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    Myhical P2 this one is 15 pages google docs
    “Y-you survived” Lilypad starts of sounding surprised until it turns into a bellow off joy
    ‘Don’t be so surprised” Mallow jokes her voice straining with effort
    “Here take a rest I’ll go collect some moss.”
    “Th-th-anks” which turns into a fit of coughing
    “I’m fine” she chokes out
    “No you’re not” Lilypad replies more sternly now
    “I’m still your medicine cat” she says not trying to hide the triumph in her voice
    Mallow gives out a groan of defeat and slops her head down
    Lilypad gives a snort and goes off to fetch some hasadow for the **** in her throat.

    She comes back carrying a bundle of hasadow
    “Here you go” she says between chewing the herbs up.
    She drops them at Mallows massive paws and goes off
    To find herself a place to rest
    She slowly drifts off to see Lotus towering over her
    She sees the whole pack beside her
    “Whaa” Lilypad starts
    Mallow sees an old tomcat in the distance
    “Dad” she says happily running towards the tom
    “It is quite a fine day isn’t it Lilypad?”
    “Sometimes Mallow Lilypad is a bit annoying don’t you agree?” He whispers
    Not meaning for Mallow to hear
    Her smile instantly fades and it turns into a frown
    “F-father how could you say that” She says between sulks
    Lilypad shoots a glare at Colepad
    “She’s your daughter” She hisses into his ear
    “How dare you?!”
    “Have some respect”
    “GET A LIFE WILL YOU” She screams with anger
    “Enough” Lotus overlaps Her voice
    “Thanks “ Mallow whispers
    “Anytime”
    “Can we just get on with the message” Pawprint moans

    “There is a great danger coming” Mable starts her voice shaking
    A dragon bigger than Mist is coming
    Just then Mist threw her head back
    Everyone screams
    Three nimble motionless shapes appear in the middle of the clearing
    “Patch, Lilac, Mal” She moans
    Patch gives a low moan
    “Mommy?”
    “Patch!” her heart leaps
    “A big red figure killed Lilac and Mal” He whines
    “HE WILL REGRET THAT” She screams
    “Calm down” Lotus Tries to sooth her
    ‘HOW CAN I CALM DOWN I WILL NEVER CALM DOWN!”
    “Stop making such a fuss over some stupid kits”
    “They were no use anyway” Shadepelt starts
    “ONE MORE TIME SHADEPELT AND YOU ARE GONE” Lotus yells
    I have never lost control before Lotus thinks
    She look around everyone looking astonished
    “Sorry”
    “Can we hunt now” Pawprint asks
    “We cannot tell them about these clans yet!”
    “How many times do I have to tell you Spot!” Mable says
    Everyone ****** their ears
    “Oof we forgot to end the dream” Pawprints says Stomping his feet expectantly
    “CRAB” Mable says
    “WE NEVER FORGOT HEHEHEHE”
    “I’M JUST GOING TO END IT NOW”
    Lotus gives a snort
    Awkward silence occurs
    Everyone wakes up to their usual spots
    “I’m sure it was just a dream…” Lilypad says awkwardly
    “Yeah….”
    “I just had the weirdest dream” Mallow says with laughter
    “It was about the whole pack and starpack forgot to end the meeting”
    “That wasn’t a dream..
    That was starpack!”
    “Ok!”

    “I may or may not of heard them say something” Mallow says quickly
    ‘Mmm fishy” Lilypad replies laughing’
    “You feel like my last daughter Addie”
    “What do you mean your last daughter?”
    “YOU SAID I WAS YOUR ONLY LITTER” She cried
    “Mallow I’m so sorry” She whispers
    “I”VE BEEN LIVING A LIE AND ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY IS SORRY REALLY MOTHER REALLY IF YOU’RE EVEN MY REAL MOTHER!!!”
    “Mallow please… can we argue later?”
    “SURE WE CAN ARGUE LATER!”
    “CAUSE I DON’T CARE NO MORE!!!!!!!!!!”
    “FINE”
    She says stomping off

