reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    @ashleyever2424 @amethyst009 @stargirl13 Chapter 10. Sorry for the cliff-hanger at the end. Actually, I’m not sorry! *Evil cackle*
    Leesha walked into the Blue Forest, determined on getting to Lilith and Myrae. She refused to cave in to fear, no matter how much it pushed and pulled at her, trying to warp her mind. She now understood why Castor and…[Read more]

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Wait- WHAT!? Can’t wait to see what happens next, @reemkahin!

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 9 months ago

          TBH, even I don’t know what’s going to happen next!

        isabellucy0531 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Ahhhh that ending! The drama in those last few sentences went from 0 to 100 real quick haha

        oreliaotter replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        I loooooooooove your story. #keepwriting!!!

        peppy replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Nice! I love it. πŸ™‚

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Jaw drops open…. OMG. But now what happens to me?! Don’t kill me! LOL πŸ˜€

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    @ashleyever2424 @leslie191234 @stargirl13 @amethyst009 Chapter 9 has FINALLY arrived!
    As the Trial by Tale grew closer, the nevergirls and the evergirls met more.
    They made plan after plan, but their thoughts were fruitless. Of course, Suzanne and Nica were **** at revenge, so the conversations usually went something like this:
    “I have a jar of…[Read more]

        reemkahin replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Constructive criticism, please!

        peppy replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Great work! I can’t think of any constructive criticism apart from: when using commas in speech, put the comma before the speech mark.
        Example from your story: β€œFor the last time”, Nica lashed.
        Next time, try: “For the last time,” Nica lashed.
        ~~~~~~
        Keep writing! πŸ˜‰

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Nice job! Wish these stories were longer though. I really like reading them! πŸ™‚

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Great! The part with the leeches was so funny πŸ™‚ . Anyway, my only criticism is that it could have been longer and at the end they were the last pair and you said it had started. Otherwise awesome though, love the storyline!

        leslie191234 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        !!! Amazing !!! No criticism at all!!! πŸ™‚

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    How do you become an elder? Not that I think I’ll be one, just curious.

        arian2 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        This is going to sound really arrogant, but:
        Elders on level 0 are only elected once they fit a number of qualities. This doesn’t mean that we consider any of them β€œsuperior,” we simply acknowledge them as Elders and task them with leading, helping out, representing and giving friendly advice. They need to be online often, post at least once a wee…[Read more]

          theheartofgold101 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

          i am an elder for rp #1

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 9 months ago

          Oooohhh. Makes sense, thank you!

        queenofsneaks replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        *nods* What he said.

        jlb23 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        *nods* What she said.

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    Happy Birthday, @foreverevernever! Hope you have a great birthday πŸ˜€

        foreverevernever replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        YOU REMEMBERED!!!

        Mountain View

        clareofendlesswoods replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Happy Birthday, too!

        victoriaperrrea replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Happy birthday!!!

          kaylakoola13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

          Happy birthday!

        isabellucy0531 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Happy Birthday! Hope your day’s full of amazing surprises πŸ™‚

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    Hey guys, sorry I haven’t been writing a lot lately. I just don’t know what to write. Anyone who read my story, please help!
    If you didn’t read it, see it at @reemkahin

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Ok, so the girls are trying to get revenge on Amy, right? If the Trial By Tale hasn’t happened yet, you should totally have them get her back at the T.B.T.! You can pick the revenge! Can’t wait for next chapter!

        silvercloaked replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        I am a writer and i wish i could give you some ideas but the best i can say is that if you go online and look up Writing prompts you might be able find something that inspires you. You can look up fantasy writing prompts or dialogue prompts if you aren’t finding what you need. Remember that you can change the prompt anyway you want

        reemkahin replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Thanks guys

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    @amethyst009 @leslie191234 @ashleyever2424 @stargirl13 Chapter 8
    Something had changed. Leesha and her coven saw that Suzanne and Nica were not close to Amy anymore. They looked as though they had had a fight. This pleased the Evil *********.
    “Anything that hurts them is my hero”, joked Lilith.
    They also saw how Amy was acting more Good than ever…[Read more]

        theheartofgold101 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        nice

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Can’t wait for more!

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Nice, can’t wait for the next one!

        gracefulmagic replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Great! I love your style of writing! Small chapters, but enough happening to keep us going. Keep it up. I can’t wait for the next one!

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Well done! I wonder what the plan is? (Meanwhile the computer is sounding like a fan…)

        leslie191234 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        AMZING!!!! ^_^

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    @amethyst009 @leslie191234 @stargirl13 @ashleyever2424 and anyone else who is reading, this is my first POV, so please tell me how to improve! Chapter 7, Amy’s POV
    I know that what I did was wrong (sort of). I know the rules, Evil attacks, Good defends. I know, I know, I know! But I have a line. And when you cross it there are consequences. This…[Read more]

        pander27 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        It feels like I’m reading The School for Good and Evil all over again, just with different characters!

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 9 months ago

          Is that good or bad?

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Nice, I thought it was good.

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Good job @reemkahin!

        leslie191234 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        That’s super great, keep it up πŸ˜‰

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    Hey guys. Haven’t written in a while, but I have a really good excuse: School.
    So here’s Chapter 6 @leslie191234 @amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 @stargirl13
    Blinded and mute, this was one of the most terrifying moments Leesha had ever experienced. There was no way to escape, and she couldn’t talk to or see Myrae and Lilith.
    Then Leesha felt her…[Read more]

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Nice! πŸ™‚ Mwahaha revenge time!

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Great! Can’t wait to see(or read about, to be exact) the look on those Everboys’ faces(revenge time!).

        reemkahin replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        The revenge might take a while πŸ™ The Trial by Tale is before the Circus, and that’s when the boys propose, so I’ll still have other things to write about before I can get to their plan.

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Great!

        leslie191234 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Fantastic job I loved it!!! πŸ™‚

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    I want to do a POV, but I’m not sure what they are exactly. Can someone help?

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Ok, POVs are basically the chapter from the character’s point of view(hence the name). Like, instead of saying “Sara crossed the bridge,” you’d say “I crossed the bridge”, you being Sara. Glad to help you, @reemkahin!

        foreverevernever replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        It doesn’t have to be in 1st person. It can also be in 3rd person.

        Anna crossed the bridge to see… her mother! A scream came from her mouth, as she ran from the school.

        or

        I crossed the bridge to see… my mother! There was nothing I could do but scream, as I ran for my life.

        queenofsneaks replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        POV stands for ‘point of view’. So it is first person.

    reemkahin posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 4 years, 9 months ago

    @amethyst009 @ashleyever2424 Chapter 5
    “MYRAE!!! WE”VE BEEN LOOKING EVERYWHERE FOR YOU, WHAT–”
    “SSHHHH!” Lilith glared at the librarian for shushing her.
    “But seriously Myrae, we woke up and couldn’t find you, and spent half an hour looking all over for you! You better have a good excuse, ’cause God help you if you don’t”, Leesha whisper-…[Read more]

        leslie191234 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        I’m just drinking up all the words you write!

          reemkahin replied 4 years, 9 months ago

          Haha. Thanks πŸ˜€

        amethyst009 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Nicely done! πŸ™‚

        stargirl13 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        Can’t wait for Chapter Six!

        ashleyever2424 replied 4 years, 9 months ago

        I thought it was AWESOME! Keep it going!

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