My Ranking Points
Chapter 1: part-2 Ember POV (had to cut first chapter into 2 parts cause it was too long)
as Ember looked around she saw other girls coming out of the ground all beautiful. Ember then felt a bit self conscious, but couldn’t help but grin a little it was beautiful and impossible not to love. She looked up at the school and found it breathtaking. “um excuse me!” Ember snapped back to attention and saw a girl in front of her. She had rich dark brown skin, silky black hair and hazel almond shaped eyes. “ok Hi! So I’m Lilith and I see your our reader yes?” Ember nodded her head gleefully she couldn’t believe she hadn’t wanted to come here at first “ great thought so” Lilith continued “just wanted to say stay out of my way and don’t expect to get too many top ranks and we’ll all have great year bye!” and with that Lilith went to get spread the message to others. Ember blinked for a bit she believed that girl could’ve been a bit nicer but decided to shrug it off. Ember got into line with the rest of the girls and went inside. Inside she was amazed to see fairies and nymphs handing out books and schedules when Ember got hers at the top it read “Ember of the Woods Beyond Room 51 purity” Ember raced up the stairs to her room on the door it said “Welcome Becca, Rowen ,Betty, and Ember” Ember opened the door to her room and saw a ******* her bed texting. The girl had dark brown hair with ***** blonde highlights, ravishing olive skin and big blue eyes. The girl looked up from her phone for a second then rolled her eyes and continued texting without a word. Ember was about to say something until she looked on the other side of the room. She saw a girl with light pink fluffy hair, silver eyes and fair skin throwing things out of a bag. When she turn around she squealed in excitement. “Hi I’m Rowen that’s Becca!” she said pointing to the other girl. “you must be Ember! Great to meet you! Don’t mind Becca she has a bad attitude most of the time!” Becca looked from her phone and glared at Rowen who hid behind Ember. “Well nice to meet you two!” Ember said while trying to reassure Rowen she was ok. Becca groaned loudly and got off her bed and handed Ember a pink uniform. “put this on then go to the auditorium for welcoming” she snapped and with that she sashayed out the door. “well you herd her lets go!” Rowen piped. Ember put on her uniform which she found a bit puffy but over all ok and followed Rowen out the door but before they left she asked “Wait who’s Betty?” Rowen went wide eyed and looked around as something would pop out “No one you should worry about now!” and with Rowen pulled her to the auditorium.