rive posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 4 months ago

    Same chapter…… Chapter four: The school for good and evil
    The night air whistled in Evergreen ears and ruffled her hair. Evergreen looked up in the sky, at the stars shinning brightly, at the darkness beyond the stars. Evergreen loved the stars. They seemed so free, no mind, just a bright light. She wished she could be a star right now, free…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Not a Hunger Games fan fiction… hmmm…
        Nice chapter!!!

    rive posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 4 months ago

    Umm i’m gonna be gone for a couple days
    Chapter 4: The school for good and evil
    The shadow carried Evergreen into the night sky, ravan a small dot below. Evergreen thrashed and kicked, but it was no use. Eventually she gave up, watching her home become smaller and smaller.
    Evergreen sniffled and tears ran down her cheeks. She’d never see her…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Oh, okay, Nice chapter!

          rive replied 2 years, 4 months ago

          Thanks

    rive posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 4 months ago

    Something grabbed her neck and pulled her away from Ravan. Evergreen screamed, thrashing widly but her captor held on. She looked back, heart beating fast. It was the thing that was supposed to take her! It was a shadowy, and pure dark.
    Evergreen screamed and thrashed harder. She would not let this thing take her!!! “Help, Ravan!” Evergreen…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        You might want to tell us what chapter it is, but otherwise nice job!

          rive replied 2 years, 4 months ago

          ummmm chapter 3: Taken

    rive posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 4 months ago

    Chapter two: Goodbye
    Evergreen ran back to her house, the sun setting quickly. Her heart hammered in her chest and sweat dripped down her head. Tonight was the night…The night she would be taken.
    As she ran down the cobbled stone path to her house she bumped into someone. “Sorry” Evergreen muttered , contuining to run. Someone grabbed her arm.…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Aw, very nice chapter!!

          rive replied 2 years, 4 months ago

          thanx

    rive posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 4 months ago

    Chapter one: Kidnapping
    Evergreen dipped her feet in the ice cold water. Slowly she lowered herself farther in the pond, the water numbing her bones. Despite the cold Ever plungded her head in the water and swam, joy filling her. She loved swimming, too bad she probably would never have that joy again.
    Everyone was saying she be kidnapped…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Nice chapter!

          rive replied 2 years, 4 months ago

          thanx

        jadeeverdeen replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        wow!!! that was really good. Can’t wait for chp. 2

        eveofriverwood replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Ohh, good chapter!

    rive posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 4 months ago

    Hi, everybody. I’m new. Um…here’s my bio for my character..
    Name: Evergreen snow
    School: Good
    Gender: female
    Appearance: Carmel hair and green eyes,slender.
    Clothing : Normal good uniform
    Fairy tale linage… Reader

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

        Nice start!
        You need more detail…? And here is a welcome:
        Welcome to RP Level 0! I’m @evilerruler845, so click my username to read my stories. We have different RP(roleplay) levels. RP Level 0 is a starting point for those who are new to RP. Level 0 and Level 1 are written individually (usually), but Level 1 has more detail in their stories. Y…[Read more]

          rive replied 2 years, 4 months ago

          Thanks for all the info :D. Here is my updated bio for my character with the thing you suggested.
          Age:13
          School: Good……for now..
          Personality: Kind and daring. She is very reckless, and likes to try new things.
          Flaws: Has a hot temper, and is reckless which usually leaves to getting into trouble.
          Pets: a snow fox
          Weapons: Dagger which she…[Read more]

          evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 4 months ago

          Ah, much better! Just where the backstory? Also, more detail detail could make it even better, but this is much better than before. 🙂