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HELLO! I am working on a story about a mother and her daughter. They must travel across their country to stop a Evil Civilization that is rising. This is a bo about the mother in this book, Martha Harrington.Please give feedback, even if you hate the characters bio. I want to know what I’m doing right and wrong. Thank you!
NAME- Martha Leslie Harrison
AGE- 34 (22 when she had Phobie)
FAMILY- Phobie Grace Harrison, daughter, and Franklyn Harrison, husband
APPERANCE- very skinny, high cheekbones, bony fingers. She has short hair, cut like most boys. Its brown and plain. Her nose is lightly sprinkled with a few freckles, and her face is smooth, leaving no signs of acne. Martha often smells of horses and their droppings because of how much time she spends with horses. She has a wide smile, unlike her daughters small lips. Martha is much tanner than Phobie, too, because she is outside much more.
CLOTHING- If its a casual day, Martha might wear a crop-top and some skinny jeans. She also has a like of leggings and sweatshirts, too. Her nails are always painted and she always has rings on. Her shoes include flats, sneakers, and riding boots.
PERSONALITY- Sometimes, like when she’s around animals, Martha is very much like a child. Even around her own daughter. After they run away, however, Martha becomes much more parent like. She’s more orderly and more demanding. She likes animals, the outdoors, music, and the presents of her daughter. Her weakness is a helpless injured animal, specifically a deer or bunny.
FLAWS- She can be tempted very easily. Its incredibaly hard to tell if some ones lying for her.
I hope you enjoyed it. If you have suggestions or want to be tagged, let me know.
Also, I have a name for the story. The City of Gold.