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I stared down at Evie’s healed leg, unable to speak. Despite my calm demanour, inside l was gasping for air.
She stared up at me. “How?”
I had to be calm. For Evie. “Well, my guess is that you always had this power within you. It just was… waiting. Until it was truly needed.” I was pretty sure about this.
She looked up at me in wonder. “But… that means that l’m not useless. I’m not disabled. I’m just like anyone else.”
I hated to do this to her. “I’m sorry, Evie. But people are scared of things they don’t know about. And this power of yours… it’s unheard of. People having different magic to the four elements. It’s just… abnormal.”
Tears welled up in her eyes, and for a moment l thought they would spill over. But she straightened up, her mind set.
“No, you’re right,” she said, her voice cracking.
My heart shattered into a million pieces. “I don’t mean you, Evie. Never you.”
She didn’t look up. “You don’t know what it’s like, Anya. To be looked at like you are nothing, to be looked at with pity from even the youngest servant.”
Anger coursed through me like a rocket. “Actually, Evie, I do. I might not be powerless, but I am not a princess. And sometimes, being powerful can be worse than being powerless – the children scared to go near me in case I blew them away, the women looking at me pityingly as I flew alone, my one and only friend leaving me out of jealousy.”
She leaned closer. “Not your only friend, Anya.”
I wanted to do it, And she was sitting so close, her eyes so warm that l knew I could do it.
And so l cursed the stars as l leaned in and kissed her.
I realise I may have lost half my fans doing this, but who cares? Comment if you want to be tagged or untagged, but don’t be mean. Constructive criticiam is welcome, as well as predictions and character suggestions. Queenie, you owe me for Jerome.
lol yes I do. The only problem is, I am not the best at making up characters. Okay, I’ll give it ago.
Desperately in love with Anya, hates Evie for taking that away from him. He could be another servant or something or even (just writing down my thoughts as I think them) he could be a prince that has come as one of them Evie has to pick, you know, like she gets a selection and has to pick one to marry. Then he sees Anya and falls in love with her.
Another servant in league with those people who want to bring he royals down -forgot what they’re called- but hates all of them with a passion unlike Anya. She tries to make Anya ask personal questions to the royals, or to do something that trouble them. I don’t know how Anya would react to this.
If you do- for some reason- end up using one of these characters, feel free to change the names, they’re not really my strong point.
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!
PS I don’t think anyone will care (I might be wrong), everyone here is really supportive.
LGBTQ characters are not represented enough. Also, @geek is right, everyone is super supportive on this site. I don't think it'll matter.
Yes, so far everyone loves this twist. (ok, so far—but anyway) it’s not a reason to stop supporting your stories. WRITE MORE!!
this is amazing! it’s totally fine, i’m bi, and i think that it’s better to write LGBTQ charachters!