My Ranking Points
Blackmail. Such an **** word, isn’t it? When you hear it, what do you think? Anger? Revnge? Evil? No-one can hide from who they are. It’s just a matter of… speeding things up. And if you get a little personal gain from it, then is that really such a bad thing?
At least, those are the lies I tell myself.
I know inside that it’s a bad thing. But I can’t let Anya just throw away everything she’s ever worked for, can I? Can I?
I watched in wonder as the light cast shadows on the walls of my darkened walls. Finally, I stopped playing with my power – it was time for the Anniversary Ball.
The Anniversary Ball was a commeroration of the day we split into kingdoms. The day where
we they were given their elemental gifts. The day when the war started.
In my beautiful sea-green gown, I walked down the stairs and into the ballroom. There was a Reader standing on the stage for the annual storytelling.
Once upon a time, there was only one kingdom. But one day, the king died, leaving his four sons to fight over the throne. The war raged for many years, until finally, the Gods thought of a solution. The Water Goddess gave the king of the Fire Kingdom, Frederick, the Fire power, and made the first Fire sorceror. The Earth God gave the second king, Andreas, the Earth power, creating the first Earth sorceror. The Air Goddess gave the third prince, Carlos, the Air power, making the first Air sorceror. And the Water God gave the one daughter, Eloise, the Water power, and created the first Water sorceror.
I glanced to the side, and spotted Anya beckoning me to the empty storeroom. I walked over to her and closed the door softly – even though I felt like slamming it. “What?” I hissed, trying to inject the right amount of venom into my voice. I don’t think I managed it. “Come to flirt with Theo again?”
She looked… ashamed. “No.” She sounded tired. Maybe she was. Tired of me being – jealous. I suddenly realised that that was what I thought. I was jealous of Theo – jealous that he could be with her whenever he wanted, jealous that she like him, jealous that I couldn’t be with her. Just jealous.
I leaned in. She looked startled for a minute, then kissed me.
It was like the first kiss. I felt like I was floating, flying above the earth. I felt like – this sounded really cheesy – I could do anything.
Until the door opened. And everything went to h*ll.
“WHAT ARE YOU DOING????!!!!” Oh, no, it was my father. “HOW COULD YOU????!!!!”
“Pl-please, fa-father,” I stuttered. He fixed his gaze on Anya.
“GET OUT OF HERE AND NEVER COME BACK!!!!” His burning eyes swivelled to face me. “And her…” he started, his voice dangerously quiet. “Take her to the dungeons.”
Hope you liked this. Sorry if it was too intense. Can someone other than Queenie and Agathag please, please comment. Please?
Anyway. Comment if you want to be tagged or untagged, please feel free to give constructive criticism if you want to.
I don’t care, I’m gonna comment anyway. THIS WAS SO GOOD!
No, I just want another person to comment. Feel free to comment as much as you like.
Can you go on the coven?
Wow thats so good it might be a bit ittense but awsome …
But in the story of the four kingdoms you said the king had four sons but then you said he had a daughter who became the water sorcere..
And if she was bored in that speach cause shes heard it so many times you could show it like doing the story and then in her thoughts go like Blah bla bla
But she’s not bored. She likes learning about the history of things. And I did make a mistake on the storytelling. Just read it as he died and four chaldremn fought for the throne
lol, but you know I’m your biggest fan, after all, I did help you (not really, I just gave suggestions that you didn’t use until you came up with it on your own) make this, and I gave you two characters. I mean, come on, I might as well have just gone and bought a t-shirt saying, I love The Elemental Rebellion. (BTW, are those actually on sale? I would love to purchase one)
You know what I mean?
I loved this! I’m really happy that Evie and Anya are together. Please post the next chapter soon! I can’t was to see how Evie escapes the dungeons and how Anya comes back!
lol sorry if I comment too much but your story is sooooooooooo good!!