    5 MINUTES LATER
    I’m so sorry Mallow I’m so sorry” She says sobbing
    “OH IT’S FINE WHEN YOU HAVE BETRAYED ME MY WHOLE LIFE IT’S FINE!!!!”
    “Thanks Mallow”
    “I was kidding idiot” Mallow says blankly
    “Oh” she says looking disappointed
    “YEAH OH”
    “HEY YOU” something appears from the gloom
    (That’s her usual act)
    “What is it Cloudmind?”
    “Wanna have another fight?”
    “Wanna lose again sure”
    Mallow glances nervously around

    What do I do? If i help cloudmind that would be a complete betrayal to my clan but I really don’t want to help lilypad! Oh what do I do?
    “Trouble in paradise?” Cloudmind asks affectionately
    How does she know?!
    Then she notices she had a worried look on her face
    “****” She whispers
    What do I do?
    **** how much of an idiot am I of course I fight on Lilypad’s side
    Mallow bares her teeth in the beginnings of a snarl
    She looks down to the ground and see’s Lilypad lying motionless
    “NO NOOOOOO” She screams
    “Hmm I was hoping you were miserable and trust me this is only the beginning of my revenge…”

    CHAPTER 4
    “CLOUDMIND?!”
    “Yes sweetie?”
    “1st of all you have no right to call me sweetie”
    “Yes I do! Your mother is dead and now I shall be treated as your mother”
    “In your dreams! I would rather have a bug take care of me then you” she whips round and stalks off
    “Where are you going, you’re in the middle of a journey I suppose I could accompany you?”
    “Well you supposed wrong’”
    “Fine go get killed in the wild see if I care!”
    Mallow treks on until she reaches a strip of water in front of it
    “You Can do this” she breathes
    She takes a deep breath and dives into her enemy.
    The water laps over her muzzle
    She tries to push her way to the surface
    “Help me Starpack” she says with the last of her voice
    “Need any help?” Cloudmind snickers
    “Idiot” She gasps
    “Thanks” She replies striding away
    She works her way up to the surface
    She takes a deep breath before the water submerges her under again
    It’s not working. I guess this is the end of me. She thinks giving up all hope
    She closes her eyes and lets the water take her under
    She feels something grasping her tail
    Pulling her even further under
    She opens her eyes for a brief moment to see a strange figure
    “Who are you” she gasps with the VERY last of her breath
    “Mallow it’s really you!!!!”
    “Umm Please explain what’s going on” She says dying for breath now
    “Follow me into my lab I’ll get you a breath & Speak potion in the ocean”
    She scans over 100 potions
    “Here you go!” She pulls out a jar of Black & Red substance
    And a dark blue one
    “The blue one is breath underwater and Black & Red is the speak underwater.
    Drink em up now!”
    “Okay… here goes nothing”
    She takes them both in two swigs
    An unmistakable grin spreads upon her face
    She whips off a wig
    “For I am Ursula Haquit”
    “URSULA HAQUIT YOU’RE THE VILLAIN OF ALL TIME AREN’T YOU?!”
    ‘Chill out dude you can breathe and speak underwater now can’t you?”
    She looks down at her paws
    “I thought you might be good for making villains good people teams?”
    “But you’re a villain aren’t you?”
    “No everyone thinks that because i have killing potions but really they are just labeled that to scare people”
    “Sure I will work for your team!”
    Her face lightens
    “Really thank you! I will go grab an interviewer to interview you!”

    10 minutes later

    “Hello! Ursula told me follow me!!”
    Is this betraying my Pack?!
    I will come in 9 moons or so surely they will welcome me with open arms
    Won’t they?
    She snaps back to the present
    “Yeah sure coming”
    “Okay first question is what do you know about science?”
    “Well um about that”
    Her pupils narrowed
    “You know things about science right?”
    “Of course I do” She snaps back
    Better to say random things then no
    She blurts out a whole lot of random things off the top of her mind
    “Ok name 10 potions”
    Okay now this i DO know!
    “Cloudshift Invisability potion endless and knowledge potion. Be aware these
    pecific potions may cause death if not used properly”
    And here are some of ursulas tips and tricks
    IF NOT USED PROPERLY IT MAY CAUSE EFFECT OF DEATH
    OR SEVERE INJURY
    She Prods A Liquid with her paw
    It instantly Plummets
    “Oops”
    The number 1 Scientist instantly barges in
    “WHAT THE WAS THAT”
    “YOU FOOL YOU IDIOTIC STUPID FOOL YOU DONT EVEN DESERVE A
    PELT”
    Ursula comes up behind her
    “What is this Crystal?!”
    “SHE BROKE A SUBSTANCE”
    “It’s okay!”
    “Its her first day for goodnesake” She mutters into crystals ear
    “BUT SHE BROKE THE RAREST ONE!!!”

