schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 10 months ago

    Hi guys! I AM HERE WITH THE FIRST CHAPTER TO MY NEW STORY! I LIKE CAPS LOCK BTW! I don’t really know what the title of my story should be so if you could suggest some. I created some bios for my story that you could check out at @schoolofevil. Also, if you haven’t heard my friend, @demonz4life, has joined the ever-never army and she might post s…[Read more]

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        SAFE!!!
        I LOVE IT!

          theheartofgold101 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

          SAFE! πŸ™‚ That’s a funny term! πŸ˜‰

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 10 months ago

    Hi guys! Just wanted to say my friend has joined the ever-never army and sometimes I might post under her name or she might post under my name because why not. She is under the username @demonz4life I think. Anyways here are some more bios to my story!

    HERE IS SOME MORE BIOS IN MY STORY I’M GOING TO MAKE PEOPLE! I AM THINKING OF A TITLE SO YA IF…[Read more]

        schoolofevil replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        OKAY YOU KNOW THE *****! IT”S NOT A CURSE WORD OR A ***** WORD BUT FOR SOME REASON IT CAME OUT LIKE THAT FOR THOSE YOUNGER VIEWERS

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Cool!

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Awesome!

        fsa161 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Love it!

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 10 months ago

    Hi guys! I have a question, what does SAFE mean?

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        SAFE is (I think) Super Amazing Fantastic Epic, as invented by @bostonhorsez2.

        bostonhorsez2 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Aww….you guys remembered! And I messed up my own saying….great job Boston, real professional…

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 10 months ago

    Sup Peps(People)! Hi. I know I said I will continue with my old story but I’m not really into it so I’m just going to make a new one, but I will continue to make the other one, just not post any chapters. . Also, sorry I haven’t been on for a while. HERE ARE SOME BIO’S IN MY STORY!THERE IS ALSO MORE CHARACTERS BUT HERE IS JUST 3! I ALSO LEA…[Read more]

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        Cool!

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 10 months ago

        I love it!

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hello people of the world! πŸ™‚ I have two questions. One – I’m really confused about this: Is there Elders on level 1? Two – I don’t have a second question

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Yeah there are Elders. I’m not one… πŸ™

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 1: Great Lawn 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hello people of the world! πŸ™‚ It’s me! Do u guys sill remember me? cause I wasn’t for a while…
    I know I said I would post my story once I revised the whole thing, but I’m not. I change my mind a lot. Anyways here is a better first chapter to my story. I also wanted to give it a new title because ‘Daughter of Death’ Is sorta blah, but I don’t…[Read more]

        schoolofevil replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Okay So you know the ***s, IT IS NOT A BAD WORD I KNOW IT SEEMS LIKE THAT BUT IT”S NOT! Okay just wanted to make sure you guys knew that.

        illa replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        great i loved it

        impossiblegirl replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Awesome!

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hello people of the world! πŸ™‚ hi, sorry I haven’t actually posted any POV yet. Im very confused how I’m supposed to do this. Could you explain cause i don’t get how to write a POV including your characters without writing something you don’t agree with.

        solarstar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I’m not sure what you’re asking.

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Hi! Well, when you write a POV you might have something surprising that the other person didn’t expect and that’s great. You write according to what you want to do, and we don’t really have arguments about “well I didn’t want that to happen” or things like that.

        As for actually writing the POV, scroll below for examples. I also commented on your…[Read more]

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hello people of the world! πŸ™‚ So how do I get started writing A POV for my character? And what’s going on in the story, where con I go to catch up?

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Hello! Well, it’s practically the same as writing a chapter, except you can choose to meet other people’s characters and there’s a cycle of taking turns POVing. This is probably the thing I’m worst explaining.. Example:

        Newt’s POV:

        “HEY TOMMY!” I screamed.
        He looked back.

        Tommy’s POV:

        I looked back.
        “Nope.”

        Heh. That was terrible.…[Read more]

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Okay. Thanks for the feed back. I will use spell check and proof read.
    About the clothes, what kind of clothes are they? Are they like the 16 hundreds clothes? Or is more modern but not to modern. I’m kinda confused what kind of clothes your talking about.
    Fixed appearance: She has brown/black hair and it is up to a little below her shoulders. W…[Read more]

        schoolofevil replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        SORRY ABOUT ALL THE TROUBLE!

        fairytalegirl123 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        The school is in the center of all the regions. And for the clothes, I dunno, like, corsets and wigs like George Washington wore? Yeah stuff like that.

          solarstar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          The school is in the center of all the regions. There’s a map I drew and more info on the doc: tinyurl.com/RPLevel2PlagueDoc

        sherlock replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        I believe the characters in this RP wear regency era clothing:

        Mountain View

          solarstar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          You can basically pick clothing from any era pre-1910 you want, as the pre-schoolmaster uniforms in the textbook were kind of a jumble of different stuff. I chose to use regency-ish clothes with russian influences (I know this makes no historical sense…. don’t sue me), because I’m a huge Jane Austen nerd and I built off russian folk culture for…[Read more]

          schoolofevil replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Thanks

          nightshade11 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Yep. Personally I used Victorian since I’ve been interested as of late

    schoolofevil posted an update in the group RP Level 2: Blue Forest 3 years, 11 months ago

    Hello people of the world! πŸ™‚ its me… Sorry about the other post, I coundlt sleep last night so I did that, but whatever. Okay I am just going to create a new character but keep the name Angelina cause it’s my name, because my other character stinks. anyaways here is a bio that acutally makes sense:
    Name: Angelina Petterson
    Age: 14
    School:…[Read more]

        em94 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        This bio is a great start, but there are a couple of things you might want to change slightly. For the clothing, jeans and a t-shirt is probably a little too modern for the setting, and we usually add a little more detail too. Other than that, it’s good!

          schoolofevil replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          Okay. Thanks for the feed back. I will use spell check and proof read.
          About the clothes, what kind of clothes are they? Are they like the 16 hundreds clothes? Or is more modern but not to modern. I’m kinda confused what kind of clothes your talking about.
          Fixed appearance: She has brown/black hair and it is up to a little below her shoulders.…[Read more]

        solarstar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Yeah, I agree with what Em said. You need to add more detail in appearance, backstory, and in clothing, you need way more detail and also to use non-modern clothing. As well, it would be nice if you could proofread to catch your *************** mistakes and make it clearer for the reader (‘dozen’t’ ‘dosent’ ‘unefected’ ‘meat’, to point out a…[Read more]

          solarstar replied 3 years, 11 months ago

          The stars are spelling / grammar. I didn’t put a space before and after the slash and for some reason it starred it.

        nightshade11 replied 3 years, 11 months ago

        Great start! What the others said basically.

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