sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 3 months ago

    Chapter 17
    “Regrets upon a dream”
    POV Sabrina
    In the midst of us walking I heard a voice call out,
    “Hey I never got your name.”
    In came through one ear and out the next. This was just unreal. I could not believe I was here. It seemed way to unreal. I kept on walking why would someone want to know my name. The only one who knew me was Emma.
    I…[Read more]

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        A little side note the beginning is supposed to not make the most sense cause like it says later on it’s her train of thought meaning she’s doesn’t have the sharpest thought train going on

          nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Good start!

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Thanks @nadea
        Wanna be tagged?

          nadea replied 2 years, 3 months ago

          Sure, but, this is the first chapter of your RP that I have read. I’ll read the first 16 chapters on your activity.

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 3 months ago

        Yea it’s a lot but honestly I barely post frequently cause of school so you have plenty of time. Hope you like them
        @nadea

        blueberrymcmuffin replied 2 years, 2 months ago

        nice

    sabrina2013 posted an update 2 years, 5 months ago

    Hey everyone I know it’s been a long time since I’ve been on here but honestly I’m in high school so yea it’s hard to make time so I’ll be here when I remember and have time I usually have spasms where I’m on constant for like 3 weeks so we’ll see
    Until next time ( if you guys need to tell me something just comment)
    Tag list (RUD)
    [Read more]

        emmal replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        SABRINAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
        I’ve missed you so much!!!! I still remember you were and still are the first person on my tag lists!!!!!! I’m so glad you’re back! Boy, you must’ve had so many notifications XD

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 5 months ago

          EMMAAAA!!!!!!!!!
          Girl you always made my day on here with your comments and I know I always saw my name first 🙂 it honestly feels good to write again I had 49 notifications XD
          @emmal

        nicoleofavalontowers replied 2 years, 5 months ago

        Welcome back!!!!

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 8 months ago

    Chapter 16
    “Regrets upon a dream”
    POV Sabrina
    I got off the ground. I was lost. I was confused. I did not know what to think. I kept turning around hoping Emma would come to me. But everyone just kept staring at me. And then it just got worse I started hearing Emma yell my name. I was going CRAZY!!! But then I realize it just keeps getting mor…[Read more]

        princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Good! Possibly my 3rd favourite chapter!

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Which is your favorite? @Princessrobyn1

          princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          12th chapter @sabrina2013

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 8 months ago

    Chapter 2
    “True Colors”
    POV Maya
    I heard some creaking of wood. Outside the horrifying door. That was the door that kept me from my freedom. And you know who’s fault that was.
    My mother’s. She was always so bad at obeying my father. And the worst part was I had to be stuck in a room with her. It was a living ****. My mother kept saying all the…[Read more]

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Sorry did not know that, that word was sensored. **** =agany
        It was something else.

          thedeviloffire replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          i think i can guess what was there anyway. it’s too bad that word is sensored (if i’m guessing correctly)

          thedeviloffire replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          and it’s agony, not agany

        espilce replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Nice chapter

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks you wanna be tagged??
          @espilce

          espilce replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Sure

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        @thedeviloffire
        Thanks for the correction!!

          princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Wow! Only comment is that it is a bit short but I understand when you can’t come up with ideas or you’re too tired :’)
          Still great tho!

        princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Wow! Only commeby is that it is a bithankyou short but I still love it!

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Yea it’s true could not think that much for her, but you the difficulty of being a writer.
          @Princessrobyn1
          <3

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 8 months ago

    Chapter 15
    “Regrets upon a dream”
    POV Emma
    I layed in my bed hating and wishing that they would not take me to the school. I must be here to protect my family and to support them. But what could I do I agreed to go to the school plus my father begged me to go for my own safety.
    But I would never return. This is it my life is over. But I know Sab…[Read more]

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Sorry that there is grammatical errors. I hate auto correct!!

        emmal replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Good job! I like how you described your character’s emotions very deeply!

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Thank you!! 😀 In my previous chapters some people told me to express the characters emotions more so I try my best.
          @emmal

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Cool
        Chapter!! You did make some improvements in explaining their emotions! 🙂 nice job! 🙂

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks 🙂

        princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Love love love it!

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Glad you do!! You always give me so much confedence @Princessrobyn1
          Love you❤

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 8 months ago

    Hi guys so here it is the first chapter of “True Colors”
    POV Matt
    I was out in the woods with my father. You heard a trail of breaking sticks and crunching leaves. We got deeper into the woods as I got deeper into thought.
    My father has trained me to be the next Gaston but I don’t want to be. Why would I want to be someone who is such a rude per…[Read more]

        emmal replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Great chapter! I can’t wait for more!!

        roseprincess replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Tag me

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Will do!! Glad you liked it 🙂

        sing-girl-sing replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Cool chapter can’t wait for chapter two!!!