    “Now that IS idiotic”
    “Please spare me”
    Ursula snorts “I dont spare nobody”
    “Okay thenn”
    “BYYYEEE”
    “NOBODY ESCAPES URSULA”
    She swims up to the surface.
    “I FORGOT ABOUT THE DRAGONSSSS”
    “Them they are right there” She strangles out
    “Wait a tick they are fine”
    “Heyyyy Dragons Watcha doinnn”
    They instantly attack her
    The next thing she goneee well at least they thought she was…

    At Camp
    “They should be back by now shouldnt they?” Lotus says worriedly
    “Yeah hahaha”
    Lotus glares, the looks pretty clear its an idiot this isnt something to laugh
    About look.
    “Can we go to our nests and get some sleeeep now?” Shadepelt complains
    “Fine whatever” Lotus snaps
    He curls up he hears a faint whispering in his ear
    “Shadepelltt shadepeltt” It whispered
    “Y-yes?” he stammered
    “We are the leaders of the place of light killers ” their

    Instead of feeling ashamed, sad, or worried he felt triumphant, proud all his
    Insults etc had finally paid off.
    “You shall get tips and advice from us from now on”
    “Yes of course but please tell me your names
    “No” the strange cat rasps
    “Mmm okayy then”
    “Get to training” a young she cat snaps
    “But I’m already trained” He moans in complaint
    “Young idiots think they are the best”
    “Well there moves are idiotic you hear me I-D-I-O-T-I-C”
    “Yeah i hear you, your yelling duh I’m not deaf”
    “Dont think your so smart-” She was cut off as the she cat strides through
    The brambles.
    “What do you think you are arguing about when we have training to
    Do”
    “In fact the tom over there” She flicks her tail to Shadepelt
    “Needs to learn everything in our ways” She says blinking
    Sympathetically in Shadepelts direction
    “Now” Her voice hardening
    “Get to it!”
    “Okaayy”
    “I SAID GET TO IT”
    Geesh SHE’s harsh
    “So tom”
    “My names Shadepelt” He snaps
    “Fine whatever Shadepelt”
    “Dont say it like that”
    “And who’s the boss around here?”
    “Fine you are but don’t go around thinking I’ll be so Obidient”
    She whips around
    “What happened to the training?” The older tom calls
    “You know what Shadepelt?”
    “If you shut up for the next moon, I’ll tell you our names”
    He stops in his tracks
    “Hmm, deal”

    “Okay this we call the Slide slip” she ducks and does a backwards leap and
    Lands on Shadepelt
    “Try that”
    He leaps and does it perfectly but lands on her head instead of her back
    She snorts
    “Try again”
    He does it Properly this time.

