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“Regrets upon a dream”
In the midst of us walking I heard a voice call out,
“Hey I never got your name.”
In came through one ear and out the next. This was just unreal. I could not believe I was here. It seemed way to unreal. I kept on walking why would someone want to know my name. The only one who knew me was Emma.
A little side note the beginning is supposed to not make the most sense cause like it says later on it’s her train of thought meaning she’s doesn’t have the sharpest thought train going on
Yea it’s a lot but honestly I barely post frequently cause of school so you have plenty of time. Hope you like them
Hey everyone I know it’s been a long time since I’ve been on here but honestly I’m in high school so yea it’s hard to make time so I’ll be here when I remember and have time I usually have spasms where I’m on constant for like 3 weeks so we’ll see
Until next time ( if you guys need to tell me something just comment)
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I’ve missed you so much!!!! I still remember you were and still are the first person on my tag lists!!!!!! I’m so glad you’re back! Boy, you must’ve had so many notifications XD
Girl you always made my day on here with your comments and I know I always saw my name first 🙂 it honestly feels good to write again I had 49 notifications XD
“Regrets upon a dream”
I got off the ground. I was lost. I was confused. I did not know what to think. I kept turning around hoping Emma would come to me. But everyone just kept staring at me. And then it just got worse I started hearing Emma yell my name. I was going CRAZY!!! But then I realize it just keeps getting mor…[Read more]
I heard some creaking of wood. Outside the horrifying door. That was the door that kept me from my freedom. And you know who’s fault that was.
My mother’s. She was always so bad at obeying my father. And the worst part was I had to be stuck in a room with her. It was a living ****. My mother kept saying all the…[Read more]
Sorry did not know that, that word was sensored. **** =agany
It was something else.
i think i can guess what was there anyway. it’s too bad that word is sensored (if i’m guessing correctly)
Wow! Only commeby is that it is a bithankyou short but I still love it!
“Regrets upon a dream”
I layed in my bed hating and wishing that they would not take me to the school. I must be here to protect my family and to support them. But what could I do I agreed to go to the school plus my father begged me to go for my own safety.
But I would never return. This is it my life is over. But I know Sab…[Read more]
Sorry that there is grammatical errors. I hate auto correct!!
Good job! I like how you described your character’s emotions very deeply!
Chapter!! You did make some improvements in explaining their emotions! 🙂 nice job! 🙂
Hi guys so here it is the first chapter of “True Colors”
I was out in the woods with my father. You heard a trail of breaking sticks and crunching leaves. We got deeper into the woods as I got deeper into thought.
My father has trained me to be the next Gaston but I don’t want to be. Why would I want to be someone who is such a rude per…[Read more]
Glad you guys liked it. I feel really good that my writing is being appreciated. 🙂
Very nice chapter!!! Plz tag me for this story as well! 😉
Oh my gosh. I LOVE IT! I cannit wait 4 chapter three!
Hi guys I am back got another bio for
True colors this one is Matts younger sister
School: evil but thinks she is good
Age: 14 almost 15
Parents: Gaston and Belle
Siblings: older brother
Life at home: She is stuck in her room all day with her mom there. They are treated like slaves by her father and brother.
Flaws: Full…[Read more]
Very nice bio!! What about her backstory? Her life at home is only a part of a brief summary or part of her life.
Hey SABRINA2013 I was just wondering when your starting your true colors book?
Great job! And nice fingerglow! 😉
By the way, check your notifications. Are you in for the email thing with Kat and Emma?
Well, ok, I get it. @sabrina2013, backstories are there to help us understand a little background of your character’s life, like a brief summary of their life, a special memory, or maybe a lasting effect that happened to them in the past that changed them forever that affected the future. Why do you think they’re called ‘backstories’? Backstories…[Read more]
Hi guys so I have had an amazing idea for a new story and I know I already have “Regrets upon a dream” And I know they just got into the schools but I think I can handle both stories. So it is
Bio Ps.it is very modern
Name: Matthias (Matt for short)
School: Good but thinks he’s evil
Siblings: younger sister…[Read more]
Cool bio! @emmal, I think “Life at home” is kinda the backstory, but she is missing flaws and talent. But nice job!! A bit more detail could help us visualize Matthias more, but cool enough!
@Evilerruler845 and @emmal I have one called defaults which is flaws. And talent is that he is good at weaponry (sorry if that is spelled wrong) nothing special like magic or something.
Bit more visualization: He is very tall. Has a narrow face. Is not slim and wimpy. When he walks he is straight. And looks confedent. But when he is angry he is…[Read more]
Yayy!! Thanks for using the name I came up with! I’m so excited!
Regrets upon a dream
I stayed up all night catching up on all the different kingdoms. Reading one by one. My eyes felt that they would fall out. They were so tired of reading. But I finally finished and went straight to bed. I put the the book on my night stand. Then all of a sudden a bunch of pictures fall. It was the…[Read more]
Hey, nice job! The grammar issues are gone! Great chapter!
Nice chapter!! I got a little confused in minor parts, but nice job! A bit more detail in explaining Sabrina’s emotions could help us understand what she’s going through. But good job! 🙂
Hi everyone I have not posted in a couple of days so I am here to say that I will post like twice a week when I used to post everyday. So I will post the following chapter of “Regrets upon a dream” and I will start my new story about Belle and Gaston getting married and having kids. It will be called “True colors”
Until next time ☺
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