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Glad you guys liked it. I feel really good that my writing is being appreciated. 🙂

        ranumasha replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        that was awesome

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Thanks!! You wanna be tagged?? @ranumasha

          sing-girl-sing replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Hey please tag me!!!!

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Very nice chapter!!! Plz tag me for this story as well! 😉

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Of course

        princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Oh my gosh. I LOVE IT! I cannit wait 4 chapter three!
        <3

        sing-girl-sing replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Oh my gosh I totally didn’t see that you’d already tagged me haha

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 8 months ago

    Hi guys I am back got another bio for
    True colors this one is Matts younger sister
    Name: Maya
    Gender:female
    School: evil but thinks she is good
    Age: 14 almost 15
    Parents: Gaston and Belle
    Siblings: older brother
    Life at home: She is stuck in her room all day with her mom there. They are treated like slaves by her father and brother.
    Flaws: Full…[Read more]

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Very nice bio!! What about her backstory? Her life at home is only a part of a brief summary or part of her life.

        sing-girl-sing replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Hey SABRINA2013 I was just wondering when your starting your true colors book?

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Hi @sing-girl-sing um probably today or tomorrow.

        emmal replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Great bio! Be sure to add her backstory and fingerglow color! 😉

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Right her Fingerglow is silver with pink streaks.
          @Evilerruler845 and @emma tbh I don’t really like to do backstory in my characters because I don’t see the point of it. Please don’t feel offended.

        emmal replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Great job! And nice fingerglow! 😉
        By the way, check your notifications. Are you in for the email thing with Kat and Emma?

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Well, ok, I get it. @sabrina2013, backstories are there to help us understand a little background of your character’s life, like a brief summary of their life, a special memory, or maybe a lasting effect that happened to them in the past that changed them forever that affected the future. Why do you think they’re called ‘backstories’? Backstories…[Read more]

          evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          When I said be wise, I meant because …

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          Ok I see what you mean, will do it next time. @Evilerruler845

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 8 months ago

    Hi guys so I have had an amazing idea for a new story and I know I already have “Regrets upon a dream” And I know they just got into the schools but I think I can handle both stories. So it is
    “True colors”
    Bio Ps.it is very modern
    Name: Matthias (Matt for short)
    Gender:Male
    School: Good but thinks he’s evil
    Age: 16
    Siblings: younger sister…[Read more]

        emmal replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Be sure to add flaws and backstory! Otherwise awesome bio! 😉

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Cool bio! @emmal, I think “Life at home” is kinda the backstory, but she is missing flaws and talent. But nice job!! A bit more detail could help us visualize Matthias more, but cool enough!

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          @Evilerruler845 and @emmal I have one called defaults which is flaws. And talent is that he is good at weaponry (sorry if that is spelled wrong) nothing special like magic or something.
          Bit more visualization: He is very tall. Has a narrow face. Is not slim and wimpy. When he walks he is straight. And looks confedent. But when he is angry he is…[Read more]

        princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

        Yayy!! Thanks for using the name I came up with! I’m so excited!

          sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 8 months ago

          No thank you for the name. And I am also excited

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 9 months ago

    Chapter 14
    Regrets upon a dream
    POV Sabrina
    I stayed up all night catching up on all the different kingdoms. Reading one by one. My eyes felt that they would fall out. They were so tired of reading. But I finally finished and went straight to bed. I put the the book on my night stand. Then all of a sudden a bunch of pictures fall. It was the…[Read more]

        sabrina2013 replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        Sorry that it’s short

        nicoleofavalontowers replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        Hey, nice job! The grammar issues are gone! Great chapter!

        evilerruler845 replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        Nice chapter!! I got a little confused in minor parts, but nice job! A bit more detail in explaining Sabrina’s emotions could help us understand what she’s going through. But good job! 🙂

        princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        Omg! Love it =)
        the length is a bit short as you said, but what malters is quality not quantity!

    sabrina2013 posted an update in the group RP Level 0: The Clearing 2 years, 9 months ago

    Hi everyone I have not posted in a couple of days so I am here to say that I will post like twice a week when I used to post everyday. So I will post the following chapter of “Regrets upon a dream” and I will start my new story about Belle and Gaston getting married and having kids. It will be called “True colors”
    Until next time ☺
    Tag list…[Read more]

        princessrobyn1 replied 2 years, 9 months ago

        So excited for true colors!!!

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