    A moon later
    Shadepelt sits up straight
    A thought comes to his mind
    If you shut up for a moon I’ll tell you our names
    “Good morning, Annoying” Shadepelt offers
    “No its not a good morning, you woke me up” She snaps
    “Now I shut up for a moon tell me your names”
    “Okay I am Shadow and the tom is Rust” she meows slowly
    “Okay thanks!” he says skipping away
    “Good morning to you Rust” He Mews
    He gasps
    “How do you know my name?”
    Shadow told me cause I shut up for a moon R-e-m-e-m-b-e-r?”
    “Oh yeah forgot”
    Rust: Why would shadow do that?!
    Shadow: EH Eh what? He shut up for a Moon so to be honest he deserves it
    “Umm Rust?” Shadepelt says confused of his absence
    “Oh uhh yeah sorry daydreaming”
    Shadow walks in in her usual stride
    “We better make you wake up or your so called *Pack* will find it suspicious” She says
    “See you tomorrow night?”
    “Yeah sure Shadow” He smiles
    He wakes up in his usual nest
    To see a shadow looming over him
    “Wake up Lazypants” Cloudmind says blankly
    “Cloudmind” He hissed
    “What if someone caught you?!”
    “Your OverCautious”
    “Okay okay but there is something important I have earnt my place in the place of light killers”
    She gasps
    She bounces with joy
    Managing to bundle into Lilypads *Secret* supply of potions for fighters
    If they were desperate they could make their opponent dumb
    She gets it on her skin
    Cloudmin-” he was abruptly cut off as she starts acting so Dumb
    Crab crab craaabbbbbbbb im gonna start acting dumb in 3, 2, 1
    “Hello Shadiepelltie”
    He starts tossing dirt around the camp
    “No no no no no!”
    “This can’t be there must be a way to undo this crisis!”
    Even worse she’ll start spilling out all our secrets for a plump mouse!
    Oh and to make matters worse lilypad or mallow isn’t here!
    Lotus snapped him out of his daze
    “Shadepelt Snap out of it will you!?”
    “Uhh sorry just daydreaming”
    “What were you day dreaming about?” She said lightly
    “Nosy” he snaps
    She lets out a small mrrow of laughter
    “Who put ants in your pants?”
    “Uhh, Cola, yes Cola did”
    “Give the kit a break Shadepelt!”
    “He’s a trainee” he says defiantly
    “Mm and who is his mentor?”
    “Uhh Whiteshift?”
    “Yeesh you don’t get it do you?”
    “It’s Cola’s second sunrise of training!”
    “Yeah yeah”
    “Moon its time for training!” Wavelap calls
    “Just a second!” She calls back
    “Bye Kalik! I got to go train okay?”
    “Bye see you later!”
    “Okay so we are going to go battle training and I’ll teach you some
    Basic moves”
    “Okay sure” She replies leaping up and down excitedly
    “This is the most basic okay?”
    “So you leap up and go onto my back and scratch me until I beg
    For mercy!”
    “But remember claws sheathed” she says more sternly
    “Seems worth it” She smiles and attacks her instantly
    “Remember what you said always be ready for attack”
    Wavelap gasps
    “STOP SNAKE!”
    She jumps in front of Moon snarling
    Preparing to leap on the snake
    A bramble shifted and another slithering snake appeared
    They both dive for Moon duck under Wavelaps legs and
    Get there aim
    She drags Moon and herself back to camp
    “Moon no”
    “Snake two Snakes got there kill” She gasps
    As she collapsed onto the ground
    “Wavelap” Rivermoon whispers
    “Wavelaapp” She grieves in horror
    “Moon?” Kalik asks
    “Its very rude to sleep in the middle of camp”
    “She’s dead idiot” Cola snaps
    “Wha-” She was abruptly cut off by wails of grief
    And horror
    A rabbit appears
    Right in front of moons paws
    She glances down
    Only to see it run away the moment she did.
    Lotus leaps up to the high branch
    “We have lost a fine trainee as well as a very good and caring
    Warrior”
    “Hey I ain’t dead!”
    Moon leaps up only to fall back down again
    “ANYONE KNOW HOW TO HEAL A SNAKEBITE?!” Lotus
    mews hurriedly
    “ME” Cola shrieks
    He races to the healers den
    Grabs 3 herbs chews them up and forcibly shoves them in Moons Nimble
    Mouth
    “Eww”
    “Eat them or die” Cola snaps
    “Jeese” Moon replies
    Chewing them
    Cola rolls his eyes and races over to Lola
    Pride shining in Lola’s eyes she dips her head
    “Rivermoon” Lotus calls
    The she cat hurries over
    “Yes Lotus”
    “Keep a close eye on Shadepelt will you?” She says grimly
    “Of course Lotus” She dips her head and races over to the nursery
    I am so lucky to have such loyal Warriors thaty I can trust

    Lotus smiles at the thought
    Then treks to her den to have some peace and quiet
    Here ya go!

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