- Load More
Thank you to everyone who supported me (even if it was on another account)
@peppy , @princesssammy , @athene , @abhats , @arian2 , @shan , @wits12345 , @gracelynofmadinvale , @dixie , @whiteswan333 , @peelrockthemusic , @heart , @lenardgantalaosophiandagathafriends , @leslie191234 and @sephtis25 .
Hey, thanks. Nice to see that there’s still people left from those times.
I’m getting nostalgic now.
People say I’m sick in the mud.
I just like feeling the cold earth under my toes.
Don’t need to dress up
Or go anywhere but my front yard.
Can I help it if my skin glows?
It has attracted ships,birds,
And the unwanted attention
Of gods from a far.
Frey couldn’t even ask me himself.
Sent his servant to…[Read more]
once upon a story in the woods far far away on the violet line a prince named shan have arrived on the school for good he saw a girl whose her soul is very dark the girl is considered as a witch,an evergirl from nettle forest have arrived in school…[Read more]
on the chapter 2 you all gonna know what was the witch name cause my characters are just few so i can’t name the witch
This chapter was great. But it was a little difficult for me to understand what was being said and what was happening in general. Like Flaw said, paragraphs will really help. And also, whenever a new person starts talking you start a new line. Here’s an example.
“Hey, who are you?”
“I am Lenard prince of Netherwood.” See how I started 2 different…[Read more]
Oh little red riding hood and the frog princess.
Those are both original tales.
Do you mind up at least changing them slightly, adding a original flare how you see the stories maybe rather then how they are already written.
Great story, though they are already written!
Though keep writing. 🙂
AUTHORS NOTE:This isn’t a story this is the starting of my war zone so pleas read mine
THE GOOD AND EVIL WAR
The good defend,the evil attack.So many people where scare of what gonna happen.So Sophie and Agatha where fighting for a peace in the half world in the…[Read more]
shan you put me in your mention can we talk a few minutes please
He hasn’t been on in a week and last time he was looking for you.
So I don’t think he’s on right now maybe talk at school or arrange a time to meet up if you know each other in RL. ^_^
here’s my new bio
name:keir of netherwood
fairy tale:tom thumb
pets:dog(lassy) horse(mynimis) dragon(marelia) cat(ginger patty)
talents:making a trial at the clearing,dancing at the ball,singing in my new house and making story books of my…[Read more]
my age is also 9 i’m sorry if i wrong my age^_^
I’m guessing English is not your first launguage
its true i’m not an english i’m an chinese-filipino
Really? Thats cool! I’m half English half South Korean, but I grew up and live in England. My mum (Korean) works in England and my dad (English) works for Koreans! You’re really good with English anyway! 🙂
That makes sense.
Seeing some of your sentences are flipped/ muddled a little bit. ^_^
I know Taiwan! Anyway, my Mum speaks good English but she flips the sentence order round sometimes and she used to mix up ps with fs. We always had a good laugh when she called us for “suffer”.