
“If we’re friends to all animals” I began while taking two biscuits and an apple, “then why do we eat meat?” I was referring to the pork chops.
“Are you a vegetarian,” Chesnut responded while grabbing a pork chop and a pear.
“No, I couldn’t live without bacon,” I answered as we walked toward a…[Read more]
Chapter Two: The School for Good and Evil
Riley awoke to a stymph holding her in his bony legs. She saw plenty other students Evers and Nevers. As she peered at the children she saw a boy who she felt like she remembered. She couldn’t get another look though because the stymph let her go into a crystal blue lake. She saw fairies helping students o…[Read more]
Alright, guys. Here it is.
The faeries looked like Tinker Bell. The only difference was that they were rainbow colored, and a lot nicer. Jez watched as they gently pulled students ashore. Jez, however, hauled herself up from the crystal blue water.
“Welcome to the School for Good,” said an electric blue faerie, flying just…[Read more]
Chapter One: A Mysterious Letter
Riley was out enjoying a walk on her father’s beanstalk. She was enjoying how high it was up and usally spends her time bouncing on the clouds. But today she was just thinking. “Odd,” she said as she was peering over the edge of the beanstalk,”it just felt like yesterday when I was terrified of heights.”She…[Read more]
Bio for Liana:
Home- Jaunt Jolie
Appearence: Gold blond hair wore loosley thathangs downto her waste. She always wears dresses with somesort of necklace. She prefers high heels and flats in colors that match her dresses. She wears mostly white, pink,yellow,orange, lilac, purple, red,…[Read more]
I like them. The only thing is is that you should put their personalities in there as well. And, no offence, but them seem a bit perfect. Maybe you could add some flaws? Other than that, I can’t wait to read what happens to those characters! 🙂
Hey Ev’s and Nev’s it’s @reaperthecat290 here and I have Chapter three to my story. Coming soon will be the bios for Liana, Ryan, and Chloe. If you guys have any characther bios you want me to use feel free to give them.
To @Arian2 and @FSA161 , Here is the next chapter
Credit for the made up character bios go to: @HELLGATE2000 , @ISABELLUCY0531…[Read more]
Here is chapter 6, sorry about the lenghth. @fairytaleendings if you want to read earlier chapters!
There was one single thought going through Pamela’s head and it wasn’t anything like what a princess was supposed to think. Not even close. Petunia had crossed the line. Her clothes were everywhere; her trunk was on a WARDROBE! How did tha…[Read more]